| #1 Starookie[84304] |
| edtn009456.hs.telusplanet.net |
| ugh...use html :[ |
| #2 Starookie[84305] |
| edtn009456.hs.telusplanet.net |
| ugh...use html :[ |
| #3 Starookie[84306] |
| edtn009456.hs.telusplanet.net |
| ugh...damn double post |
| #4 Monty Pylon[84307] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| It looked like a young child ate your report and proptly threw it up. Please use spacing and paragraphs when you write. |
| #5 Sexy^Orangutang[84309] |
| c1256320-a.stcla1.sfba.home.com |
| no html or paragraphs...wont read |
| #6 badtz maru[84312] |
| barry-asy-28.rutgers.edu |
| uhh no pictures to aww at wtf |
| #7 KrnThatDoesntHack[84313] |
| sc-24-165-93-1.socal.rr.com |
Well... i must say... good use of players... but bad grammer. i saw one part where it said however about 3 times in a row... like however, he did this however he countered however it was countercounterd blahblahblah and the same with soon... storm soon ripples thru the wraiths... soon however arbiters come blah blah blah... coulda been better :D. btw if you were using word, use the grammer check(unless it doesnt check that kind of stuff) just giving some helpful advice. feel free to ignore me just cuz no one knos me :/
KrnThatDoesntHack (amazing aint it?) |
#8  [84344] |
| zmapxypro05-b.zma.compaq.com |
Hmmmm that was a good game, and you did a decent job. You need to use better grammar, keep the report flowing like in the game. Hmm hard to describe. It just seemed really choppy. Good job, I think you can do much better. Keep it up!
5
Fox |
| #9 iggy[84356] |
| 13.los-angeles-18-19rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
FOR ME TO POOP ON!
asdf |
| #10 Arc@nE13[84366] |
| 213.166.21.132 |
| DESCENT GAME BUT THE BLACK ON WHITE MADE MY EYES POP,SPACE THEM PARAGRAPHS AND U WILL PROBABLY GET A 7 EVEN WITHOUT PIX! |
| #11 Arc@nE13[84368] |
| 213.166.21.132 |
| AND DONT FORGET TO PATCH UP YOUR GRAMMAR! |
| #12 RoyalGladiator[84380] |
| argenta01.argenta.net |
| thx it sucked I know I was in a hurry. Should have taken alot more time on it. Next time I will. |
| #13 RoyalGladiator[84381] |
| argenta01.argenta.net |
| Oh yea, your right Fox it was a very choppy. I barely gave the game its justice. |
| #14 ...[84387] |
| 24-240-44-88.hsacorp.net |
| I actually read all of it. Who was toss and who was terran? at then end you said that terran can win w/o carriers? WTF is up with that? Please actually report next and not write down random words... |
| #15 $24.95[84424] |
| netcache2-acld.auckland.clix.net.nz |
| I think he meant that terran would always kick if the toss didn't have carriers. |
| #16 BOBBY357[84431] |
| spider-te064.proxy.aol.com |
| good players but u need way better html, spacing, and grammar :(. better luck next time. |
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