| #1 Not saying[79168] |
| proxy01.ncle.hunterlink.net.au |
| haha beat u all :)))))))!!!!!!!!!1 |
| #2 the()vermind[79169] |
| user-2iveasq.dialup.mindspring.com |
What have you done to the paragraphs?!!!!! I couldn't read that thing without going crazy!
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| #3 SCV~007[79170] |
| t1o57p62.telia.com |
I agree with Overmind, make sure the paragraphs look alright before you post it.
I'mm not going to read this. |
| #4 Scarab[79182] |
| AC86226F.ipt.aol.com |
just an idea, but when something is copy/pasted-it usually is the reason parafraphs fuck up like that. Meaning he typed it somewhere else, or copied it from somewhere =[
just a thought |
| #5 Cearas[79186] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| Holy shit man, owned by formatting. Preview all the way buddy. |
| #6 Iron Lung[79191] |
| a-db.aspn.net |
| I read it and it was actually really good. Excellent writing and detail. This is one of the only fan fics I have been able to read through entirely. Good job. |
#7  [79195] |
| 216.117.89.29 |
As I continue to spam this comments section, I notice that the author's name is included in the posting. Are you Alan? Or are you just pasting it here because you thought it was cool?
Dref |
| #8 Cearas[79196] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| hahaha, he better hope he is. |
| #9 Slicer[79200] |
| nchobo03.telenet-ops.be |
| I admit, I copied it. I found it too good to just stand there on a website that no one visits (except me). I just wanted to share it with everyone that visits this site. |
| #10 Scarab[79205] |
| AC86226F.ipt.aol.com |
| then dont put it under your name you stupid fuck |
| #11 T.T[79207] |
| spider-mtc-th012.proxy.aol.com |
"Although he felt the reaper's hand already beckoning, years of brainwashing in the army had driven all logic from his head. He ran now because he still could; no purpose or goal in mind for he had no thoughts of again finding safety."
"one lone soldier raised his rifle above his head and opened his mouth to the world: "DEATH TO THE ZERG!!!""
"Each human, who only years before was unique and beautiful, now merely existed as a cog in the indifferent game of war. Individually, they were issued a weapon, and thus became machines. They had been twisted and bent into hateful automatons that were forced to decide who had the right to exist alongside them."
::tries hard not to kill author:: |
| #12 [79303] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
no rating...
Dref |
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