| #1 Sexy^Orangutang[74256] |
| spider-wm042.proxy.aol.com |
take that 1st comment whores
There are probly a bunch of grammar mistakes and html mistakes and just general mistakes that I missed, but oh well. Hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. Gimmie tips on my gameplay too since I suck badly.
Sexy^Orangutang |
| #2 ~ZC~Blade[74258] |
| px1ar.ed.wave.shaw.ca |
| that 1st guy is me in the first none reporter good report man indepth and everything except pics and btw u really got owned man :) |
| #3 lil Bow Wow[74260] |
| h24-66-249-203.ss.shawcable.net |
| <Font size="10"><font face="karate">This was good thats all I have to say</font> |
| #4 Sid6.9[74261] |
| 1Cust226.tnt13.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Let's get Sexy baby in another edition of The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly. Yeah baby, yeah.
The Good-
Writing was very well done.
Descriptions were very fitting in not needing pics, the visualization of the Arbitar recalling in those zealots even had me cringing.
You weren't afraid of reporting a game you lost. That's rare on BR.com for the author to report a game he lost. Reminds me of my first Battle Report, I lost that game, but it was fun.
Your name rocks!
I liked when you used the color blue to seperate your introduction from the report. That was original, although, the blue kinda hurt my eyes a little. Maybe switch the background color to black, and use white for the intro, and that light blue color for the report would work.
The Bad-
You started off well in the game, but it sounded like mid-way (After ridding SirSpamAlot) you went into a defensive mode. Shame on you, never, ever go defensive against a toss player, good, bad, or otherwise. Especially on a small map like blood bath. That really detracted from the report Sexy Org.
I would have loved the pic of the Arbitar recalling in those lots. I never see recall used, and it would have enhanced this report even more with that strategy even though it was on you. (Note: This isn't really something you needed for the report, but woulda rocked if you had it.)
Stop using the "asdfdkljakdgfhakjdfhj" thing. That is really irritating. I know you used it to show you were upset, but you coulda done it differently than that.
The Ugly-
You got owned. :( And when you went defensive, it really was only a matter of time that you would lose, and I knew it after your expansion fell.
Report Card Reads-
Writing- B+
Pic Selection- N/A
Pic Quality- N/A
HTML Usage (Hey, a new one folks!)- B (The blue was a little bright for the white background. Try black, see if it is brighter or dimmer on the eyes.)
Entertainment- B- (This would be a B or B+, but you went defensive on me, granted it was a sexy defensive, but still.)
Overall- B
Personal Comments- Your coming along nicely S^O. I like your reports, plenty of action, good detail, and very little if any spelling errors. Good job. I suspect the raters will be gracious with a 7. But I suspect you may get a 6, let's hope not though. |
| #5 SID[74299] |
| rm03-24-131-186-223.ce.mediaone.net |
| GOD DAMMIT YOU NERD GET A FUCKIN LIFE |
| #6 PIGGIE[74304] |
| h000094b63add.ne.mediaone.net |
| OINK OINK PIGGIE GOOD IN BED OINK OINK |
| #7 Sexy^Orangutang[74364] |
| spider-tl042.proxy.aol.com |
you own jv^^
Thanks for the lengthy comment sid and about a background, i was trying for a dark blue then a red text but i couldn't get the tag right or something so i just did blue on white. |
| #8 Sexy^Orangutang[74373] |
| spider-mtc-td012.proxy.aol.com |
| whoever gave this a 5, I'm gonna pierce their balls with a nailgun ^^ |
| #9 america~jin[74470] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
Can someone explain that "expand--go mutas; no expand--go lurks" statement plz?
Bloodbath seems to encapture a breed of players bent on gayness--but it's quite interesting also. |
| #10 america~jin[74471] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
Can someone explain that "expand--go mutas; no expand--go lurks" statement plz?
Bloodbath seems to encapture a breed of players bent on gayness--but it's quite interesting also. |
| #11 html[74516] |
| 216-224-142-82.thegrid.net |
<html>
<img src:"http://a12.g.akamai.net/7/12/282/8b3ee1f4eab9c6/av.com/g/sp-logo.gif">
</html>
html? |
| #12 [69]~X'Cheater_[74537] |
| orion-2.rnet.comnet.bg |
| hihih fuck you!:) |
| #13 [69]~X'Cheater_[74538] |
| orion-2.rnet.comnet.bg |
| Kiss_my_Duck and madafucker:)) |
| #14 GeNiN-Gbr[74572] |
| inh1ts04-qfe0.ims.bt.net |
| If u xpo go mutas . . . . hmnnn - try gaurdians on such a small map. If you spread them out and micro like hell u can avoid psi-storm. As for corsairs - u already had a backup line of spores on the edge (which is good), and a scourge wave woulda left him down plenty. |
| #15 ))((nsomnia[74966] |
| 12.82.171.181 |
| good luck on the lawsuit! |
| #16 ))((nsomnia[74967] |
| 12.82.171.181 |
| sid6.9, you have some lame ideas nobody listen to him! |
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