| #1 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[84599] |
| AC953677.ipt.aol.com |
| Harlo |
| #2 joe[84600] |
| pm1-25.sj.redshift.com |
that was amzingly fast i submitted and then clicked view and u already commented omg... thats kinda scary...
Well sorry evryone for unedited trash that was the prvious Br umm hope u like this and a message to scarab pleas edont comment on my Brs anymore ur much to cynical.. im sorry not everyone has the talent to provide such racy humor as you illl practice Indian Scv =/ umm Mexican ling =/ Umm jewish templar =/ umm Black trash Broodling there we go ! =] yeah ur racism is funny but only for fun I think u really are a racist asshole with no morals or integrity but theres nothing i can do about it and u will prolly reply with some lame 8th grade jokes about how my Br sux and im a fag or something but i dont really care further petty insults confirm my thoughts about you so please if u have to criticize dont be an asshole ppl make Brs for fun and its not fun to get belittled thnx
-joe |
| #3 archon69[84601] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| bias good point about da commentary |
| #4 :GF:Buckeye[84602] |
| dhcp065-024-187-060.columbus.rr.com |
nice br! i like your pics especially
few typos ect. but not enough to make anything confussing
and the smurf board link doesnt work again ;p
everything else was pretty good ;] 8.4~ |
| #5 joe[84603] |
| pm1-25.sj.redshift.com |
| bah .... stupid smurfboard =/ |
| #6 iggy[84604] |
| 64.los-angeles-18-19rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| ban |
| #7 ...[84605] |
| 24-240-44-88.hsacorp.net |
| Ban? wtf are you talking about... that report looks good |
| #8 Khas.Smurf[84606] |
| wlp07.rapidnet.net |
| Looking good Joe. I'll just take pride in being the first contestant to comment. =) (even though you lied to us) I'm glad you did BR. Even though I was in purple, I'm still looking good, and can always rely on you to catch my good side ;) |
| #9 :GF:Buckeye[84607] |
| dhcp065-024-187-060.columbus.rr.com |
| about the number 2 comment id have to say divvyo is far and away the funniest writer here ;] |
| #10 .[84608] |
| spider-mtc-tb031.proxy.aol.com |
| Ending was horrible. You really rushed it, seemed like you just wanted to get it done. |
| #11 Scarab[84609] |
| AC9C5AC1.ipt.aol.com |
ok, you are such a fucking idiot I have to reply.
Do you know what the comments are for anyway? Criticism. You didnt put one single period in your br. That alone makes it gramatically horrible. And it was probly that, that made the writing so dull, as it was an entire run on sentence. But I can still say that your writing was dull with or without periods. I, as other people, don't like to read boring shit. I'm so sorry I told you how I felt.
And yea, I don't like pics that had 20 minutes spent on them from downloading 20 fonts and making a spawning pool a bunch of colors with a weird symbol around it with some gay little comment next to it.
And what the hell is this? A "racist asshole with no morals or integrity." What the hell. Let me peice this together for you, shithead. It was not only stated in th BR that it was a joke, but then explained by me, and many others that it simply wasn't bashing races as anything more than a joke. I can't beleive people still think its racist. And where the hell do you get 'morals' and 'integrity'? Now you're just trying to sound smart with half-big words. How, in the hell, does anything I type online, do, say, or BR tell you anything about what I think is right or wrong unless I flat out say so? And Integrity, thats just stupid as hell. I have nothing to prove here. I may have a reputation to uphold, as anyone else here does. But I'm not obligated to put a show on for you, or anyone else, much less have the 'integrity' to do so, and with that said, theres no way for you to measure it. Idiot.
You say I can comment on your BR as long as I'm not an asshole about it. Tell me again, how I was an asshole by saying your pics were overdone, and the writing was boring. Well, obviously, there was something wrong with the writing because you just re-released a formatted version. I'm sorry I don't glamour up my criticism to make you feel good. I'd rather get to the point, and tell you what to fix. Guess what? You did fix it, and If you weren't so damn immature, I might have come back to these comments complimenting you on fixing it, and tell you it was now a good BR.
