| #1 CrackHeadJeb[92109] |
| mu-178245.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Hrm, the tenth(last) report DrAwesome has to rate. Hoh boy, have there been some weird ones.
I'll read both chapters later since Doom > Heretic. ^^
(But Hexen > Doom)
-CrackHeadJeb |
| #2 CrackHeadJeb[92110] |
| mu-178245.dhcp.missouri.edu |
btw, I had to knock screen res to 1024*768 to read it without scrolling horizontally. Dono't know if that was intended or not. 8*(
-CrackHeadJeb |
| #3 DivvyO[92114] |
| adsl-64-160-24-111.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
Well then, I guess nobody roots for the underdog here, eh? Nobody notices that I have been throwing my numbers into the scale?
This fanfic is starting to get better, definetly see more conflict now and in the road ahead, and the whole Varthis thing wasn't bad, either.
The screenshots are nice, but then again, you didn't have to attach them to eachother in such a manner so that people with 800x600 monitors couldn't read it properly.
All in all a good continuation of the series. I'd throw this thingy a sevenaroonie. If I was a rater, that is, and Dr.A now probably has that position clenched ;D |
#4  [92122] |
| pm3-1-26.boscobel.mwt.net |
| shit dude all them big words confused me so i got to like paragraph #2 and sed fuckit! |
| #5 archon6[92137] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
plot beginz
7 |
| #6 Anti-Progress[92147] |
| bay5-22.daktel.com |
| yup, still lost. |
| #7 Mistah~T[92166] |
| ip46-122.airswitch.net |
| Awesome Fic, one of the few I can stand to read ;), I'm not sure if it's possible (Haven't played Heretic since I was but a wee lad) but if you could integrate the pictures into the story, put a background on, and color the text ti'd make it that much cooler ;) |
| #8 Nafarias[92188] |
| 63.117.233.194 |
| Yeah - I'd like to - but my website got nuked and I don't have a place to post the pix as I'd like to do them. Perhaps some other report down the road... :) |
| #9 CrackHeadJeb[92399] |
| mu-178245.dhcp.missouri.edu |
The amazing thing is that you are making this story faithful to level one in Heretic. Try a Heretic fanfic without creating boundaries for yourself! (hehe, or maybe you used the first level as a source of inspiration, oh well).
20.7 KB of text.... Sexy :D.
I am surprised that more people haven't commented. This is an excellent fanfic. Same praise heaped upon this, professional writing, vivid descriptions.
It's bad manner to force people to change screen resolution to read the report, though. 8*)
If I rated, I'd give this chapter an eight if it was rated in three different parts, and if it was rated as a whole, I'll save that for the final Chapter's comments section.
Awesoem writing, man.
-CrackHeadJeb |
| #10 someidiot[92576] |
| 1Cust138.tnt1.washington.dc.da.uu.net |
| <form method=post><input type=hidden name=reportnum value=4185> |
| #11 jugnuts[92678] |
| cy662178-a.huntgtn1.wv.home.com |
| good writing. to tired to comment. whar whar whar splat (idiocy at it's finest) |
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