| #1 {ahc}overmind[73666] |
| user-2ivecia.dialup.mindspring.com |
| {ahc}overmind welcomes you to his first battle report, he wishes top state that {ahc}overmind likes reffering to himself in the third person, thank you. |
| #2 ThBizarreFungi[73667] |
| spider-tl044.proxy.aol.com |
writing stretches to far had to keep moving to read all.
Good report though:) |
| #3 Shepherd[73670] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
| Good report, but needs to scroll back and forth to read em'. |
| #4 AkumaSpawn[73673] |
| cate1-216.reshall.ou.edu |
This was okay... nothing special though. No huge, angry flaws of spelling or terrible mistakes in grammar, but it lacked that edge to it that would have gotten this a better grade in my oh-so-humble opinion. There was a bit of over-statement that kept cropping up- we would have known which ending score was which by the words, and we already know that a bunch of tanks closer together generally work a shade better than those too far apart, depending on who you try to play against.
I'd say no more than a 6. |
| #5 Eriador[73679] |
| port16.msx13-tro.ppp.cybercity.no |
stop talking in third person :P
and umm, when im using 1280*1024 I dont want to scroll sideways to read the report.
=(
also, cut down the pictures(as in, cut away the unimportant stuff from all the pictures).. you dont need to show us every not important at all detail :)
eri
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| #6 Monty Pylon[73682] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
A good first report. The pictures should be made smaller so the enormous size doesn't take from the game. Also trim the width because I had to scroll to read. On another note terrans rule all. It was a decent game and this should get no less than a 7.
Read and rate the Starcraft Chronicoles by Monty Pylon
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| #7 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[73683] |
| ACA32339.ipt.aol.com |
| Yeti wannabe =P. Good report except for the stretching... |
| #8 {ahc}overmind[73685] |
| user-2ivecjd.dialup.mindspring.com |
| what's the html code to change the page properties? |
| #9 {ahc}overmind[73687] |
| user-2ivecjd.dialup.mindspring.com |
| and if you're going to make suggestions, be specific |
| #10 xld.aldogrez[73697] |
| spider-mtc-tc064.proxy.aol.com |
| Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 Table Width=500 |
| #11 Somebody...[73703] |
| proxy1-external.etntwn1.nj.home.com |
Nice report overall... however, the players weren't all that good, as could be seen in the wallin deal, since the wallin was done incorrectly, and wasn't used to the opponent's advantage...also, the scrolling was a pain in the ass, but it was an overall good report. Try to have your collage flow and follow a certain order, and not just bunched up in a clump, as that is difficult for people to follow through each screenshot.
sby... |
| #12 Sid6.9[73719] |
| 1Cust153.tnt3.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Well, I already commented on your second report, and basically everything I said there, applies on this one too. With exception to the big pics, but everyone else already covered that. Good job once again. This report had me more than the second, although a few things the players did had me scratching my head, it was still a decent game. :) |
| #13 Khas'andro[73723] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
I too read your second BR first. (is that right?)
Well, I actually didn't read this, the enormous length of the tables deterred me right away. The big pictures were nice, but it would be better if you focused in on the important spots and put a bunch into a collage. Good first report, though.
4-5 |
| #14 Dr.Zchivago[73830] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Ok, I really really tried to get through reading this even with the funky side scrolling. I actually made it 75% of the way down. The it all just sorta jumbled together.
I didn't really care for your intro. Don't beg your parents for a new comp, go out and get one on your own (ok, maybe you can't). And Yeti is the only one I remember being able to do 3rd person accounts of himself.
Fix the table width, colorize your player's names, get a better intro, smaller pics perhaps with borders and it will look really nice and read very well.
5
-Dr.Z |
| #15 Cearas[73841] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
Ack, width pissed me off, couldnt be bothered reading something to big for my 1024*786 display. I did skim down the page and it didn't look too bad.
Dont try to copy Jamellan/yeti with 3rd person P.O.V, he maimes (sp?) you too hard. |
| #16 america~jin[73846] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
Ugh,
Ugh, lame
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| #17 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[82871] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
| Gj for first br . . . 6 =D |
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