| #1 youngbeard[73726] |
| YOUNGBEARD.REM.CMU.EDU |
| I'm getting better at this. IMHO, not as good a battle as the previous report, but better writing and image editing (I hope). Raters, fire away.. |
| #2 battle.org[73727] |
| dsl-64-136-36-70.junoexpress.com |
| 1st |
| #3 blabla[73732] |
| mkc-31-238-216.kc.rr.com |
| Haven't read the whole thing yet, but looks nice so far. Seems very clean with the pictures lining up nicely and other small details. gj. |
| #4 mattkid[73734] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| 8-9 |
| #5 Zalbag[73738] |
| chi-tgn-guw-vty7.as.wcom.net |
cool BR. easy 8 prolly 9
GJ |
| #6 znzf[73739] |
| 24.65.81.66.on.wave.home.com |
i liked it
terran musta really sucked tho to let zerg get that much creep and stuff at his nat
didnt' even scout |
| #7 CraX[73741] |
| dialups-581.palmer.mtaonline.net |
Damn another breeze. =D
CraX |
| #8 Sid6.9[73743] |
| 1Cust170.tnt5.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Excellent report from the young bearded battle reporter. I loved the storyline with the game, it didn't detract from it. Most people that try to do this will either lay more emphasis on the story or the game, but you blended both nicely. Good pics as well, a few were unnecessary, but for the story did serve their purpose. Great job once again, this should be in the 9 range IMHO. |
| #9 !SphincteR![73746] |
| hss-187-6.sk.sympatico.ca |
loved it!
especially the story line!
no one knows me, hi. my name is !SphincteR! i am an asshole. |
| #10 FuRyEDge[73748] |
| cx665824-a.irvn1.occa.home.com |
| LoL, !SphincteR!. Great report, youngbeard. The dialogues from the SCV and the dropship pilot were an excellent touch. Keep up the good work. |
| #11 Ain_Soph[73760] |
| dialup-209.245.232.227.Dallas1.Level3.net |
This is a great piece of work
I give it a nine |
| #12 trymmy[73768] |
| 143.130.fl1.ip.foni.net |
It was fun to read, poor Bob, may he get a nice burial :)
And also the poor dropship commander, he worked so hard, may he rest in peace.
I would give it an 8 |
| #13 Shepherd[73769] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
Great BR.
Can't believe that terran never noticed. . .I usually expand there fast. . .oh well. |
| #14 OuTSiDeR[73788] |
| spider-wc011.proxy.aol.com |
| GJ Bro. I liked it. 8.5 |
| #15 HeavenlyYellow[73804] |
| spider-tl014.proxy.aol.com |
9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9.9
Man thats close to a ten :)
-HeavenlyYellow Out |
| #16 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[73807] |
| AC9BA995.ipt.aol.com |
| Hey, Good Report! Wonder what happens next... (terran exp at 9:00 =Þ) |
| #17 :-([73811] |
| spider-mtc-tf023.proxy.aol.com |
Heavenly u can't get a 9.9.9.9 etc.
But you knew that.
ANYWAY, good br. The storyline was funny, especially the part about the SCV's. |
| #18 Dr.Zchivago[73832] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Heh, that was pretty damn funny.
The story line you created with this battle really held it together for me.
I decided giving this an 8, but then I countered myself with a 9. But then there was a counter-counter to a 7, I got confused and left it with my original 8.
Solid report. But I was left wanting more...
-Dr.Z |
| #19 Cearas[73839] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| Not bad, i nearly fell off my seat when he stole the terrans natural. The theme/story u tried to encorporate didn't do it for me, still wasnt a bad BR, 7-8 for sure |
| #20 GoZuLu[73840] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
"Grisly bits of chewed up terran and random SCV parts pour onto the ground along with the lurkers' entrails"
Nice !!!!
Good job - GoZuLu |
| #21 Eradicate~Me[73851] |
| spider-th013.proxy.aol.com |
an 8 was an appropiate rating, considering the game was 1 sided.
Although it was nice writing/pics usage. gw |
| #22 TH-LittleBro[73909] |
| 164.106.181.202 |
Excellent work. A simple game put into a great BR. You're "incoming transmissions" own!
-LittleBro |
| #23 TH-LittleBro[73910] |
| 164.106.181.202 |
Oops.
*Your |
| #24 Spuzz[73957] |
| jfsn-02-44.dialup.netins.net |
Ahahaha, I was laughing throughout the entire report. Great job! Bob the SCV's reaction the the first six Zerglings was priceless.
Excellent work!
Spuzz |
| #25 Rim[73961] |
| 202.fort-worth-05-10rs16rt.tx.dial-access.att.net |
| At least a 9. |
| #26 Duke-Nukem[73965] |
| 212.29.231.2 |
| Nice report, i really liked the incorporation of story-telling into the report. |
| #27 Youngbeard[73982] |
| 6.pitt1.pitt.dialup.nauticom.net |
| Thanks for all the comments and criticisms! It seems like some people enjoy "story-telling" reports, and others want "just the facts". Guess I can't please everyone! I like writing the "story-telling" type better, so you can expect more of that from me in the future. |
| #28 HKRules[73992] |
| c321107.extern.lawrenceville.org |
If you are unemployed, you have a great future in writing Neo- FarSide captions.
Great writing style, and I hope to see another of your reports soon. |
| #29 lilcoolbean[74215] |
| spider-tp062.proxy.aol.com |
| thats mother fucking gay!!!!!!! |
| #30 Warfare[112963] |
| w042.z208037226.sea-wa.dsl.cnc.net |
Can't believe I've never seend this before. I would comment, but I think I should read it first :)
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