I can't stand kids like you that get there cock in a knot every time someone tells them they did something wrong. Can you say "sensitive" and "insecure"? I didn't want to spend so much time on your dumb ass, but it amazed me how so incredibly stupid you are, and I just HAD to let you know.
fuck you |
| #12 Scarab[84610] |
| AC9C5AC1.ipt.aol.com |
| god, I thought the formatting was messed up or something, but I just re read your comment, and you don't type with any periods or proper grammar at all. With that said, you're writing fucking sucks, and your overdone pictures dont make up for it, faggot. Was that cynical enough for you? |
| #13 -NaKeD-[84612] |
| sdn-ar-004njnbruP044.dialsprint.net |
| I don't see any difference between the first one and this one. Still no periods... |
| #14 joe[84613] |
| pm1-25.sj.redshift.com |
good work.. ;) thnx for giving everyone an example of what im tlaking about . <----------- omg a period now u have nothing more to talk shit about.. I love all this shit about my fonts and such haha those pics took like 1 minute to make over done ? whatever man and about ur insecure and sensitive thing .. most educated ppl understand that ppl who put other down are only doing so because they feel so low i can understand why ur suh a prick to ppl i mean theres tons of ppl like you i pity you in fact. so please cuss at me more and write little 8th grade insults more and act like the asshole you are more and as for morals and integrity and your Br being just a joke im sure it was a joke like i said but im not talking about the Br im talking about you and im sure you dont know the first thing about morals or integrity and im sure u dont care and im sure u have fun saying that everyone who has a standard level of decency has there "cock in a knot" but just keep it up man please comment again please please see i didnt punctuate this comment either i cnat veen splel rihgt mkae ufn fo em
o and in the light of maturity maybe my second comment was inappropriate in resonse to your comment on my unedited version but thats not all I ahve agsint you when i first posted on this sites form introducing myself you told me "stfu newbie fag nobody fucking cares" im sure u were "joking" and anyone who would be offende by it is "insensitive" and "insecure" but ur first impression left a mark and your overly agggressive remarks on the unedited Br were just to much im willing to end this pointless argument seeing as how its absolutely useless if any of the so called "maturity" u have that i dont is with you while u read this then just lets drop the subject or u could u know cuss and stuff some more and just prove me right some more either way its all good its up to you
joe |
| #15 iggy[84614] |
| 82.los-angeles-03-04rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
*pulls an 8 inch dildi out of scarabs ass* tsk tsk *shives a 3 footer in* BE MORE ANGRY
asdf |
| #16 iggy[84615] |
| 82.los-angeles-03-04rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
dildo*
asdf |
| #17 Scarab[84616] |
| AC9C5AC1.ipt.aol.com |
wow, could you be more stupid
<i>ppl who put other down are only doing so because they feel so low</i>
Yea, I criticised your BR because I feel bad, it had nothing to do with the fact that it was horribly formatted with overdone pics. idiot
god, you're so stupid, you're like doing this for me |
| #18 joe[84620] |
| pm1-25.sj.redshift.com |
good work.. ;) thnx for giving everyone an example of what im tlaking about . <----------- omg a period now u have nothing more to talk shit about.. I love all this shit about my fonts and such haha those pics took like 1 minute to make over done ? whatever man and about ur insecure and sensitive thing .. most educated ppl understand that ppl who put other down are only doing so because they feel so low i can understand why ur suh a prick to ppl i mean theres tons of ppl like you i pity you in fact. so please cuss at me more and write little 8th grade insults more and act like the asshole you are more and as for morals and integrity and your Br being just a joke im sure it was a joke like i said but im not talking about the Br im talking about you and im sure you dont know the first thing about morals or integrity and im sure u dont care and im sure u have fun saying that everyone who has a standard level of decency has there "cock in a knot" but just keep it up man please comment again please please see i didnt punctuate this comment either i cnat veen splel rihgt mkae ufn fo em
o and in the light of maturity maybe my second comment was inappropriate in resonse to your comment on my unedited version but thats not all I ahve agsint you when i first posted on this sites form introducing myself you told me "stfu newbie fag nobody fucking cares" im sure u were "joking" and anyone who would be offende by it is "insensitive" and "insecure" but ur first impression left a mark and your overly agggressive remarks on the unedited Br were just to much im willing to end this pointless argument seeing as how its absolutely useless if any of the so called "maturity" u have that i dont is with you while u read this then just lets drop the subject or u could u know cuss and stuff some more and just prove me right some more either way its all good its up to you
joe |
| #19 winter136[84621] |
| dhcp-federal-179-166.american.edu |
| nice BR... I am on joe's side on this one even tho it doesn't matter cause you all will rip him apart anyway. You do have one supporter Joe :). oh and i like smurfs too. Also, i think you can be a little bit more PC and still be funny and make fun of other people you just might have to work at it harder. |
| #20 winter136[84622] |
| dhcp-federal-179-166.american.edu |
| i just hate the word nigger... ok i'll shut up now |
| #21 <font color="red">}DraginslayeR{[84626] |
| ip-111-3-246.nyc.navipath.net |
Ok, I must admit, listening to these pages-long arguments are quite ammusing.
