| #1 the()vermind[78394] |
| user-2ive7h3.dialup.mindspring.com |
Hi people, please comment on this report. As far as I know, some of the colors are messed up and grammar isn't exactly the best. However, I did write a better report than any of the other ones I wrote with my old name, {ahc}overmind, right?
Should I keep the poll on the bottom for other br's? |
| #2 Evilbob[78399] |
| netcache3.is.co.za |
| Nice one, good writing style |
| #3 DarkMage[78400] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
nice report! when someone is white, i just either have their name be gray, or bold.
- the gosu unit of the report should be at the bottom.
- didn't WillyWonka leave because he thought agsdad was hacking? he didn't see the observer spotting his drop :)
9
nice job!
-DarkMage |
| #4 CraX[78402] |
| dialups-44.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| as stated in the poll i gave it a 9, good job |
| #5 Cearas[78418] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| You also made the mistake of posting after the best BR ever. |
| #6 mattkid[78425] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
YA made a spelling mistake at da smartest zerglings ever in sarcraft
i just noticedthat
rating:9 |
| #7 derek[78440] |
| spider-wq031.proxy.aol.com |
the report poll=half the ownage of this report
i mean, great writing, and the pictures were definitely above-average, but great idea with the poll
i liked it
8.5 |
| #8 garett[78448] |
| cdm-158-162-tyl.cox-internet.com |
| this is a 10 |
| #9 WhiteLancer[78455] |
| ip-111-112-56.stockton.navipath.net |
| garett, did you ever recover from hoss's spamming? |
| #10 I_am_Gen.Patton[78456] |
| spider-wn021.proxy.aol.com |
Woohoo! I'm #9! That's good...I guess..
Anyway, that was a truly kick ass report. The pics were cool, and the text just owned. Some minor complaints though...
1. About the "Gosu unit of the game"... It was a lurker. With 110 kills. Just one question. You never even mentioned a Lurker, much less one with 110 kills.
Hmm...well, I guess that was my only complaint. All in all, a truly great BR. Keep it up!
Score:9 |
| #11 the()vermind[78459] |
| user-2iveam3.dialup.mindspring.com |
| DAMN IT, I meant to write that the lurker was from a diffrent name, sorta like quotes in king-lewis' report, but oh well, I'll correct it later |
| #12 Wisest~Yoda[78470] |
| pm3-1-161.boscobel.mwt.net |
i gave it a 1 on your little poll thing cuz it was really long and i didnt feel like reading it
im sure its probably good, too bad i cant read well |
| #13 'bengalaas'[78475] |
| 1Cust206.tnt1.reno.nv.da.uu.net |
Solid writing, quality pics..
8 |
| #14 awe 6[78482] |
| proxy3-external.pinol1.sfba.home.com |
| good report, but it needs a smidgen more pics. if it had a few more pics to move the reader through the text with less difficulty (not saying that it was boring text. it WAS neccessary to have that much text for a long game, but pics brighten a large block of text substantially and make it easier to get an even better feel for whats going on), i would say it was worthy of a 9 or even a 10. otherwise, i'd say 8, even a high 8.5 for the great quality pics. keep at it! :) |
#15  [78520] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
I think you did a good job with the pictures in this report, however, I must echo Newbie's sentiments to a certain extent regarding the text.
When doing an FFA report, there is always going to be more building up then in a normal game. This is the boring part of the game and when paragraph after paragraph is spent describing it, it gets pretty monotonous. One example, "<i>Now, further north we find ~7th^Agsdad with nothing new. He has reinforced his defenses with 3 more dragoons, and has a probe and a dragoon at his natural expansion</i>" Nothing New? Then why even include it?
The cool part of reading FFAs is the action that is taking place, the temporary alliances that form and then dissolve as the game balance shifts, the clashes of huge armies that are built, and the unusual tactics that you don't see in normal games. Look for games with this kind of action and then focus your report on that action.
7 from me.
Cheers,
Dref |
| #16 Kaz![78525] |
| pool65.greynet.net |
Not bad.
However, a few things.
#1 - Upgrades? What upgrades? You never mentioned it at all.
#2 - Way too much detail in parts, and way to little in others. You didn't even tell us what type of forces the terran dropped on the toss, but you told us exact number of vultures / tanks / gollies where in the assualt on the zerg.
#3 - more action, less build up.
That's it tho. 7.5 |
| #17 smoke-[78565] |
| dubax1-132.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
| How did Terran not win? |
| #18 the()vermind[78571] |
| user-2ive7vk.dialup.mindspring.com |
| interesting how before a report gets a rating, users predict what the report will get, are way off, and then the people who comment after the rater are always within .5 points of the current rating. Interesting though, the only person that correctly ascertained what the rating was going to be was lucky newbie, and I give him a toast for that. But I guess that some people just can't rate accuretly, much less 6 out of 7 people always being at least 1 point away from the "true" rating. |
| #19 LuckyNewbie:P[78603] |
| user-33qto5t.dialup.mindspring.com |
| yay, free toast |
| #20 Core[78607] |
| proxy1-external.huntgtn1.wv.home.com |
| Terran should have done better =( |
| #21 DarkMage[78609] |
| ool-18bfd1f7.dyn.optonline.net |
so i can't rate. sue me.
:)
-DarkMage |
| #22 KingJamesXXX[78612] |
| 134.243.9.218 |
I agree with Smoke and Core... what the hell was Wonka doing all that time?! When he did attack, he could only muster one seige that involved like six tanks, twenty marines, and a couple of valks! What happened to the money from all of those expansions that he controlled?
Well played by Agsdad, but I am sorry to see such a poor showing by the terran. An 8.5 for the excellent writing. |
| #23 GammaRayBurst[78639] |
| adsl-64-165-202-5.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
ok i didn't read the report but its ASTROLOGY NOT ASTRONOMY
get it right
-GRB |
| #24 Cearas[78666] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| the()vermind, that's exactly why they are raters and others aren't. People just comment on pics and writing and length. Raters are raters because they go through everything in detail and know what is worth what. This was a definate 7 though. |
| #25 badtz_maru[78995] |
| barry-asy-84.rutgers.edu |
it was good report
but coulda been better organization
stuff way too long for havin not
a lota pics i agree with yoda |
| #26 death_head[79480] |
| aero2.snds.com |
| damn hilarious he he with the astrology part and everything |
#27  [80737] |
| a24b31n66client104.hawaii.rr.com |
| sfdg |
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