| #1 +Mep+[86880] |
| user-2inilb2.dialup.mindspring.com |
Wow, first comment on my own BR. I'm good. I'm not sure how well this will go over on account of the fact that it's not a 'real BR' but enjoy.
Good hunting,
+Mep+ |
| #2 marshmallow[86881] |
| cc751880-a.bchgrv1.in.home.com |
| What are those numbers next to your name? ;) |
| #3 the()vermind[86882] |
| user-2ivea2q.dialup.mindspring.com |
| i don't know what to say about this, uhhh "report." graphics wise, you're pretty well rounded, but ummm, the content of it was obscure at best. In probability this will be deleted, I reccomend focusing your time more on actual reports than this stuff. Dref's "to kill a newbie" reports were actual games, not single player tutorials. |
| #4 ^Geist^[86883] |
| po44.serviceplus.ab.ca |
| I need training, will you help me? |
| #5 Scarab[86884] |
| AC939DED.ipt.aol.com |
| eh.. |
| #6 Warfare[86885] |
| w042.z208037226.sea-wa.dsl.cnc.net |
What struck me was you sounded like you weren't happy to be training someone and it was kind've a chore and that came across in your writing. This made it feel kinda like a chore to read.
Suggestions:
1. Use a multiplayer game where you and "the newbie" can a least battle together against some comps.
2. Don't take on such a big newbie. Get them up to date on the basics and then give us a BR of you teaching them advanced strats.
3. Your attempt at humor was valiant, but again, the negative tone of the BR detracted from that and made your humor sound sarcastic.
Hope this helps,
Warfare |
| #7 mattkid[86886] |
| 209.53.21.116 |
| i liked it = |
| #8 JawaAvenger[86888] |
| ool-18baa694.dyn.optonline.net |
| Ermmm... what Warfare said... and also, If you're going to do the regular levels, at least put them together in packs of 2. 1 isn't much of a read... |
| #9 badtz maru[86889] |
| barry-asy-23.rutgers.edu |
hahaha~~~overmind!
evil is u
=[
dont beat up the kid!
u self esteem lower-er
good work but follow som warfare's comments |
| #10 +Mep+[86890] |
| user-2inil2q.dialup.mindspring.com |
Deleted??? God, didn't think it was THAT bad. Geez, ok you all have good points and thanks for the suggestions War, I think since from the sounds of things so far this isn't all that wonderful I'm gonna take my next endever into the world of BRing into a real game. Now that I've gotten the basics of html down, and have obsed a few games in which I tried to take notes and other things, I may have a good chance at doing some halfway decent stuff. In all honesty, after the first half hour with all that was accomplished was two SCVs and one more Supply Depot I did indeed get slightly bored out of my mind. On another amusing anecdote I forgot to add, Badest1 at one point said, "Ok guys, I have enough minerals, stop mining now." and he stopped all his SCVs....scary.
Egh, to much less sucky BRs
+Mep+ |
| #11 +Mep+[86891] |
| user-2inil2q.dialup.mindspring.com |
Geez in the time it took me to type&post that, which wasn't very long, I got two new comments. I feel special. Anyway I forgot to add-
Matt, contact the dealer who sold you that crack, you got a bad bunch d00d.
Well my computer is being overthrown by the evil virus known only as "mom" but I have all weekend to find some good games to BR.
+Mep+, the one who will stop commenting his own BR now. |
| #12 +Mep+[86892] |
| user-2inil2q.dialup.mindspring.com |
Geez in the time it took me to type&post that, which wasn't very long, I got two new comments. I feel special. Anyway I forgot to add-
Matt, contact the dealer who sold you that crack, you got a bad bunch d00d.
Well my computer is being overthrown by the evil virus known only as "mom" but I have all weekend to find some good games to BR.
+Mep+, the one who will stop commenting his own BR now. |
| #13 WarLeaderJustin[86893] |
| adsl-64-166-111-35.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| Yep. |
| #14 Cearas[86895] |
| cache01-e3b.syd.optusnet.com.au |
| wtf was up with that 1st pic, maybe i didnt let it load, it looked really fucked up. err yeah. |
| #15 Normandy-1944[86896] |
| spider-wi052.proxy.aol.com |
| Drefsab owns you |
| #16 the()vermind[86897] |
| spider-mtc-tb033.proxy.aol.com |
| wait, now that i think of it there are human vs comp br's still on the site, so i withdraw my comment saying it will be deleted, just don't expect a high rating |
| #17 MysteryMan[86898] |
| cable-76-75-237-24.anchorageak.net |
| What? This report get deleted?! Come on man, search for reports with a rating of "1"... |
| #18 +Mep+[86899] |
| user-2inilbr.dialup.mindspring.com |
This was my first report, I really don't expect a good rating =).
+Mep+ |
| #19 IG_Parchandri[86904] |
| netcache2-acld.auckland.clix.net.nz |
| If you think he sounds like he wasn't having fun teaching it you ought to try tutoring somebody. Like somebody who needs tutoring to pass maths. It is always a very frustrating endeavour to teach something which is easy to you (through long practice) to someone who really doesn't have a good grasp of the subject. |
| #20 probe[86908] |
| dt121n02.tampabay.rr.com |
<SCRIPT LANGUAGE="javascript">
function click() {
if (event.button==1 || event.button==2) {
alert('No clicking!')
