| #1 john[101730] |
| adsl-63-202-178-234.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
1st
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| #2 Dino Din[101731] |
| dynamic-149-163.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
damn, could some very nice site admin add a quotation mark "
Add it at the beginning of the name for the second battle image, ie Battle2.jpg . Otherwise, I'm not really gonna resubmit... it's just 1 typo arrrgggh. |
| #3 Enforcer[101732] |
| 24-240-40-13.hsacorp.net |
It is decent for a first BR, and I think you could have been a little less rude at the start. That alone is probably going to give the reviewers a foul taste in the reviewers mouths.
I think it could have used highlighting on the names, please stop alternating between Red and Artius though. A spell and grammar check would be nice too. I especially enjoyed this for some reason:<i/>Now, my troops, sensing a possible, advantage, charge back up the middle to return to their original task.</i><i>
I would give this a 6, 7 if you're feeling generous. |
| #4 Argh....[101733] |
| 24-240-40-13.hsacorp.net |
| no html=bad |
#5  [101735] |
| imsbbcf09b.netvigator.com |
Dino press alt-F4 to reduce lag
T.T |
| #6 BOBBY357[101736] |
| spider-wb071.proxy.aol.com |
| nice job, Dino. More HTML would be good, but overall, not bad. I'd say 7.5. gw. |
| #7 evnafets[101737] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
Yay for another Strifeshadow report!
Agreed, it was a little confusing with you switching between first person and third person points of view. Pick one method of referring to the players and stick to it.
Well done overall though.
Cheers, evnafets
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| #8 Dino Din[101738] |
| dynamic-149-163.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
| not funny bp |
| #9 CrackHeadJeb[101739] |
| mu-196246.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Very little to gripe about. Some huge paragraphs, but that didn't detract that much from the report.
While the writing wasn't perfect, it was (mostly) clear what was happening at all times. The game selection was good too.
In my humble opinion, I'd say that this was an 8. Nice job.
-CHJ |
| #10 Zileas[101740] |
| STARCRACK.MIT.EDU |
nifty :)
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| #11 Enforcer[101741] |
| 24-240-40-13.hsacorp.net |
| CHJ:Ah....well, color me stupid. His first comment, the one about people saying "good first report", threw me off. :P |
| #12 Eradicate~Me[101742] |
| pa-millscreek2a-123.buf.adelphia.net |
| ms paint ;[ |
| #13 Litz-C)8[101743] |
| spider-wb014.proxy.aol.com |
Good first BR. . . ;]
7-8
--Litz |
| #14 Monty Pylon[101745] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| I never thought I would live to see the day when you would post something...again. A nice report with some good pics. My only complaint is that if someone who didn't play or know what SS is would be lost in a few minutes. Other than that, its good to see a SS report that will probably get gold. |
| #15 Whoahhj00[101746] |
| 213.161.167.223 |
| WOW what an opening! LOL! |
| #16 Psyonic_Reaver[101749] |
| 1Cust152.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| ^--Wants StrifeShadow. D'oh! Everytime I read a SS report it makes me want to rush out and buy the game, cept it hasnt come out yet...IMHO I'd give this an 8. So what if he had no HTML, he still showed what was happening by his pics and how he worded the battles. Keep it up! |
| #17 Diluvio[101750] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
| this was ok, but i qouldn't recommend it to a friend. 7 |
| #18 Diluvio[101751] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
| yes, i do realize i spelled it "qouldn't", im boyqotting the letter "c". |
| #19 Sere[101753] |
| cf3k-4.lqy.tsnz.net |
Jesus dino, It must be your writing style, but I didn't recognise the fight untill after I read it all and whent back to look over the pics (damn dialup), saw Art's "interesting" comment, then realized that I've already seen this replay.
So either your style is misleading, or my memory is on the fritz =] |
| #20 [e2]Squad[101760] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
| gw gw, considering you only have ms paint, and made such good pics, this deserves at least an eight. =) |
| #21 Shadow D'Arc[101761] |
| spider-mtc-ta074.proxy.aol.com |
It sucked.
1.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #22 stonecoldnewbie[101765] |
| 24.245.65.200 |
not bad
7 |
| #23 [SM]Strega~F[101768] |
| proxy4.senet.com.au |
asfdafsdh!!^#%*#!&
You used MS Paint and STILL made better pics than I do with PSP! Grr....
Anyways, I've never played or read anything about SS (except reports) and I understand it reasonably well. I just liken the units to those of starcraft somewhat, and piece it together from there.
Nice report.
Strega |
| #24 [SM]Strega~F[101769] |
| proxy6.senet.com.au |
Oh yeah, I have some questions for the people involved in making SS.
1) When is it going to be released?
2) Will it be released in Australia?
3) Can I have a discount?
4) Will you strike a deal with Blizzard and have SS hosted on b.net?
Thanks,
Strega |
| #25 kalle[101772] |
| hkiedu189242.edu.hel.fi |
| that game sure looks ugly |
| #26 [ScV][101780] |
| cache7.ihug.com.au |
why does every one say "no html = bad"??
Any way, nice report. Makes me want SS even more now ^^
I feel a new BR coming on.
Good to Go
ScV |
| #27 Raider[101795] |
| wkstn113-76.village-c.georgetown.edu |
Good report. Unlike many people, I liked your beginning, hehe. Despite the fact that I know only the very minimum about SS, this was easy to follow.
The only problem I had was with the collages. The pictures themselves were fine, but due to color choice, they sorta blended into the background, and did not stand out like they should.
All, in all, good report, and nice to see one about SS. Rating? Hmm tough one. I'd say 7. |
| #28 Dino Din[101802] |
| dynamic-149-163.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
| heh, news page I'm so cool. But will it get rated? |
#29  [101810] |
| ct91955-a.richmnd1.in.home.com |
Solid report. Nice to see a Strifeshadow report. I'm still going to buy the game when it comes out, mainly as a thanks for the good time spent on the beta. I'm not sure how much I'll play it though... :(
7
Dref |
| #30 fence aka zerzorizorzerz[101813] |
| as-7-237-tyl.cox-internet.com |
good, but the fact that you use microshit's software is glaring... all the "microsoft extensions" to the quite adequate ascii character set, which translate into little "?"s when viewed with non micro shaft
fixzerzor fixzir |
| #31 Roaddog[101816] |
| cr271408-a.pr1.on.wave.home.com |
Wow
first time a 7 ever made it to the front page? |
| #32 killa[101818] |
| hsa080.pool028.at101.earthlink.net |
strifeshadow sux ass
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| #33 BOBBY357[101878] |
| spider-wb023.proxy.aol.com |
| killa, do us all a favor and go fuck your mom. oh wait, thats your dad. sorry. |
| #34 SupeRCoD[101962] |
| 63-224-57-9.dsl.uswest.net |
that was pretty good for a first report
i would give it a 9
-_-; |
| #35 Samael[102245] |
| 212.250.100.122 |
The report itself was very good, 8-9
I don't know the game so i didn't really enjoy it, but i could follow it easy, i would still give it 8-9.gw |
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