| #1 Fenix_risin[74718] |
| spider-wa043.proxy.aol.com |
| This is my first br it is pretty bad i know but i don't know html so i would like to know if u know any sites that teach it then tell me thanx. |
| #2 marky6[74719] |
| user-2ive7n2.dialup.mindspring.com |
| Dear sir, I would like to say that this report wasted my #@@#! time. You suck, include details and stuff FOR $#@#$@ gods sake |
| #3 Fenix_risin[74720] |
| spider-wa043.proxy.aol.com |
| This is my first br it is pretty bad i know but i don't know html so i would like to know if u know any sites that teach it then tell me thanx. |
| #4 {ahc}overmind[74721] |
| user-2ive7n2.dialup.mindspring.com |
| fair report nick, just inlcude details |
| #5 [LoR]-Punisher[74724] |
| 202.156.0.2 |
Details??Too brief.
What happened to those pics anyway????I never got to see them on the BR.
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| #6 {ahc}overmind[74728] |
| user-2ive7n2.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I think this will be between a 3-5, probably on the ower end |
| #7 Nyoken[74730] |
| spider-ta054.proxy.aol.com |
| Can you see "then" some more plz? |
| #8 Bullis[74731] |
| dataforen.p2p.nu |
What did you think of the game and the players..
you did not have a single comment...
language...then... |
| #9 [Mr.T]Hoss[74734] |
| spider-tm061.proxy.aol.com |
Yeah, those are some cool pictures dude.
I pity the fool that reads this report. |
| #10 Phobos_ColZ[74735] |
| spider-wc083.proxy.aol.com |
You said you knew HTML. Take my advice, get AOLPress or some other HTML editing tool. They work pretty well. And get some players better than me! Good try anyway, look forward to seeing future ones.
As ever,
Phobos_ColZ |
| #11 Phobos_ColZ[74736] |
| spider-wc083.proxy.aol.com |
Just for the record, even though I was playing gay, I AM NOT the 13-year old gay kid.
As ever,
Phobos_ColZ |
| #12 Sid6.9[74752] |
| 1Cust243.tnt5.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
I would do a good, bad, and ugly, but there really isn't much to work with except the writing, so I'll offer up some advice for you.
-Details. You need more details. Example. Seperate each player from their builds. I got confused a little during that segment.
-Add more strategy, like what each player looked like they were going to do and why, and if it looked liked it was going to work.
-Use more in describing the battles...size of army attacking, where they attacked, what the opponent did to retaliate and with what, and the outcome of that battle, and what you can deduce as what effect that attack will have on the game.
- Expanding, no one will believe your reports if they don't expand.
Hopefully this will help you in you next report, if you decide to do one. Just don't delve into Pictures, HTML, or anything else until you get your writing down. That's what makes a report good, is the writing. |
| #13 [74775] |
| h24-66-249-203.ss.shawcable.net |
| </font><font color="red"><font size="1"><font face=karate">Well this is to piss you guys off hehe haha bybye</font> |
| #14 ~ZC~Blade[74776] |
| px2ar.ed.wave.shaw.ca |
| heehe my first br i stared in :) it was ok ill have to move up the ladder but g/j man |
| #15 Pvt`spark's`SA[74790] |
| hybrid-024-221-136-208.az.sprintbbd.net |
This one could be better if you knew how to do htlm. If you look faq here, it tells you how to make pictures of the battle. Other than that your writing was pretty good. A 5.
Pvt`spark's`SA |
#16  [74833] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
| gawd I'm tired of repeating the same shit again. I'll put it simple. It sucked because of (read comments on above BR) |
| #17 [74834] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
| btw this is much worse then the BR above |
| #18 Cearas[74843] |
| 004.paradox1.n.iqnet.net.au |
Too many uses of the word "then"
eg:
"Then phobos did this"
"The phobos built this"
"Then you sucked hard cock"
"Then you chocked on cum"
"Then I fucked your Mother"
"Then your Dad made you suck him off"
See what I'm getting at?? |
| #19 livingexception[74971] |
| spider-wb013.proxy.aol.com |
I'll be surprised if this doesn't get deleted. read other brs, find good players, and come back again....later...2.
LE |
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