| #1 Sid6.9[75247] |
| 1Cust40.tnt2.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Well there it is folks. I hope you enjoyed it, I know I did in making it, and hopefully will be doing more. :)
Please give me your thoughts, as I know I usually do. |
| #2 MysteryMan[75248] |
| cable-48-83-237-24.anchorageak.net |
VERY good! Nice descriptions, especially since it's a text report. Write more reports!
BTW, will you ICQ me sometime? |
| #3 MysteryMan[75249] |
| cable-48-83-237-24.anchorageak.net |
| Also, I don't buy the story of your "Print Screen" button not working. You always were the writer =) |
| #4 mattkid[75250] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| good reprot |
| #5 Sid6.9[75251] |
| 1Cust40.tnt2.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| I would but my comp got fried again about 2 months ago. I had to re-formate, and lost ICQ, I'm just lazy and haven't gotten around to re-downloading it. |
| #6 MysteryMan[75252] |
| cable-48-83-237-24.anchorageak.net |
| **Whips Sid** Re-install! Take 2 minutes, and I really want to talk to you again...do you ever get on B.Net? |
| #7 Sid6.9[75253] |
| 1Cust40.tnt2.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Oh hey, leave me the URL to the Riptide forum, I forgot what it is, and never see any of the old crew in the War Room.
God I hope I remember my password. |
| #8 MysteryMan[75255] |
| cable-48-83-237-24.anchorageak.net |
http://24.68.6.43:16000/forum/login.asp
This forum died though. Go to www.rstefan01.com, and tell them that the Mystery sent you. |
| #9 Sid6.9[75256] |
| 1Cust40.tnt2.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Ahh yes, okay, I hope I can remember my password there too.
Oh yes, I really did want screens too, especially the one where Navy EMPed his own Battlecrusiers, that was a sweet move to win the game. |
| #10 MysteryMan[75257] |
| cable-48-83-237-24.anchorageak.net |
RStefan01 has to ok your account, because of recent spam. But I'm sure he will.
Get on B.Net, we have catchin' up to do! |
| #11 WarGod[75258] |
| cm985140-b.denton1.tx.home.com |
damn, 11th, well time to go read it!
-War |
| #12 MysteryMan[75259] |
| cable-48-83-237-24.anchorageak.net |
| Or, at least, go to the chat rooms here!(Not the pong one, that keeps messing up for me.) |
| #13 Starookie[75260] |
| edtn009463.hs.telusplanet.net |
Since you always do this so will i,
THE GOOD:
Well layed out report, great description and in-game details
The Bad:
text only reports make my eyeballs sting after a while :O
The Ugly: Having 3 hours of homework after i finish this comment
Overall: B+ or A-, up to you :)
GJ! |
| #14 Sid6.9[75261] |
| 1Cust40.tnt2.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Ha ha ha thanks StarRookie, I was wondering when someone would do that. :)
Mattkid- Glad you liked it. |
| #15 (TYC)Khas'andro[75262] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| LOL Rookie and Sid, i was gonna ask if Sid was gonna GBU his own report, but Rookie got to it before me =) |
| #16 FuRyEDge[75264] |
| cx665824-a.irvn1.occa.home.com |
| Good text reports like this just make my day. Way to go! Kudos on making the background black, also! Hope you'll report on more battles in the future! |
| #17 Wangsonn[75265] |
| adsl-78-164-41.gsp.bellsouth.net |
| err ac/dc arent satanic.. THEY ROX |
| #18 'bengalaas'[75268] |
| 1Cust164.tnt2.reno.nv.da.uu.net |
| it had a happy ending awwwww |
| #19 WarGod[75270] |
| cm985140-b.denton1.tx.home.com |
"and the zlots warp blades"
zealots dont have warp blades, sorry to say that, i wish they did tho... |
| #20 testosterone[75271] |
| mkc-65-26-143-252.kc.rr.com |
| even though i dont like the good/bad/ugly thing this is the way text only reports should be =D |
| #21 Sid6.9[75274] |
| 1Cust40.tnt2.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Khas- Heh heh you can still do one if you want too. Good feedback will make my reports better too. Hey, I make mistakes as well.
FuRyEDge- Glad you enjoyed it.
Wangsonn- I agree AC/DC does rock!
'benglaas'- Happy endings give everyone warm fuzzies all over, and plus, we are all good friends.
WarGod- Oops, thanks, I won't do that again.
testosterone- Thanks, and I did change the format to not having 2 negatives as you suggested in the forum awhile back. It just took me awhile to realize it (some things take awhile to sink into me brain.)How do you like my new format?
Thanks for the comments everyone. |
| #22 Back in Black?[75277] |
| spider-wb023.proxy.aol.com |
No music??? Aw well. Muy excelente. Good format, writing, HTML, the game was good. It won't get a 10, but I will give it a 7. Nice work
LE |
| #23 [bad]derek[75286] |
| spider-mtc-tf061.proxy.aol.com |
emp'ing your own battlecruisers vs feedback...what a novel idea. Perhaps Loop would have won if he had not sent that one DA in the shuttle to do a sneak-feedback-attack. The BCs would have ran in with full energy, unaware of the DAs.
good game, nice writing
off to pong:P |
| #24 {~Ascension~}[75287] |
| 90.rochelle-park-01-02rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| Whoa, dude. Ownage. The writing was good(you knew wut the hell was going on) and the ending was definitely unexpected. 8. |
| #25 OuTSiDeR[75293] |
| spider-wa014.proxy.aol.com |
Wow...totally sweet. Better then 3/4 the reports with pics..If I was to rate it I would give it an 8.
