| #1 fgdhfhfgddhfg[81578] |
| c255141-a.frmt1.sfba.home.com |
| weird |
| #2 TheVictim[81579] |
| 155.176.112.95 |
I'll take that as a compliment :P
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| #3 Harry Balsac[81583] |
| 12-201.075.popsite.net |
Dude, that is whacked. What the hell have you been smoking?
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| #4 silverj[81584] |
| cache.bora.net |
| Probably the most creative writing I've seen on this page. It reminds me of the sci-fi from Analog and Writers of the Future. |
| #5 Cearas[81586] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| Just gimme the weed ok, come on, hand it over. |
| #6 america~jin[81587] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
| This site should be renamed "BattleStories.com". |
| #7 Monty Pylon[81589] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
Very interesting approach you have here. Kind of like SC ER. Very creative indeed. Title had me confused for a sec.
Damn the man, save the Empire!
Monty Pylon |
#8  [81592] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
wow, nice...
Intelligent writing, unique plot, and good character development.
All in all, my only complaint is that it could stand to be fleshed out a bit more. I think its a tad short. But other than that, good job. 8.
Dref |
| #9 HKRules[81595] |
| 12.107.65.123 |
"Removing the Sp|ne would be another matter" LOL
Seriously, this was a interesting and absorbing non-battle (well, kinda) battle story. I agree with Drefsab that it should be fleshed out. How about reposting it with what happens after? You could make this into a really great series. |
| #10 shockwave[81596] |
| exchange1.sensable.com |
| Thanks for posting this here, nice story. I suspect you didn't spend very much time on this, which is why it's even more impressive. You demonstrate a lot of good writing talent and imagination. |
| #11 The_Victim[81598] |
| 20-184.075.popsite.net |
This was written as a joke in repsonse to someone on Shock's forum who was complaining that I dwelling too long on an argument about bunkering. Brad was actually 'me'. The previous message was 'me' going nuts in a bunker. I received a reply saying to quit roleplaying, it was scaring him. I figured this story would put him over the edge... :P
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| #12 dude[81623] |
| mkc-65-26-12-201.kc.rr.com |
| wow, weird but very good, write some more! :) |
| #13 The Victim[81631] |
| 155.176.112.98 |
I'll actually put some thought into a new one, don't know if I will be able to work the first story into a series. It WAS just a joke...
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| #14 phoenix[LoD][81646] |
| roc-24-95-209-16.rochester.rr.com |
In that case, you write even your jokes very well.
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #15 <font color=yellow><b>Protophobic</b></font>[81657] |
| cm-24-169-218-148.nycap.rr.com |
<font color=yellow>like a lol, boiling scew was difficulty and lengthy.
i bet most of ppl above didnt see the film but, cuz they would agree.
exacty what does does getting stupc ;) impossible to replicate. ;) what part of the br on u bandwagon! hypothalamus or hippocampus... one of the two ;) is where cannabinoid receptors are. |
| #16 TheVictim[81734] |
| 155.176.112.80 |
Thanks for the insight into a drug-ravaged mind Proto, now we all know what happened to Brad when he got out...
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| #17 Rim_Jobe[81809] |
| 250.fort-worth-08-09rs16rt.tx.dial-access.att.net |
| Joke or no joke... that was great. I hate fan fic for the most part but it was a good story and had something to do with the game. Killer man. |
| #18 <font color="#FF0000">Twip</font><font color="#452622">[81996] |
| port-22.gall-ts1.cloh.net |
| Proto? Is that indicative of heavy use of a proto-pipe? |
| #19 kagato[83941] |
| 155.176.112.105 |
| Great story. I'm looking foreward to reading the others you've posted. Very impressive. |
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