}
}
document.onMouseDown=click
</SCRIPT>
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| #21 probe[86909] |
| dt121n02.tampabay.rr.com |
MANNER
<SCRIPT LANGUAGE="javascript">
function click() {
if (event.button==1 || event.button==2) {
alert('No clicking!')
}
}
document.onMouseDown=click
</SCRIPT>
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| #22 SoY~b0Mb[86910] |
| c1457880-a.sttln1.wa.home.com |
Genius. Just genius. If I had your writing skills and Michael Jordan's basketball skills, I could join the NBA!
Did that make any sense? |
| #23 Mewatchy[86912] |
| 202.188.200.160 |
| It was pretty creative but kinda short. you should have started from the other missions that are more.... ah exciting =) anyway, I LIKE IT!!! |
#24  [86913] |
| c1413963-a.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
The only redeeming quality of this... this... I have no idea what this is, is the mention of reminding people we all started out FAR better off than this guy.
Ungodly short
Training a newbie stops at a refinery? (see short comment)
#6 spoke volumes
Nothing against you, this was just plain bad.
I am sure your next one will be better =)
-Dr.Z |
| #25 Phoenix[86917] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
The right button thingie made me smile though.
:)
Phoenix |
| #26 Roaddog{WP}[86920] |
| proxy3-external.pr1.on.home.com |
<i>"Matt, contact the dealer who sold you that crack, you got a bad bunch d00d,"</i> - +Mep+
Don't beat up yourself man, I enjoyed it, I found humour in it, was funny cause I remember the number beside name days... The ol how do i get stars on my flag beside my name... all that! And getting fooled by people saying there was a hack to get kerrigan stripping on the banner at the top. But to no avial! It was funny and it brought all dem memories back.
10! :P |
| #27 [86921] |
| rm03-24-131-186-223.ce.mediaone.net |
mep u know ur a newbie too....
everyone who makes posts "to kill a newbie" or "newbie ffa" blah blah...
theyre newbies too.... |
| #28 Napoleic[86926] |
| 24.113.31.224 |
Drefsab the newbie...? rofl
um no |
| #29 MatrisKing[87061] |
| huron63-63.comp.uakron.edu |
I need some training...
It actually sounds like a kinda cool idea if you get it going right but the problem is that the series would get old after a short while no matter how well its presented. that is all
king |
| #30 xld.aldogrez[87064] |
| spider-mtc-tj021.proxy.aol.com |
Use MSWord to proof your report or something, you had waaaay too many tiny spelling errors.
and another thing, it's Britney Spears thx =P |
| #31 ur momma[87097] |
| cache-cro.cableinet.co.uk |
i liked it, but i need to read more man, 1 isn't enuff i wanna find out what happenned when this newbie came across a zergling did he try to make it mine or something, plz MORE MOOOOOORE, sorry i thinkthe speed just kicked in
ooohhhhhhhhhh yeah |
| #32 WarGod[87109] |
| cm985140-c.denton1.tx.home.com |
| ok, now that is freakin scaryy, im in the middle of teaching my dad the same thing, now when i get mad at him i can say "alright, timefor me to blow you up!!" ;) |
| #33 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[87174] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
This was pure ugliness. Some of the most boring load of borring snore-inducing rubbish my eyes did ever dare see. Horrid.
Your other ones may be better though. But just what did you intend to achieve with this? Listening to how a newbie builds a depot and two scvs is not my idea of fun, sorry =(
2 is well deserved, maybe a little high though :< |
| #34 JJ![87303] |
| nas-37-232.atlanta-t.navipath.net |
Bah, I personaly enjoyed it... It really does bring back those scared days of single player newbiehood...
I'd say about a....hm......4.5
Try and get the newbie on battle.net, that could be funnier than this. It took me 1 week to figure out I had to <i>connect</i> my internet before pressing battle.net=)
Gl on your next
The One, The Only...
JJ! |
| #35 <font color=green">}DraginslayeR{</font>[87506] |
| ip-111-2-120.nyc.navipath.net |
Damn, that sucked like hell. Learn to spell you idiot.
That's it, all the good points were taken.
...idiot... |
| #36 Santa-Claws[87945] |
| 146.115.83.203 |
| LOL that was sooo funny..."At the start of this mission, our newbie Badest1 found himself in control of a big thingy, a robot thingy, a bunch of little guys, and a square thingy with rolly things on it." yeah this is good if i'm bored...funny, do another... |
| #37 CaughtNaked[98158] |
| 1Cust69.tnt38.tco2.da.uu.net |
hey mep, bored and searching ur name. i remember when this came out i didnt bother to read but now i did and i loved it! not gonna bother reading the comments but listen to T(), he is friend of mine and very wise. go mep! neways, gl w/ nect report!
4
t2yl8r,
~CN |
| #38 Reaver64[130305] |
| h24-84-8-198.vs.shawcable.net |
| i have but one thing to say...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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