| #1 awe 6[84971] |
| c286394-a.pinol1.sfba.home.com |
| ummm...well...1st!!! |
| #2 awe 6[84972] |
| c286394-a.pinol1.sfba.home.com |
| btw, it was ok, if not a little condensed in some places. 7 i think. |
| #3 HKRules[84973] |
| c319171.extern.lawrenceville.org |
| expand. |
| #4 mattkid[84974] |
| 209.53.21.116 |
| LOL.. |
| #5 CKane[84976] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
Didn't capture the intended spirit. ;p
But it was funny anywhoo. :p
7 |
| #6 ^Geist^[84981] |
| po28.serviceplus.ab.ca |
| It was...ehm...not that great =/ |
| #7 Wisest~Yoda[84982] |
| pm3-1-22.boscobel.mwt.net |
| righto |
| #8 hmmmm[84987] |
| extfw.dcgov.org |
| i am a horny slut |
| #9 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[84994] |
| static-51.itcanada.com |
this was ok, and some parts were %^$#^ brilliant, but in the end it was a little bit of a let down. I give ye an 8. Good stuff!
Next time mention me plz #%$^#$%$^& =D |
| #10 badtz maru[84996] |
| barry-asy-50.rutgers.edu |
rofl this was good but dag's right endin=bit choppy
mention me monty next time !!!!!
gets s an 8 |
| #11 _brentsor_[84999] |
| npcomet.n-polk.k12.ia.us |
10th.....
hmm..
i spose thats not good...
the report/fanfic was desentorium
|
| #12 Cpt._Insano[85001] |
| 63.94.130.202 |
hehe
Nice pun
8
Jack ass |
| #13 Monty Pylon[85005] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| It's hard to end with Star Wars because its a trilogy and everyone knows its a trilogy. I think I may continue with this for all three and left the end open to speculation. Probably not the best idea on my part but we'll see what the future brings. |
| #14 DrAwesome[85006] |
| PPP-155-2.va.sprint-hsd.net |
| haha this was funny :D |
| #15 Shadow Master[85007] |
| 216.126.196.161 |
| Was pretty funny, although I was disappointed when Mr. Whan simply got killed the exact same way as in the movie, no twist or anything. |
| #16 BOBBY357[85012] |
| spider-ti043.proxy.aol.com |
| whatever...................................... |
| #17 Eat-the-Chobo[85029] |
| spider-te022.proxy.aol.com |
| ROFL damn u own man the ASDF, but really the middle and beginning were ownage the end was a bit too fast and a bit of a let down too =[ |
| #18 ThieverIV[85089] |
| spider-wo034.proxy.aol.com |
I agree with Shadow Master, you should've done something when Whan dies. For example:
Whan: Strike me and I shall become more powerful than you could ever imagine.
GoZ: Okay.
Whan: No no, wait, I was just joking, no, stop, AHHH AHHH OH DEAR GOD THE PAIN AND SUFFERING AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
or his extention cord is too short and the lightsaber goes out, or something like that. |
| #19 Sco263[85996] |
| 24.88.208.83 |
| ROFL this was funny. But I agree pretty much with what everyone else has said. A few more twists, longer ending, less choppy would be great. |
| #20 Dino Din[86131] |
| port-cvx1-116.access.one.net |
| shit i tried to give benefit of the doubt, because Pylon has posted one or 2 interesting pieces (battlereports? fanfics? i forget) but this... ugh... more sucking up and inside jokes. Another symptom of the growing hollowness at BR.com ... well thats the last Pylon report i read. |
| #21 Monty Pylon[86150] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| I am so crushed. I wrote it to be funny and if you are a forum go'er than you would understand. I think that people that are deeply involved in the site are interested enough to stop and read and laugh. Those who can't seem to laugh and have a pissy attitude about shit are not worth my time and trouble. I am glad that you will stop wasting your time with my fic and why don't you write something so you dont have so many of my fic in the gold. |
| #22 Dino Din[86378] |
| port-cvx1-721.access.one.net |
| well... perhaps that was mis-stated. I still stand by my ultimadum. It's just tragic that such talent is wasted. Oh and if this is for forumers... perhaps it should go where a forumer would go. I forget the name of that place... This is BattleReports.com, yet there's not been 1 inspiring report in eons |
| #23 SarcasticSage[86394] |
| slip-32-102-65-92.al.us.prserv.net |
*blinks and asks* Who the hell is he? *pointing at name above his* ah well i liked it MP keep up the good work and if you ever do any of your SC based things again don't forget to add me in as a DT that is nomadic and preffers solitude but will fight for a good cause O.o
thanks
<marquee>SarcasticSage</marquee> |
| #24 <font color="orange">Rowdy~Zergling</font>[88359] |
| adsl-64-123-174-218.dsl.rcsntx.swbell.net |
I loved it. Hehe, spilled my coffee. Obie-wan's name was funny, and I like little bit of reality in the end. Good work.
<font color="orange">Rowdy~Zergling</font>
Zergling Stew:
8 cups Stim.
4 cups Medic.
Micro until popping occurs at a low rate.
Serves 12. |
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