Please continue. :)
Oh, and your battlereport wasnt very good: the pictures were waaaay overdone.
--}DraginslayeR{
"I wish I were Irish"</font color> |
| #22 CrackHeadJeb[84627] |
| mu-178245.dhcp.missouri.edu |
I'm not going to harp on the overdone pics (I'm on a t3), but I just want to say that the poor grammar did take away from the quality of the report. Without punctuation, sentences blur together. Without paragraph breaks, different events blur together. Reports do not need gimmicks like humor or animated gifs to be enjoyable, but they do need to be readable.
Iggy. I don't think that butting in people's fights is wise, but I sure as hell can't stop you from being stupid. I would appreciate it if you wouldn't screw up the comments section, though. Thanks.
-CrackHeadJeb
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| #23 Burnmelt[84629] |
| dial-up-21.ccms.net |
I don't know if my comp is just different or something, but I see periods (in the correct places) in his battle report. The main problem I had with the battle report was that it was too detailed at certain points. Minor problems included your use of chat room dialect ('c' instead of 'see', etc.) and not enough rhetorical devices to keep it interesting (similes and humor). Overall it was a descent job though. Oh yeah, and keep personal arguments out of comment sections and move them to instant messenger, chat rooms, or e-mail.
-Burnmelt
P.S. I already know I'm dumb and that my spelling/grammar sucks. |
| #24 iggy[84631] |
| 106.los-angeles-01-02rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| Nigger. |
| #25 WarLeaderJustin[84635] |
| adsl-64-166-109-132.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
How embarassing. Talking about formatting but forgetting the stop bold command.
I'd blush if my face wasn't already too damn cold from this weather. |
| #26 -NaKeD-[84636] |
| sdn-ar-003njnbruP302.dialsprint.net |
| Where'd the periods come from? |
| #27 iggy[84637] |
| 106.los-angeles-01-02rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| Smack me around and call me Susan. |
| #28 }{i[84640] |
| sdn-ar-009casfrMP078.dialsprint.net |
Good pics.
Text could improve like... more paragraphs and capitals... plus the one-word text columns wrapping around pics is kinda annoying.
8 |
| #29 alex[84641] |
| hsa148.pool019.at101.earthlink.net |
scarab you are a stupid faggot newbie i hope you and your family die in a car accident
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| #30 Kwayzie.Smurf[84643] |
| ip190.los-angeles29.ca.pub-ip.psi.net |
| good br. I like the pix. Even though people say its over done but i like the pix like that. It shows a little creativity and devotion in making a br. Wells that's all i gotta say. |
| #31 uwannafiteme[84644] |
| 190.sanjose-08-09rs16rt.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| omfg this report owns |
| #32 uwannafiteme[84645] |
| 190.sanjose-08-09rs16rt.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| scarab sux Dick |
| #33 Cearas[84646] |
| cache07.syd.optusnet.com.au |
no, this report blows ass.
You suck and scarab's BR owned you. Yes, I do not liek him and he doesn't like me, but I dont care who posts something, if it is funny and entertaining I WILL commend them for their efforts.
This was a crap heap, the pics were all fucky and the writing sucked. |
| #34 some1[84648] |
| hsa175.pool019.at101.earthlink.net |
Scarab lay off its his frist try so we should give him tips/help him out not throw every cuss word in the dictionary at him for trying.
