| #1 Sere[95705] |
| reverse132.interconti.com.ar |
| 1st? |
| #2 Sere[95706] |
| reverse132.interconti.com.ar |
| Okay I'll go read it now =P |
| #3 ~13~Shadow D'Arc[95707] |
| spider-wb041.proxy.aol.com |
Aww, fux0r it. Whats the BR.Com tag for the background color? Used <Body BGcolor="#000000">, but it didn't decide to be nice to me. I'll repost on black BG once I figure out how.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #4 skicker[95721] |
| gvarel4.net.external.hp.com |
| hmm.. sounds kinda ... sick?? |
| #5 triped[95729] |
| cf2.utc.com |
Wow.
Attains a morbid level of intensity rivaled only by Drefsab's 'When Two World's Collide'
Well written, original, don't care about the background, you acheived your intended effect, good job. |
#6  [95735] |
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| This is the kinda stuff teachers throw kids out of school for now days. Luckily this isn't school. |
| #7 CKane[95738] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
So many people try to compose a free verse poem and write down random gibberish, and scream "Look! Im a poet!"
Your free verse is better than random gibberesh, but not by much. |
| #8 LuckyNewbie:P[95739] |
| user-33qtpdt.dialup.mindspring.com |
| wow... this sucks |
| #9 LuckyNewbie:P[95740] |
| user-33qtpdt.dialup.mindspring.com |
| Wow, seems like a whole bunch of random thoughts thrown together without anything in the way of transition or relevancy. What the hell is going on? This isn't poetry |
| #10 LuckyNewbie:P[95741] |
| user-33qtpdt.dialup.mindspring.com |
Example:
I like cheese, it is orange
Its savory taste revives me much
I killed a cop yesterday
Wtf!? |
| #11 iggyson[95747] |
| intergate.spusd.k12.ca.us |
wtf, this is such bs
u wannabe goth, i hope u die
iron chef =o |
| #12 ~STIM~007[95749] |
| bess-proxy01.cdesd.k12.or.us |
| Umm dude... i think you need some help. |
| #13 triped[95753] |
| cf2.utc.com |
Lucky newbie-
Say what you want, but that three lines of random thoughts does seem to fit together in an odd sense.
I almost got thrown out of school in January for writing Warcraft II fanfic for a short story assignment. I still fail to see how a graphicly described Orcish Stronghold seige is a bomb threat against the school, oh well. |
| #14 Khas[95759] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Bad news, dude, 000000 is the hex code for white. That's what you got. Now quitcherbitchin. |
| #15 CKane[95762] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
I think he was trying to get across a sense of insanity. It came across as a sense of stupidity.
whoo i'm clever ^^ |
| #16 Starookie[95766] |
| edtn007968.hs.telusplanet.net |
| scary =[ |
| #17 Khas[95768] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Kinda like how some people see me, right Kane? |
| #18 Shadow D'Arc[95780] |
| spider-wb052.proxy.aol.com |
They think anything morbid is a bomb threat. Go figure. Stupid school people. When I told my english teacher, she was like (Paraphrased) "Well written, but morbid". Don' really care if you like it or not, mostly written on sleep deprivation, desire to watch things blow up cuz of work, and boredom.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #19 Shadow D'Arc[95781] |
| spider-wb052.proxy.aol.com |
BTW, Iggy, I'm not a goth. Goth's act like they think they are dead. I know I'm still alive. I accept it. Even if people don't accept me.
Peace |
| #20 pines0ul[95846] |
| h24-70-206-245.gv.shawcable.net |
I take it that this is a "poem" about wolves with guns?
As the great jeffk would say: YUO ARE A FAGOT |
| #21 Shadow D'Arc[95850] |
| spider-wl024.proxy.aol.com |
No, it is not about wolves with guns. It is about a world where the men are more like animals than humans.
I look at it this way, be either hated or love, right now I'm hated even more than Hawk :)
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #22 Melfuaru[95860] |
| cc608728-a.spdwy1.in.home.com |
| omg u fag i was gonna stick up for u until u made fun of hawk. die hoe |
| #23 BADKITTY![95892] |
| ss11.ny.us.ibm.com |
| stone henge is one of the biggest henges in the world...what the fuck is a henge? |
| #24 Shadow D'Arc[95932] |
| spider-tj043.proxy.aol.com |
Yo, Melf, I wasn't makin fun of Hawk. I was saying that 'cuz of this I was hated even more than him. An yur mom's the hoe, not me.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
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