| #1 1st[97022] |
| px2nr.wp.shawcable.net |
| keke |
| #2 ground-LOBP-[97023] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| Well, this still looks really weird what with the big white sidebar on the left (I don't know how THAT happened), but the br works. Beginner's HTML dictates that I knew nothing about <td> tags instead of using bgcolor in <body> tags, but that's fixed now. |
| #3 ground-LOBP-[97025] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| Looks like Zeon's getting to be a popular br subject :P |
| #4 ground-LOBP-[97028] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| Shit. I'm getting reports of people still seeing a white background, but they use Netscape. Netscape sucks, people. I've checked the br in IE on both my Mac and my PC and it looks fine, except for the weird sidebar. Use IE to view this report if Netscape doesn't show it correctly for you. |
| #5 Jam^Jam[97031] |
| tcache-th01.proxy.aol.com |
danger danger will robinson
more pleasing to the eye, but the sidebar looks funny, throws off the viewing affect.
7 |
| #6 Happy McDougal[97038] |
| us1.pharmacia.com |
Nice report, but you kinda freaked me out at the end, getting all paranoid and nervous about getting flamed. Sort of reminded me of Dr. Leo Marvin (played by Richard Dreyfuss) in the movie "What About Bob?". Just submit the report and read what people have to say, good or bad. Sooner or later, you'll stumble upon a good hard battle, & you'll do fine...
McDougal
"6" |
| #7 iggyson[97039] |
| adsl-64-167-13-162.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
wtf
U made a game WITHOUT ME in it
u deserve to die
nice br, btw |
| #8 LuckyNewbie:P[97043] |
| dialup-209.245.7.234.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| for some reason my long as comment wont post |
| #9 LuckyNewbie:P[97044] |
| dialup-209.245.7.234.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
Told ya you couldn't br!! (white sidebar happens to all of us)
thing is, with a report, you aren't submitting all the html in a webpage. Use the <TABLE> tag, <TD> and <TR> tags are part of the table tag (rows and columns) which i wont explain cuz it gives me a huge headache. When trying to make your report (if u test it at geocities or wherever) have <body bgcolor="yellow"> or some different color and use a <Table> tag to being your report. For example, a report with a width of 620 pixels and a 10 pixel of black "Buffer zone" would appear as <Table width="620" spacing="10" bgcolor="black"> If you do not specify which color the buffer zone is with the bgcolor="" part, it will assume the color specified in the documents <body> tag (in the case of br.com-- black). If you wanna be really spiffy alltogether type </td></tr></table> before your br's html your br and it will get rid of that annoying white border around it. |
| #10 LuckyNewbie:P[97045] |
| dialup-209.245.7.234.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
......................
Heh... confused? So am i. the only thing i want you to get out of there is that the report will ignore everything you normally put above a <table> tag, and to avoid getting that white thing on the side, add in a closing tag for every <table><td> or <tr> tag you did at the begining
stupid 1000 character limit! |
| #11 LuckyNewbie:P[97047] |
| dialup-209.245.7.234.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
Even Simpler:
Put in a </td> tag, einstein! |
| #12 ground-LOBP-[97048] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| The "fuck you" was meant to be more aggressive than neurotic, cause I have a few friendly flamers like Iggy and Ling who like to attack me with barrages of nitpicks (as I do to them). I'll be really surprised if this br manages to get gold, I hope, I hope... |
| #13 Supercod[97051] |
| 63-224-58-136.customers.uswest.net |
Rofl
Zeon is so bad...
