| #1 UDontKnOwME[83714] |
| bsg-ma-cache2.icg.net |
I hope u all like the report. but please, PLEASE, dont bother me with the "I hate all fanfics" shit again
Have a nice day :),
UDKM |
| #2 iggy[83716] |
| 188.los-angeles-21-22rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| im the only one that read your report, arent i? |
| #3 Normandy-1944[83720] |
| spider-mtc-td024.proxy.aol.com |
| Wow, much better than the last 3 =). It's still mediocre, but hey, it's better than your past works |
| #4 HKRules[83722] |
| c319183.extern.lawrenceville.org |
I don't hate all fanfics.
wow, almost 40% over your average. |
| #5 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[83734] |
| static-114.itcanada.com |
OMG OMG YOUR IMPROVING! WOW THIS MARK TOTALLY OWNZ ALL YOUR OTHERS!
this series as taken a startling turn for the better, even managing to attain a whopping 50% on its latest installment. As I hinted at above, I'm absolutely astonished. |
| #6 Genesis[83745] |
| ubr-26.98.113.pinecastle.cfl.rr.com |
I am in agreeance, this addition has definitly imporved over the past few. I managed to read all the way threw without thinking about anything else, IE: It kept my attention. And thats pretty hard to do since im a Gemini. but yeah youve improved, just a little bit more dramatic descriptiveness and it could be ausome, like "He watched about 3 corsairs chase down an overlord, one was flying a bit to fast for as the overlord exploded, it gave the sair a nice blood-bath" yummy huh?
~Genesis |
| #7 phoenix[LoD][83792] |
| roc-24-95-209-16.rochester.rr.com |
Ugh,
Please abandon your pride and the idea. Your imagination and writing abilities are simply not up to the task of creating a story like this.
Know what scares me? Not only did Genesis give a terrible, terrible example of "dramatic 'description'," but he thought it would be "ausome" to include it. Wow.
-phoenix[LoD]
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #8 phoenix[LoD][83800] |
| roc-24-95-209-16.rochester.rr.com |
What in the name of Buh-Jesus happened here? Leave the comment sections alone, strumpets!
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #9 UDontknOwME[83855] |
| A010-1000.KRLD.splitrock.net |
Wow...I gotta quit that grass. I've grown so ashamed of these reports, I'm joining the witness protection program and STOPPING THE FANFICS.
Yeah...and these stories? It's NOT ME, IT'S THE 'SHROOMS! |
| #10 UDontKnOwME[83882] |
| h00104b075515.ne.mediaone.net |
If anyone believes this counter-me above, I will personally arrive at your house, chop of you brothers/sisters legs, staple them together, shove one up your fathers ass, one up your mothers ass, and what I would do to you is too gory for the public of br.com
But if you don't believe what that asshole impersonating me has said, then we don't have a problem :).
Have a nice day :),
UDKM |
| #11 MysteryMan[83935] |
| cable-147-86-237-24.anchorageak.net |
| Actually, I've liked these stories. I agree with the above people, it needs a little more description. However, I've enjoyed reading them. Keep it up! |
| #12 CKane[83983] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
As if this wasn't bad enough, it's posted under Starcraft.
please, Please, PLEASE post it under 'other', because thats what it is. |
| #13 CKane[83984] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
<i>“Sir, the captain of the Protoss’ vessel is hailing us,” called an officer.
“Put him through,” replied the Commander.
“Commander of the Terran vessel, you are hereby under Protoss control. I am ordering you once, and only once, to have you shut down your ship and allow an ambassador to come onboard. Resistance is futile. If you try to escape, we will have no choice but to destroy you,” ordered the Protoss Commander, who was in the Arbiter.</i>
If that wasn't a direct Star Trek ripoff, I don't know what is. And why do you need to say he's in the Arbiter? Isnt it obvious? |
| #14 CKane[84048] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| It sounds exactly like star trek, and that's good enough. Be original, the raters like that :p |
| #15 Harry Balsac[84094] |
| 155.176.112.116 |
| You could be like victum and smoke a lot of crack. |
| #16 [84111] |
| npcomet.n-polk.k12.ia.us |
| shithead |
| #17 Mixin~Marc[84114] |
| 216.124.78.253 |
All I have to say is that these stories are pretty
good in my opinion. But the only thing is if anyone was
actually paying attention to the stories, you would already
know the ending. (udontknowme)Basically already gave it away
but thats ok, i would give it away but its pretty good, and I dont
want (udontknowme) to come up with a different ending.
If you want to know what i think, just get 10 comments below
me and i will give it away,
sorry man,
CLUBHEADS :) |
| #18 UDontKnOwME[84135] |
| h00104b075515.ne.mediaone.net |
O, think you've figured me out, eh?????? Well have I got a surprise for you! Muhahahahahahahahaha!! (That evil laugh is hard to get right, I got it wrong :()
Have a nice day :),
UDKM |
| #19 UDONTKNOWME[84426] |
| proxy-1495.public.svc.webtv.net |
| I AM CURRENTLY WRITING THIS ON A COMPUTER IN FLORIDA. I WON'T BE PUTTING IN THE NEXT ISTALLMENT UNTIL I CAN GET BACK TO MY OWN COMPUTER AND TYPE T. :(. SORRY, BUT I'M HAVING WAY TO MCH FUN :P. J/K. ANYWAY, THE NEXT INSTALLMENT WILL COME SOMETIME AROND THE END OF MARCH FOR REASONS BEYOND MY CONTROL, SO, I'M SORRY. |
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