| #1 Jin[72743] |
| dialup-209.245.203.73.Houston1.Level3.net |
| Whoo, first, hooray for moi! |
| #2 willwinforfood[72751] |
| ool-18bd7836.dyn.optonline.net |
no scores pic. =[
second though.. |
| #3 Snork~Dimmy[72755] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| 1st non-lame comment about what number comment i got, ohh, wait a minute...... |
| #4 Snork~Dimmy[72756] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| ahhh shit, fucked myself over there, realised i told the truth in that one, grrrrr |
| #5 TerranNavel[72758] |
| h000094b63add.ne.mediaone.net |
ok. umm i stopped reading at the 1st paragraph
confession... i never read the BR i just look at pics for purdy medics |
| #6 LuckyNewbie:P[72761] |
| user-33qtp4e.dialup.mindspring.com |
he arrived just as your expansion finished?
COUGH COUGH HACK HACK!!!!! <u>HACK</u> Cough Cough Cough!
excuse me :]
7, i liked the details you put |
#7 [72765] |
| rliv215.infocom.com |
Solid text only. I enjoyed reading it over breakfast. 6.
Cheers,
Dref |
#8 [72768] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-03-1176.look.ca |
| coming back from 4 pool is too gosu ;-< |
| #9 teck.lika.hore[72785] |
| JHU0024.RES.JHU.EDU |
| Not bad, writing was pretty good, descriptions were also nice. solid 6 i'd say. |
#10 [72794] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
hehe
1200 yet?? |
| #11 Sid6.9[72809] |
| 1Cust240.tnt1.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Only thing I would say was wrong, well actually not wrong, more a personal preference, is the longish paragraphs. I kinda got off track a few times, but picked it back up after backtracking. I usually use the no more than 10-12 lines in a paragraph rule basically.
But this report was a enjoyable read, with nice descriptions, and decent back and forth action. I wasn't on the edge of my seat, but I was in the middle of it. :) |
| #12 dlkwq[72888] |
| rm03-24-131-186-161.ce.mediaone.net |
if you did a 4 pool theres no way you woulda seen his OL coming in time before you woulda made a drone, so obviously you hack to know the spots so you could 4 pool
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| #13 D-o-r-f-l[72978] |
| 63.92.159.90 |
| er... i think he was planning to 4-pool before he even saw the ovie, yah, thanx. |
| #14 SluggyTheZealot[72984] |
| AC84D273.ipt.aol.com |
| dlkwq: They have special schools for people like you. Are you a crash or non-crash helmet wearer? |
| #15 Eradicate~Me[73481] |
| spider-mtc-tf051.proxy.aol.com |
T_Mac reading this over dinner owns u.
btw nice |
| #16 Eradicate~Me[73482] |
| spider-mtc-tf051.proxy.aol.com |
| er, dref* |