Btw Mr.cod... 7 pylon 8 gateway 9 gateway is a Stefan build. :)
Ah.. btw.. ground couldn't br any of 3 potential games that he obsed with me in them :(
Guess I wont be in a battle report if i keep zealot rushing |
| #14 Supercod[97052] |
| 63-224-58-136.customers.uswest.net |
| ah btw ground Zeon owns you. |
| #15 ZeonPeon[97053] |
| cr862712-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
| =D |
| #16 StoneColdNewbie[97055] |
| tcache-mtc-tg01.proxy.aol.com |
| Pretty good report...especially for a first...i would say 6 for a crappy game but since it was first w/nice pics and decent writing id say 7 just for fun ^^ |
| #17 CaughtNaked[97062] |
| 1Cust59.tnt1.washington.dc.da.uu.net |
FUCK U STONECOLD, i was on a #16 streak u bastard!!
now to read... |
| #18 CaughtNaked[97063] |
| 1Cust59.tnt1.washington.dc.da.uu.net |
Simpler, find a BR w/ font color, bg u like ect...view sorce, copy paste report, delete report, use tags, learn tags, apply tags next report, stay tuned for my next HTML guide which i will get into this.
now to read the real report, and not the comments... |
| #19 CaughtNaked[97064] |
| 1Cust59.tnt1.washington.dc.da.uu.net |
...If PR/Final's reports are 6s this should be a 7. I give it a 7 dispite the lacking of a good game. Pics were funny, writing was decent, it flowed really well, but it seem to lack a conclusion. Mayb a few more pixs of the final battle... I duno, gw on first BR, owned mine hard.
7
t2yl,
~CN |
| #20 ground-LOBP-[97065] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| It wasn't really a final battle, more of a final baserape. I haven't graduated to image collages yet :/ |
| #21 |nt|~Squad[97066] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
jeezus naked, ur on br.com, but u find no time to go on bnet? Ive been lookin 4 u 4 about a week and a half. asdf.
btw.
GROUND, FAIRLY GOOD REPORT (which is high praise from me, since i never really hand out much praise).
U need to find a better game. And have me obs with u. As i said, i may not be a good player, but i can obs and make several witty comments about stuff totally not related to the game, or the BR...but thats beside the point. U NEED ME!
GW ground.
KILL THE UMPIRE!,
SQUAD |
| #22 ground-LOBP-[97067] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| Yes, my next br will be full of blatant quotage. I'm considering having Cold in the next one, as he was the almost the subject of my first br but g2ged before the game was out (repeated nukes on Zeon tvz with a single silo @ temple). I fight for the right to br nh newbies!!!!! |
| #23 StoneColdNewbie[97069] |
| tcache-mtc-tg01.proxy.aol.com |
| Heh. /me broke Naked's #16 Streak, Thx. |
| #24 Psyonic_Reaver[97073] |
| 1Cust193.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| My BR was so owned by this. |
| #25 Zalbag[97074] |
| chi-tgn-gvo-vty29.as.wcom.net |
| neato |
| #26 skimoose[97079] |
| hoproxy.proxy.lucent.com |
| As bad as the game was, I was totally entertained the whole time. I got a good picture of how the game went from the text and the pics complemented this nicely. Oh, scores are a nice thing to include. Beat the hell out of my first attempt. |
| #27 CaughtNaked[97089] |
| 1Cust121.tnt5.washington.dc.da.uu.net |
| check ur mail squad t.t |
| #28 ground-LOBP-[97097] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| Yeah, I forgot to put in scorepix even though I uploaded them... damn! :( |
| #29 Kepow'Ob[97110] |
| ch5blm.bellglobal.com |
Normally I read all (most) of the other comments first, but don't have time right now.
I thought it was a pretty good first BR considering the lack of a good game. "The most glaring flaw is that it doesn't really seem like a good game, which it isn't". I know you wanted to get out a BR, and I know how frustrating it is to find a good game (as you will find out in my next BR, if I ever find a game worth BRing).
