| #1 A_Monkey[78641] |
| spider-wl082.proxy.aol.com |
| This Is my first br and i don't know how to get pictures into it so if anyone can help that would be great and can u give semi-possittive comments |
| #2 Scarab[78642] |
| AC8CFD0A.ipt.aol.com |
| its unfortuntate that the FAQ hasn't been useful whatsoever |
| #3 GoaTZiLLa![78649] |
| adsl-dynamic6-6.cleveland.oh.ameritech.net |
<html><i>Win starts by just mining minerals and searching for Com with his overlord and a drone which finnally gets to Com’s base on the bottom. Then win builds 2 zealots.</i></html>
I stopped there. |
| #4 [SM]Strega~F[78655] |
| netcachesyd2.ozemail.com.au |
| GoaTZiLLa! has a point (but an annoying to type name). If Win is searching with an overlord, how can he build zealots? Also, you use words like "So" and "Then" too often when starting sentences. Use other words for a much better effect. Fair amount of detail though. Look through the "FAQ" and "Reporting Guides" sections of this site for info on pictures. I give it a 3. |
| #5 abusive-baracuda[78663] |
| pool51.tyler.net |
| "this is my first br hopefully better than anyone elses" i dont think you quite reached your hopes |
| #6 Suicidal Insanity[78665] |
| RAS22-039.UNI-MUENSTER.DE |
| To get pictures use HTML code as in <img "location"&rt |
#7 [78667] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
hmmm, you worked hard getting the detail, but try to sound less like a robot when you report. Put some feeling into it.
And Suicidal, its <img <b>src</b>="location">
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Dref |
| #8 WhiteLancer[78724] |
| ip-111-114-223.stockton.navipath.net |
| Mommy... make it stop... no more mommy... don't wanna read it mommy... NO MOMMY NO! |
| #9 King~Chobo[78729] |
| user63-147-37-159.airswitch.net |
| I "Somehow" think that I am dumber for "Somehow" reading this. |
| #10 the()vermind[79694] |
| user-2ive6n4.dialup.mindspring.com |
| hi nick, if you ever read this, let me know at school |