| #1 CaughtNaked[83606] |
| nas-3-158.dc-t.navipath.net |
| The 3000th BR is mine!! Eh, 1rst comment. |
| #2 CaughtNaked[83609] |
| nas-3-158.dc-t.navipath.net |
| Well, im glad to c that the HTML works this time. And i jus learned bgcolor so dun wry bout future reports. |
| #3 badtz_maru[83610] |
| barry-asy-79.rutgers.edu |
| hmm lucky you |
| #4 (S)~DEFUSER[83617] |
| spider-to068.proxy.aol.com |
| nice report. id say easily a 8-10. |
| #5 the()vermind[83620] |
| user-2ive6f1.dialup.mindspring.com |
| interesting report, the pics were very nice and stuff, but my only problem that there was precious little text. The pictures took up more space than the text, but hey, I'm a text maniac whose br's are always more than 8 pages long on word. GJ, range is 6-9, I give 7-8 |
| #6 BOBBY357[83625] |
| spider-te051.proxy.aol.com |
| nice report. |
| #7 ape[83629] |
| c193.150.239.42.cm-upc.chello.se |
| this was pretty god, despice the fact that i dont like naked persons, nor um, the other guy TT |
| #8 DarkMage[83638] |
| 209-81.dialup.cloud9.net |
ok, who fucked up the comments section?
-DarkMage |
| #9 CaughtNaked[83640] |
| nas-3-87.dc-t.navipath.net |
errrrr, if it waz ne1 bout meh comments section i wouldnt care...
~CN |
| #10 WarLeaderJustin[83642] |
| adsl-64-166-109-238.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
Nice job, but.............
What are you talking about report # 3000? Cause in report number wise, it's almost 4000. |
| #11 CaughtNaked[83643] |
| nas-3-87.dc-t.navipath.net |
| 4000 is including deleted, check News section of site, it says 3002 and climbing ( ()M's reports is 3002) |
| #12 Myth.[83646] |
| proxy1-external.rchmd1.bc.home.com |
| Nice, gj on not screwing up on 3000'th report. Id's say an 8 |
#13  [83649] |
| dsl-gte-jr13661-2.linkline.com |
| fixed comment section. Oh and a deleted a crap report before this one, so this actually report 2999. Sorry! :-) |
| #14 CaughtNaked[83653] |
| nas-3-87.dc-t.navipath.net |
| NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Damn You |
| #15 archon6[83659] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
color="red">Mitsu
color ="orange">RoyalG
watch urself. think about wrapping the text around the images. but den u need a lot of text...gj
who got 3000th?
7-8
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| #16 BUU[83665] |
| ACA1FA34.ipt.aol.com |
| I was a little confused as to what was actually going on.. i couldnt get a good idea either from the text OR the pics, Your pics were a little too small(first time you'll ever see this in a commen section), they looked cramped. |
| #17 Falcon[83672] |
| px3he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| this wasn't the 3000th br this was the 3947th br |
| #18 }DraginslayeR{[83690] |
| ip-111-6-130.nyc.navipath.net |
| The Pictures were pretty good, but the text was so-so. That was a really short BR if you just took away the pictures. Id say 5-7. |
| #19 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[83729] |
| static-114.itcanada.com |
hahahaha the title sucks now ;).
It's tempting to say "It took two people to write this?!" but, this was ok =). The collages were *not* good, being very narrow, messy, confused and too long. The overall atmosphere was also lacking. However, with both of these blows to the overall hull integrity this br stays afloat with a minimap, decent descriptive action, and, well, images! I'd give it a 7-8, so, gj I guess =D |
| #20 Genesis[83776] |
| ubr-26.98.113.pinecastle.cfl.rr.com |
Hmm Good, give it a 6 because of a few fatal flaws
1)The Collageses like |]agomar said were narrow and messy kinda pla.
2)I noticed at leaste twice that you messed up in yer HTML where the font color tag was and it showed the color="orange" once or twice, proof that you didnt proof read.
3)Not enough text, makes me a sad panda =( i like those big dramatic descriptions of the battle with a little spice of comedy added. Coarse i read/write fanfics(i only writen one so far that got a 4.5 =*( cuz i didnt have a good plot and i did really bad, shame on me. But i keep saying my next one will own, and it will damnit). So im gunna shut the hell up now cuz im stupid =)
~Genesis |
| #21 probe[83890] |
| 24161239hfc163.tampabay.rr.com |
this had so much potential. the pics were good, so were the other neat effects you added. but gazillions of html errors and ugly font/spacing.... fugly.
5 |
| #22 probe[83891] |
| 24161239hfc163.tampabay.rr.com |
| yeh whoever broke the comment section again can go suck a cock, thx gw. |
| #23 CaughtNaked[83901] |
| 205-222-88-120.mcps.k12.md.us |
| I got screwed. A 6? |
#24  [83907] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
| yah u just got another 6 |
| #25 Napoleic[84155] |
| proxy5.rdc1.bc.home.com |
| It was easily a 7 if you proof read all the html errors. Also the game seemed good but I couldnt really follow it that well. |
| #26 [84624] |
| sdn-ar-009casfrMP078.dialsprint.net |
Pics were alright, but the main text... sheesh... needs some proofreading. -_-
Battles were not detailed and lots of errors... like when you kept saying they had 4 pools or 6 pools or something (which I think you mean 4 Hatcheries).
I think the game reporting got really sloppy after the first few minutes because you didn't go into enough detail. And how did Zerg possibly rebuild after their main was destroyed... and how did they build up to 40 hydra/10 lings, then back up to 50 hydras, etc. after being owned so hard early on? Also, you didn't tell enough about the Protoss army.
Make sure to proofread. |
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