| #1 Diluvio[97379] |
| AC8B43F9.ipt.aol.com |
| wow, im so goo at this, i must be a jeanius. haha, boy this sucked, but was fun to read, brought back some old memories of mine that i wish were burned from my cerebrum. |
| #2 luae42[97380] |
| 64-60-21-42-cust.telepacific.net |
| third |
| #3 WarLeaderJustin[97384] |
| adsl-64-171-78-140.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| holy fucking shit, fan fic in the hole. |
| #4 tercal[97385] |
| sdn-ar-002njnewaP139.dialsprint.net |
well...at least you did admit you pulled it out of your ass.
"Radiation makes us good"
haha...really hope you werent lookin for good commentary from this. If it was rated, it should get a 7, only because it sucks so much that through sheer overall suckiness it seems better. If that seems confusing to anyone, it helps to drink heavily before thinking about it. |
| #5 Diluvio[97386] |
| AC997D0D.ipt.aol.com |
| I actually don't want this rated, it was just something funny I found in an old box while moving to my new house. Those were the good times, me and my nerdy 5th grader friends hanging out in some guys basement. We formed a club and drew pictures all day long. ^^ Seven years ago this was, sadly, my best piece of writing. Live and learn, then get hooked on phonics. |
| #6 archon6[97387] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
wow i actually DONT want dis to be flamed.
Snoog Dog talk Funny.
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| #7 tercal[97388] |
| sdn-ar-002njnewaP139.dialsprint.net |
i know, i saw that it didnt want to be rated...just felt like adding in a comment, couldnt resist adding what i thought...
if anything, this proves why it shouldnt be rated...this really isnt anything you can rate, its either there to enjoy (laugh at)for the sake of the much different type of writing, or you can hate just because its different if you want to be an asshole...if anyone does actually rate this, thats gonna be pretty pathetic on their part...
Jut for the sake of asking, if dref had submitted this, i wonder what it would have gotten rated... |
| #8 Psyonic_Reaver[97391] |
| 1Cust45.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| IF YOU DONT WANT THIS PEICE OF CRAP RATED PUT IT IN THE FORUM!!! =0 |
| #9 [SM]Strega~F[97394] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
Umm... did you fail fifth grade by any chance?
Strega |
| #10 Phukin Retard[97396] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
im not american, how old are fifth graders?
i didn't read it, nut as i was scrolling down i noticed something about streetsharks, i loved that cartoon when i was a kid, even though it was so incredibly stupid |
| #11 GuZuLu[97397] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
LoL Strega. 7 years, and still trying to pass fifth.....
Didn't read the "battlereport".
GoZuLu - TheOldDane |
| #12 Ling-erie[97400] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
erm.......
'no comment' |
| #13 willwinforfood[97402] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
| "i loved that cartoon when i was a kid" with the shark in the band and he was the drummer? |
| #14 willwinforfood[97403] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
| oh and fifth graders are ..10? i dunno its to early for me to think. |
| #15 Diluvio[97423] |
| ACA6FA55.ipt.aol.com |
| 5th graders are normally 10-11 |
| #16 Khas[97425] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
"I wish to see what other people think about this piece of garbage I pulled out of my ass. "
THEN POST IT IN THE FORUM YOU MORON |
| #17 BADKITTY![97431] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
| Khas is satan. |
| #18 Nafarias[97498] |
| 170.89.37.77 |
No - Jabberjaw was the cartoon with the shark in the band...
Mr. Jaws was the one where a shark wearing a top hat swam around with a catfish wearing a derby and shouted "Gotcha!" to scare people.
Street Sharks was a cartoon about a bunch of mutated Shark-persons that were being chased around by some evil scientist or other.
<me> is frightened at how much useless cartoon lore he has...</me> |
| #19 slappyputty[97593] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
| Badkitty is right. Khas is definately satan. I say we all give him a good kick in the nuts. |
#20 [158667] |
| CPE000ea6388836-CM001371143574.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
bahahaha so many good quotes.
"It has the power of ten tanks times two and is driven by Chaos" |