| #1 Monty Pylon[74510] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
This is far from over. Trade one for the other. Serov is going home or is he?
DA DA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Tell your friends and comment comment comment |
| #2 Illgetdroped[74511] |
| dialup-64.152.164.23.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| I liked your fan fic.. its interasting.. even though i didnt read it all yet... keep up the good work.. and i hope u make more.. GJ |
| #3 Digityl[74512] |
| 138.86.151.7 |
wheeeeeeee i get 3rd. pretty good imo monty.
~Digi |
| #4 Monty Pylon[74522] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| hey Sid you wanted it by today you got it today |
| #5 mattkid[74523] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| cool good fan fic |
| #6 Sid6.9[74527] |
| 1Cust149.tnt13.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Oooooo me likey, especially the end. Can't wait to see what this great weapon that Zeratul, Artanis, and Serov have and just what it does. Also can't wait to see if Raynor becomes a device of the zerg, or somehow escapes. Can't wait for the next one Monty, great job once again. :) |
| #7 SplaSh[74535] |
| spider-wj074.proxy.aol.com |
| OMG it was so touching great ending keep up the great work this is a great fanfic cant really find anything wront with it... so no crticism =[ |
| #8 -citizenkane-[74551] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
Grr. Lost Temple Sux! 1.0!
j/k. 7
mark gimme rating power gogogo |
| #9 someone[74567] |
| proxy3-external.ym1.on.home.com |
great, i love these
raynor gets infested? ack!
i wonder how you will ever end this series |
#10  [74568] |
| box3.trfb.navy.mil |
I am starting to get a little more interested in this story. I look forward to seeing your next installment.
But, even though I like the storyline I really can't give this more that a 7 with the straight up black and whiteness. =P
-Dr.Z |
| #11 Monty Pylon[74576] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| I completly understand and I'm not in it for a 10 score. I just want to entertain and offer something fun. |
| #12 {ahc}overmind[74577] |
| user-2ivebde.dialup.mindspring.com |
While i personally like this series, how your making the series sort of wrap up is kind of distressing. I'm in favor of Serov being interecepted en route to earth, and finding a mysterious race preparing to attack earth. I also would like it if you put yourself into the series.
EX.
Zeratul: Oh brother of the Xel'naga, what do you bring to us in this sector of space you abandoned long ago
Monty_Pylon: Most loyal son, we have come to destroy the Zerg parisite once and for all. We have always hoped that you would eliminate it on your own, but as the renegade zerg led by the son of the overmind get closer and closer to our home-
Zeratul: Zerg? Overmind? impossible.
Monty_Pylon: Not so impossible as it may seem
Of course, I'm only jokin, but you never know
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| #13 The Sumthin[74592] |
| p129.netwood.net |
I think there should be new ships and other units, since the protoss and terran got the secrets of ancient protoss technology.
OK? |
| #14 Monty Pylon[74594] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| They only get the big weapon all the other stuff is history and useless crap. They really aren't suppose to get new stuff because I don't want to mess with blizzards own story. this is just an inbetween thing like insurrection was only not as bad. |
| #15 Monty Pylon[74598] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Sid and overmind. I want to put you guys in the next episode. I was thinking along the lines of terrans but if you havce other ideas tell me. |
| #16 Sid6.9[74610] |
| 1Cust60.tnt4.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Dude, you can do whatever you want with me, as long as it doesn't include transvestites raping me, I have no problems with any thing you want to do.
I do have kinda of an idea though. Aren't the Science Vessel guys androids? I was always wondering that, they look so unnatural in the game and sound robotic when they talk. Heh heh with a name of Sid6.9, certainly sounds robotic. :)
You do what you want though, I'm sure it will be cool. And thanks. |
| #17 [74649] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
There is your answer of what to do with Sid....
Have him as a drag queen that is infested by the zerg. winds up being a Kerrigan love slave and raped daily by infested terrans, who are tranvestites!
go go go
-Dr.Z |
| #18 Sid6.9[74665] |
| 1Cust158.tnt11.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Dear god no, don't listen to DR. Z, he's on crack again. :) |
| #19 SarcasticSage[74701] |
| 2Cust184.tnt1.daleville.al.da.uu.net |
DO IT!!! DO IT!!!! YEA GOG GOGOGOOGOGGOGOGOG er.. anyways awesome, but what about Fenix!? WHERE IS FENIX!?
get get get get fenix!!!! and Listen to Dr.Z |
| #20 Sid6.9[74798] |
| 1Cust254.tnt11.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Umm Sarcastic, Fenix died in Brood War. In the original Starcraft he was badly injured and was put in a Dragoon, then he was killed again in Brood War, I think zerg mission #7. Sorry, Fenix is gone, you just have to let him go, just let him go. |
| #21 (TYC)Khas'andro[74802] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| TOPGUNNER!! I KNOW YOU READING THIS, IT'S THURSDAY!! DON'T WASTE TIME W/ THE SHOW, IT'S NOT ON!! |
| #22 (TYC)Khas'andro[74803] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| plz don't ask |
| #23 ThieverIV[75122] |
| spider-mtc-tf074.proxy.aol.com |
GRRRR I've commented in every one but always AFTER the next one comes out so no one ever hears what I have to say, ah well.
Monty I think that although u may be right about not messing w/ blizzard's story, you can still introduce new things. Just go along plot lines that Blizzard won't cover.
(btw I was so absolutely, completely, positively sure that it was going to be Stukov who was in the zerg hive. Everyone dl "Deception," Blizzard trigger map from last month, and find the secret, u'll see.) |
| #24 HuKeK[75192] |
| proxy.rockport.k12.ma.us |
I downloaded Deception, and saw Infested Stukov drop outta the DShip.
a: Why's an Infested Terran in a TERRAN Dropshit?
b: I thought the storyline for it said they were raiding a CONFEDERATE Installation, as in before the UED? |
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