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| #35 Not.2.Good[84650] |
| 63-204-130-146.ebmud.com |
| Decent report, strong pics, weak writing but it will get better with practice. Game was decent I thought... though I don't know how toss went from naked nexus to 8 carriers so fast. There must've been a long period of Terran vs Terran that was kinda glazed over. Either that or toss had a serious mineral/gas reserve when he was evicted. |
#36  [84651] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
not bad
just a but confusing here and there. |
| #37 the()vermind[84652] |
| user-2iveak4.dialup.mindspring.com |
| interesting report, your last report's pics were godly, but I really didn't see why you resubmitted it. GJ on your 8, now you are in the same league as sunboy and I, damn iggy for his annoying comments, and scarab is right, while grammar in my opinion no longer makes the report, it would be nice to see periods. What I do is write the text of a br in ms word first, then convert everything to html. That's just what i do. |
| #38 LiquidNasty[84655] |
| proxy.atl.netsetter.com |
Scarab, Scarab, Scarab...
Proper technical writing IS key to successful professional reporting, but then we aren't going around flashing our certificates around in each other's faces, so who gives a shit? Oh, and to you, as you put it:
"you're[sic] writing fucking sucks..."
I can find three blatant errors in just ONE of the many sentence fragments you managed to fluke while dragging "you're" penis/vagina/whatever you have across the keyboard:
Error 1 - You forgot the capital letter.
Error 2 - "You're" is short for "You are," so really you
said "you are writing fucking sucks." Correct
spelling, "your." Elementary English, retard.
Error 3 - I'm guessing some scientist made the error of
letting a baboon with fetal alcohol syndrome out
of his cage to see what he would type when sat in
front of a computer. The obvious result was your
comment, Scarab. Back to the zoo, monkey-boy.
See? Everyone can be critical if they want to be.
Fucking lighten up, idiot.
|
#39  [84656] |
| dhcp024-166-066-234.neo.rr.com |
Methinks everyone doth protest too much. The pictures were slightly overdone. The grammer does need to be improved. It didn't make this unreadable though, and I can see potential here.
Next report, work on the writing. I suggest going back and reading it a few times before submitting it, and make sure it's flowing how you want it to. |
| #40 Hawk[84657] |
| user___4.nf.sympatico.ca |
Ok this report was bullshit. Uh oh i'm in 8th grade. Your grammar is horrendous, the pics were stupid.
I musn't have friends! I critized his br! Man you're an incompetent incoherent inferior idiot, ok. Oh and to smurf you have to be good in the first place, whether they were actually smurfing or the clan is after little blue gnomes I dunno. The gosu zerg that 5 pools. Send him to KBK!!!!
Now go back to your hole of a clan and dont waste my time anymore. |
| #41 znzf[84660] |
| 24.112.14.162.on.wave.home.com |
better than scarabs
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| #42 Templar569[84666] |
| 168.168.234.198 |
Your BR was pretty decent. I liked the pics, but I did have some trouble wading through the awkward grammatical mistakes. Take a little time to clean those up, and you'll have some fine BRs in your future.
In all seriousness, taking a little time to edit your own BR before it "goes to print" will save you some flames. |
| #43 -NaKeD-[84669] |
| sdn-ar-004njnbruP025.dialsprint.net |
"The gosu zerg that 5 pools."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! |
| #44 isuck@sc`[84670] |
| 124.reno-03-04rs16rt.nv.dial-access.att.net |
Pics were pretty nice, but the report didn't flow really well. You said that teal had 1:2:2 ups and the pic says 2:2:2 or you said 1:1:1 and pic shows 0:1:1 -that's confusing. You alluded to zerg being handed his ass with some phrase like "toss can run, but zerg is trapped." We found out later, but that made zero sense at the time. I got bored at the end and just skipped to the final scores. Grammar: "Blah Blah had 8 scv's repairing. During this battle." Commas can work wonders. =]
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| #45 The Overmind[84671] |
| proxy.ord.netsetter.com |
| Behold, my long silence is now broken, and I am made whole once more. |
| #46 Scarab[84672] |
| ACA55C0F.ipt.aol.com |
I like how little kids don't know how to follow along, and need help with everything, so let me do this for you.
"oh oh scarab, don't be mean, give him actual criticism"
I fucking did, god. I told him, in 2 short sentences(the first one he submitted) That I didnt like overdone pics, and the grammar was horrible. And it was, jesus, it didn't have periods.
Ok, theres your 'constructive criticism'. Tone down on the pics, and use periods. And what does he do? He proceeds to piss and moan about how I was being mean, yet he went ahead to fix one of the very things I suggested; he redid it with periods. Hypocricy? yes.
