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#1 Monty Pylon[75801]
gateway.Culinary.EDU
Damn! Somebody should really make a scenario like this. Toss and terran vs zerg and terran vs zerg and a battlecruiser. Have all the characters there too. I don't want to but damn someone should.
#2 OuTSiDeR[75808]
spider-wo083.proxy.aol.com
Second! Very good..I liked it, keep em comin!
#3 [75809]
cacheengine2.mosquitonet.com
second non-author!! Closest I've ever come!!!! 5 CHEERS FOR MASTER OF MORDOR!!

*RAH!!* *RAAAAAH!!* *RRAAAAAAAH!!!!!*

Okay 3's enough. One more :P *RRAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!*



#4 [75810]
cacheengine2.mosquitonet.com
PS DO'H!!! forgot my name!!

(Comments section needs an edit function... JV!!)

#5 MasterOfMordor[75811]
cacheengine2.mosquitonet.com
BAAHAHAHAHAHAH! I did it again! Typeing my name in now...
#6 MasterOfMordor[75813]
cacheengine2.mosquitonet.com
Wooohoo!! I deserve another 5 cheers, just for my stupidity! YEAH! (I'm gonna remember my name this time :P)
#7 ThieverIV[75817]
spider-wc052.proxy.aol.com
I knew it, you managed to draw all the plot lines together at the end. Good job, not everyone can do that effectively. Btw, could I plz, plz, plz be in just one scene and then die really fast? Like I'm a marine out scouting and radio back "Sir, this is ThieverIV, I don't see any zerg. Could we have been wrong?" and then suddenly 5 zerglings unburrow and rip me to shreds (you get the idea).
#8 Monty Pylon[75818]
gateway.Culinary.EDU
I could put you in but not as a person per say. I do have an idea.
#9 CKane[75820]
c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com
;p

Shortly before you released this series I started a fan fic series of my own, but it died.

I have resurrected it...
and it will be released after this series is over...

that is, if its any good.
I have the first one and a half installments done, review them for me somebody and make sure it isnt crap...

Oh yeah.
This story right here gets an 8
mark gimme rating power gogogo











#10 CKane[75823]
c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com
if u want to take a look (i consider it a sneak preview :) ICQ me at 94604402
#11 Sid6.9[75826]
1Cust183.tnt8.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net
Very neat, and as Monty Burns would say "Excellent, it's all coming together." Can't wait for the final battle, and who will live, and who will die. One things for sure, it won't be Kerrigan or Mengsk as neither are there. But whoa momma, look out, this last chapter is going to be good...

You know a suggestion for the last one. You should do the battle, and then have one last chapter talking about the aftermath and so on and so forth. You know, kinda give us a few days to chomp on the final battle and then tell us the aftermath, that would be cool.

#12 -=FOrsaken=-[75831]
c114217.upc-c.chello.nl
YES YES ARMAGEDDOOONNNNNNNNNNN CCCCCAAAAARRRRNNNAAAAAAAGGGGGGGEEEEEEEE BAATTTLLLLLEEEE
KILL KILL KILL FOR THE SWARM!!!!!!!! Damn stimpack is some heavy shit yo:(
Few calmed down a bit..... few damn Monty got me excited again:) Damn this story is some realll good stuff. And it just keeps coming. Good the storyline is becoming a bit simepeler again.. is good very good it makes the sory comprehencible again, Monty u really are doing this perfect. Keeping the story interesting and complicated with many storylines but you let diffrent storylines collide once in a while so it all doenst get to complicated. specially this new move. The second invasion of Air. I love it:) All the parties exept Kerrigan herself in one place. Should make things interesting and result in some nice shifting in the balance of power. This is very nicely done. U got talent. Got a idea yet how I'm gona be in the story? Surprise me and make it good:P hihi Tnx yo. Keep'em comin.
Me <--------- Needs his drug :)


#13 CKane[75838]
c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com
2nd invasion of Air?
#14 Heero_Yamato[75842]
hil-qbu-ppw-vty17.as.wcom.net
YEAH! Hey, so is the next chapter gonna be the last? PLease put me in the story. I could just be one of the protoss troops. Maybe make me die or something. This is the best fanfic yet!
#15 [ScV][76268]
cache3.ihug.com.au
HHAHAHAHA fear my Super Duper Special Police Force.... I'm still waiting for my Battlecruiser to go down in flames though...

i rate it 15... cause I'm in it

evern without me, its a 8-9 just cause of the great way in which the plots are coming together.

GW =)




#16 -=FOrsaken=-[76274]
c114217.upc-c.chello.nl
yes Ckane the 2cond ..what do you think the overmind did with Aiur? Have a luch appointment with Tassadar?
nono ;)
#17 SarcasticSage[76938]
216.109.0.201
<marquee>The marqueeing fiend has returned to kick more butt, btw Khas i hate you....</marquee>

SS
#18 SarcasticSage[76940]
216.109.0.201
<font=5 color=red><marquee><b><i>Really Khas you gotta let me win for once please god save me from your pansy tactics...</i></b></marquee></font>



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