| #1 boob[81769] |
| proxy1-external.mntp1.il.home.com |
| hi hi |
| #2 HKRules[81770] |
| 12.107.65.58 |
| owned |
| #3 HKRules[81771] |
| 12.107.65.58 |
| and 3rd too |
| #4 HKRules[81773] |
| 12.107.65.58 |
sorry for posting again, but just wanted to point out a few things:
1, HAHHAHAHAHA I KNEW it was Zeratul at the end of the last chapter.
2, Wow. They de-zergified Kerrigan? Does that mean they took her Zerg Essence out and bottled it, waiting for some Protoss Essence to combine with the aforementioned Kerrigan Essence?? Zeratul, perhaps.
3, How come no one has ever put up the idea of Duran being Xel'Naga?
4, Continue with this series. please
5, Why aren't you commenting? |
| #5 Monty Pylon[81775] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| I watch the comments and see what people think first. If I need to defend myself then I post or if I want to ask a question or just say thx. |
| #6 Khas'andro[81776] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Nice. |
| #7 Jester-C-Bomb[81786] |
| spider-mtc-ti014.proxy.aol.com |
Very good
HK- i thought everyone knew duran was Xel'Naga :)
awesome fanfic, and what the hell is with the influx of crappy fanfic lately (no offense, i mean besides this awesome piece of lituarture).. report some battles people!! |
| #8 Eat-the-Chobo[81794] |
| spider-tl031.proxy.aol.com |
| If you stop the story now i will hunt you down and gut you! |
| #9 badtz_maru[81795] |
| barry-asy-87.rutgers.edu |
very good, yes fan fict abuse
oh well i wish kerrigan stayed terran ....
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| #10 -Chowder[81797] |
| spider-wq012.proxy.aol.com |
| Very good fanfic. I was just wondering, what kind of technology do the Protoss possess that is able to take the on the Hybrids? Overlords can't see them, and neither did Kerrigan. |
| #11 Jester-C-Bomb[81798] |
| spider-mtc-ti014.proxy.aol.com |
| ditto Chowders question |
| #12 Daedeloth[81807] |
| bele175.wuh.wustl.edu |
wow, excellent writing. I also went back and read some of your older fan fiction. You are a superb and talented writer. Keep up the good work!
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| #13 Dillihole[81814] |
| 1Cust219.tnt6.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Now this is what I'm talking about with a fan fic. Good writing, dramatic, and a good story line. All you other fan fic fags should be taking notes from Monty's writings. |
| #14 Dillihole[81815] |
| 1Cust219.tnt6.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| I would like to retract the word "fags" from above. That was a bit harsh. |
| #15 Black Label[81827] |
| nchobo02.telenet-ops.be |
| YEEHAA!!! WE WANT MORE, WE WANT MORE, WE WANT MORE!!!! |
| #16 ThieverIV[81858] |
| spider-wo032.proxy.aol.com |
| Still very good. Dammit I have had a fan-fic series that I was going to post for around 3 months, but then Monty did his first series, so I waited. Then when he was done all these crappy ones came out, so I waited for that to stop. Then Monty came out with THIS and I have to wait through this and all the crappy ones after it to post mine!!! (I just hope that it won't suck like so many coming out now). |
| #17 awe 6[81886] |
| proxy3-external.pinol1.sfba.home.com |
| good story, monty, i think i know how it is that duran can change kerrigan back to human. i wont ruin by saying, but i remember duran saying he had been playing kerrigan like a pawn from the start ;)... |
| #18 i'm a new guy here[81898] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
whoa hey monty
how the hell is kerrigan human again?
thats wierd. |
| #19 UDontKnOwME[81943] |
| spider-mtc-tc024.proxy.aol.com |
| Well theiver, you dont have to worry about my series any more. |
| #20 Metis[81997] |
| host62-6-112-47.host.btclick.com |
| this is very cool, keep doing it please. |
| #21 SoMeOnE[82397] |
| spider-we072.proxy.aol.com |
| Keep it coming and hurry up with the next chapter! |