| #1 Robert Frazer[86580] |
| frazers.demon.co.uk |
| Erk... how did that happen? |
| #2 CKane[86581] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| hi |
| #3 CKane[86582] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
That was dumb.
You have good writing skills, but you pick dumb topics, and you also overdo it.
Tell us the story, and eliminate everything that is not the story. Words Stephen King lives by (really) |
| #4 badtz maru[86586] |
| barry-asy-16.rutgers.edu |
the margin thing is screwed up...
great writing but CK is right...
u mostly blow the thing outa propotion
other than that it was great |
| #5 King_[LSRS-13][86588] |
| proxy2-external.clmba1.mo.home.com |
| Where's Sonic? |
| #6 Drefsab[86590] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
You forgot the <table> tags. Next time listen to the master when he gives you advice on the forum **cough**me**cough**
Cheers,
Dref
p.s. I'm not rating this right now |
#7  [86591] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
| erm, that was me... forgot my code :| |
| #8 Robert Frazer[86592] |
| frazers.demon.co.uk |
Arrrgggghhhhhhh.... it looked OK when I previewed it... (sob).
Is that bad as it is, or should I repost it? |
| #9 derek[86594] |
| ACAF18A7.ipt.aol.com |
heh
"Does it really matter if a console has 2347856890234578903204897569356890346590 bits to a byte power? Games are all that matters, and Sega I think there excels"
true |
| #10 derek[86595] |
| ACAF18A7.ipt.aol.com |
heh
"Does it really matter if a console has 2347856890234578903204897569356890346590 bits to a byte power? Games are all that matters, and Sega I think there excels"
true |
| #11 ThieverIV[86596] |
| spider-wg012.proxy.aol.com |
| Your writing style is very good, there are some great parts of this story, but as previous people have said, pick a better topic! From a writing perspective there aren't really any problems with this, but you need either a better plot or to expand this one. |
| #12 iggy[86597] |
| 156.los-angeles-16-17rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| needless to say, u will get lynched |
| #13 [86612] |
| chpxy01-chrtr01.ne.mediaone.net |
Hey.. I've said this before and i've said it again.. I'm MatriX(SR) and its easy to impersonate the raters and shit.. i wouldn't do it but some flamers/retards might... You might wanna find a new way to identify raters? Or you could just rely on ip to tell who is who..
Anyway, good report frazer, but i agree with the others. And the formatting is sorta messed =P |
| #14 DivvyO[86620] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
Actually, Matrix, I think that people would be able to figure out the REAL raters from any flaming imposters that would just get themselves banned by impostering.
And the formatting is sorta messed because you gave him bad HTML you bad bad man. Naughty. |
| #15 MatriX(SR)[86623] |
| chpxy01-chrtr01.ne.mediaone.net |
| Well sorry, i forgot to put in the table tag =P.. was just bein lazy.. and also, i know people would be able to figure it out/the admins would, but i'm just saying, its POSSIBLE. I thought it was cool that i figured it out though =P |
| #16 DivvyO[86624] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
heehee, me too.
NO ABUSEY THO ;D |
| #17 Robert Frazer[86842] |
| frazers.demon.co.uk |
hoi... does that mean that it was YOU who rated the BR, and not Drefsab?????
IMPOSTOR! RECALL THAT VOTE NOW!!!!!! |
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