For your first time it was pretty good, better than my first one. The pictures weren't fancy, but they showed what they had to, and it was easy to follow, even though there were some spelling and grammar mistakes, it wasn't to bad in my opinion. 6.5. probably a 6, even though there was something about the BR that makes me lean to 7. Oh well, GJ, now that you have a BR under your belt, wait till you find a good game for your second one. |
| #30 ground-LOBP-[97111] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| heh, name a spelling and grammar mistake... my English is better than anyone else's I know, Mr. "wasn't to bad" :P |
| #31 ground-LOBP-[97112] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| btw I dare anyone to paste the text of my br into Word or something and run it past the spellchecker |
| #32 ground-LOBP-[97116] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| p.s. I just did what I suggested with the spellcheck, and aside from the normal Starcraft words (including 'Starcraft' itself), no errors. thx gw |
| #33 ground-LOBP-[97117] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| might've been, this is the map you vult dropped my probe line on and won, wwff |
| #34 Kepow'Ob[97122] |
| ch5blm.bellglobal.com |
| Alright, no spelling mistakes, but some either grammar mistakes, or just slightly odd word combos, something caught my eye a few time. After giving you positive feedback on a report you thought sucked, please don't snap back at me for a something as trivial as a possible spelling mistake. |
| #35 ground-LOBP-[97124] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| I was afraid it would come out too harshly, sorry. I doubt I made any grammar mistakes but I did have odd word combos aplenty. Let's be friends, kiss, and make up :) |
| #36 Kepow'Ob[97125] |
| ch5blm.bellglobal.com |
There we go :). I like people like you... in more ways than one *wink wink, nudge nudge*.
j/k |
#37  [97150] |
| ip141.herndon20.va.pub-ip.psi.net |
It was definitely a good first effort... the text was easy to read and flowed pretty well. With better players/games you'll be well on your way.
When you start writing longer reports, you can foreshadow the ending, but don't just give it away ;) "his only minor victory of the game.."
Cheers,
~CB~ |
| #38 livingexception[97160] |
| spider-tk072.proxy.aol.com |
Hmm, I think a 5 is kinda Nazi for this br. I would have given it a 6, but I'll shut up cause I'm not in the Hall of Fame :)
LE |
| #39 BADKITTY![97163] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
why do khas (the devil) and smurf (the devil's tiny friend named smurf[who's name is smurf{smurf}]) get better ratings than this?... Flow counts 100% for me, and ground has it, they dont.
Gj Ground. |
| #40 [97176] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
| Hi, I think the game was too one-sided, which is why I rated it as a 5. WIth everything else the same but a better game to report on, I'd say 6-6.5. |
| #41 ground-LOBP[97312] |
| bg7-60.eagnet.com |
| yes my report sux ass and yes i do assfuck men |
| #42 ground-LOBP-[97316] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| eh, gw leaving the dash off the end of my name |
| #43 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[97346] |
| h139-142-249-254.gtcust.grouptelecom.net |
| Lol |
| #44 Eradicate~Me[97353] |
| pa-millscreek2a-240.buf.adelphia.net |
| =o |
| #45 [97848] |
| pool-63.49.137.21.bltm.grid.net |
You know, the more I reread this report after the fact, and the more I compare it to releases before and after it, the more I become convinced that I made a mistake with the rating. Since no one else seems to be rating it, I'm going to break tradition and rate twice to get the average. My original comments still stand -- the game was too one-sided, but I no longer think it deserves a 5.
My deepest apologies if the original rating made you bitter and angry at the world. ;)
Cheers. |
| #46 ground-LOBP-[97993] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| *grovels* i worship you, cb |
| #47 +Mep+[98037] |
| nic-245-c3-1.mn.mediaone.net |
Nice br and shit....
~Too short
~Too one sided
~They sucked to damn hard
Nice first effort.....
you only wish you had my godly skill |
| #48 BoReD_[101811] |
| cs924637-a.mtmc1.on.wave.home.com |
| Heh Zeonpeon: " dont br this" lol |
| #49 John[101888] |
| adsl-63-206-90-151.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Last comment |
| #50 Triped[142925] |
| cf2.utc.com |
| ground, you faggot |
| #51 ground[144544] |
| syr-24-58-249-106.twcny.rr.com |
wow this blew
hi mike |
| #52 ground[157661] |
| ke214-107.resnet.stonybrook.edu |
| ror |
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