Don't make him look like the victim. I told him what needed fixed, and not only did he fix it, but he whined at me for suggesting it. That pissed me off, and I proceeded to be "offensive" since he chose to be such a little bitch about it. |
| #47 Scarab[84673] |
| ACA55C0F.ipt.aol.com |
and what the hell is liquid nasty
Typical example of a little boy that gets excited when he thinks he can own someone. I know how to type your, and you're. Oh my. How did I know some little bitch would jump on that. Yea lets compare "you're" to an entire br WITHOUT PERIODS. If you even knew what the fuck you were talking about, you would know I was entirely calm about this entire BR by telling him to fix the grammar and tone down on the pics. The kid gets whiny(read above)
that was in the first version of the report, and you didn't see it. So of course you jump on it like some kind of hero, going all out about how I mispelled you're. how pathetic
all in all, you just compared my pissed off blurb in a comment section, to an entire BR. Gosh, in which of those does grammar matter? I don't give a hell how bad you type in these comments. Screw it up in the BR, and points go down. You obviously know nothing about what you were saying, and you should try a little harder to flame me, cause that was the most pathetic attempt at a 'putting down' I have ever seen. Try the flame forum more, son |
| #48 Wisest~Yoda[84674] |
| pm3-1-14.boscobel.mwt.net |
hahha scarab owns all u negros
and no i didnt read the report |
| #49 joe.smurf[84675] |
| pm2-83.sj.redshift.com |
wow scarab i wasnt beign whiny about ur criticism i already didnt like u cus u were an asshole on Br.com forum
and i also dindt add periods because u said anything about it I submitted the wrong version as in I had 2 one was in Ms and was edited the other was on geocities I was going to co[p paste the final version from Ms but i frogot to and when i got to site to submit , this being my second time doing this i forgot that u dont type in a url to link the Br to the siet u actually like rewrite it onto the site I dind tknow that and i went ahead and opened the one on Geocities and not the one on Ms I was very tired at the time it was like 3 in the morning the next morning i saw all the Comments yours not being the first ones and I read over The BR seeing how horrible it was I apologized profusely and submitted the Edited version , ..... there thats how it happened .....but neway this arguing and "putting down" is so childish if u really want to be constructive can u tell me what you mean by "overdone" im sure there is some truth to it because many ppl have said this so far.. and scarab one thing i do agree with is that Gramar on a comment board means nothing Grammar in a Br does and unfortunately i never cared about either I will next time............. once again im sorry for all this...
joe |
| #50 LiquidNasty[84677] |
| proxy.iad4.netsetter.com |
What the hell is LiquidNasty? It's my semen. Duh.
I'm sorry I hurt your feelings, Scarab. I still think your reports are good. |
| #51 KingJamesXXX[84689] |
| st401a.mckenna.edu |
Dude, in light of all this criticism, we are overlooking one vital line.
"In the respite between battles, Flozzy amuses everybody by accusing himself of hacking."
ROTFLHAHAHAHAAA Maybe I've just taken too many shots to the head in football, but I found this report to be quite amusing. The one picture which just said, "No, No, No" was funny as hell also. I wish Scarab wasn't so upset - like LiquidNasty, I think that his reports are quite good, and he shouldn't stress so much. While the writing in this BR did need some work, I thought it was a well played game, and best of all the Terrans were the leading competitors! Although Khas did have to resort to Gayrriers :( Keep practicing, Joe - you choose good games. I look forward to your next report. |
| #52 AtomicOsis...[84857] |
| 1Cust172.tnt3.reno.nv.da.uu.net |
U DONT NEED TO WRITE A FUCKING BOOK IN THE COMMENT SECTION!
SCARAB U ARE GAY |
| #53 joe[84904] |
| pm1-57.sj.redshift.com |
seems there are no new comments so thnak you to all who supported me and thank you to all who gave me useful criticism and thnx everyone for reading
(no periods) -joe |
| #54 VisualJ++6.0[84929] |
| dialup18.afn.org |
wow.. what a scrub clan, fitting for such a scrub report.
Scarab, u > them, gj :D
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| #55 OMar chapa[146148] |
| www.kvisd.esc2.net |
| it stank |
| #56 joey lee[146149] |
| www.kvisd.esc2.net |
| booooooooooooooooo!!! |
| #57 pimp 0110[146150] |
| www.kvisd.esc2.net |
its pimped out foo
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