-Outsider |
| #26 Monty Pylon[75295] |
| spider-tf044.proxy.aol.com |
| I wanted to do a GBU but the idea was taken. This report is good. Too good. Now Sid must die in the sixth Chronicle. |
| #27 Starookie[75298] |
| edtn009463.hs.telusplanet.net |
Got that right biotches. THE GBU IS MINE! ALL MINE !@$!@
The good- I have the gbu rights!
The bad- Others will point at me and say "wow! he has the gbu! Fag."
The Ugly- Im going to use it whenever i comment now! KEKEKEKKEKEE |
| #28 Sid6.9[75304] |
| 1Cust168.tnt11.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
LivingException- Yeah I wish I did have "Back in Black" playing on the report, that would have rocked.
[Bad]Derek- Actually I think Navy knew about the DA's well before attacking his main, he was constantly using ComSat's. The DA on the cliff I think surprised Navy.
{~Ascension~}- Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. I was taking lots of notes to make sure I didn't forget key things, that's what makes the report, remembering the whole game.
OuTSiDeR- Thanks. But I think some of those that brought out Pic battle reports will get better. At least I hope so.
Monty Pylon- Oh no, I'm going to die now! Noooooooo!! Heh heh j/k I don't mind dying if it serves a good purpose in the story, and I won't get mad if I do. Glad you enjoyed my report.
Starookie- You can certainly have the rights to the G,B,U if you want, since I changed my format to the "Things" report. Just beware though, there are those out there that hate the G,B,U if you do decide to use it on a regular basis. And I'm sure alot of authors will benefit from your advice. :)
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| #29 KingJamesXXX[75315] |
| ce1-mach.mckenna.edu |
| Well written! You have forever put to rest the notion that a picture is worth a thousand words. That EMP-your-own-cruisers move is the greatest thing since sliced bread, but I think the best part was the sportsmanship both players displayed at the end. I look forward to your next effort! |
| #30 Evilbob[75321] |
| netcache3.is.co.za |
| Awesome stuff. :) |
| #31 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[75323] |
| bc-kam-a53-03-16.look.ca |
| good work. |
| #32 StyxxA[75326] |
| 195.94.222.1 |
Very good BR, vongratulations on that.
And I ABSOLUTELY LOVE TEXT ONLY, as you
can read it without any problems while
you are at work :)
Hope to see some more like this again! |
| #33 {ahc}overmind[75327] |
| user-2ive7s3.dialup.mindspring.com |
| yo yo, I would like to say that this was a very good br sid. I think that this is in the 6-9 range. Personally, I'd give it an 8, gotta love the text |
| #34 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[75338] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
| No sorry I dont suffer any of your symptoms - I just have a life. Therefore I dont want to read tons of droning texts concerning gay lemurs ( that was what this was about, right? ) |
| #35 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[75339] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
lol 6-9 range, omg.
I would say it is in the 1-10 range, as I didnt read it. |
#36  [75353] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Great report. Awesome ending. EMPing one's own BCs, that's damn funny. And terran beatdown toss on a wide open land map without metal. Cheers to Navy though I am forced to wonder where all Loop's troops were if he had 3 operating expos... :)
8
Cheers,
Dref |
| #37 badtz_maru[75364] |
| 209.27.162.74 |
being a person who likes pictures
and no attenstion span
i didnt like this 1
im prejudice when it comes to brs
but accordin to these comments i suppose u deserved it
gj |
| #38 marshmallow[75366] |
| cc751880-a.bchgrv1.in.home.com |
| 24 goons with storm should own eight BC's... |
| #39 {ahc}overmind[75367] |
| user-2ivecbg.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I'm a profit, for every report that I've predicted a rating I get it right. First, I give a number range, then I say what I think it should get. And when I say what the br should get, I get it right. for 5 reports so far, and I'm going to keep on going |
| #40 Napoleic[75370] |
| van4d43.dial.uniserve.ca |
There were several distracting grammatical errors in there and it didn't seem to hold my interest much. It was a fairly interesting game though, except that the toss should not have lost with so many expansions. 6 gates for 3 running exps? Try 12 plz.
Also saying gg first when you think you win is bad manner, don't say gg until the losing player does first, unless of course you are the losing player. Then he called him an ass after that? I'd be laughing my ass off when I won if I was terran.
Decent br overall though, I'd say a 7-8 |
| #41 Sid6.9[75371] |
| 1Cust39.tnt6.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Marshmellow- It wasn't 24 goons, more like 18 with a few that popped out of the gates during the battle. And with a EMP on 12 of the Dragoons, they didn't do much of anything. Also, Loop was doing feedback first, so the goons were gone by the time he used Psi Storm. And yes, all the Battlecruisers were well in the red at the end, except for the 2 that did get destroyed. So basically if Loop hadn't stopped making troops during his attack at Navy's original main, he may have won. |
#42  [75417] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Testosterone said it all ....<i> "this is the way text only reports should be =D"</i>
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-Dr.Z |
| #43 {ahc}overmind[75466] |
| user-2iveaaq.dialup.mindspring.com |
| adjectives are good, don't insult adjectives |
| #44 Dausuul[75469] |
| menthe.cs.purdue.edu |
Sweeeet.
Great BR. Like everyone else, I loved the EMP-your-own-cruisers move. Write more!
--Dausuul |
| #45 iamdumb[75803] |
| ippd-ds7.ippd.ufl.edu |
| weren't you a lesbian a couple of posts back?? |
| #46 Sid6.9[75829] |
| 1Cust183.tnt8.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Of course I'm a lesbian, I love women. What? Don't you? |
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