#1 [71997] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
hehe "<i>pilon</i>"
That's enough to get you a 2.
Cheers,
Dref |
| #2 Eradicate~Me[71999] |
| spider-mtc-tc064.proxy.aol.com |
| gw dref i didnt even bother to read it |
| #3 Shepherd[72006] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
Mmm. . . .
mmm. . .
*Falls asleep* |
| #4 LuckyNewbie:P[72010] |
| user-33qtpgk.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I think i just stepped in the middle of a monologue when this report began. Whats the map? Whos the players? Why are they playing? Do they even exist, etc... |
| #5 willwinforfood[72025] |
| ool-18bd7836.dyn.optonline.net |
i wont post any negative comments, cause i know how those feel, but rather some tips.
you need longer games, more detail, spell and grammer check and work on the layout a little(paragraphs?). oh and maybe some screen shots unless text only brs are your style.
-wwff |
| #6 Dog101[72042] |
| 2Cust54.tnt10.chi1.da.uu.net |
*Yawn*
*yawn*
make it more then one paragraph or it makes the people falls asleep with no mix of detail and action.
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| #7 hmmmmmm.......[72046] |
| a-db.aspn.net |
| I wonder how many times you repeated the word "meanwhile" |
| #8 Cracky_The_Peon[72067] |
| pppxela01.xela.net.gt |
| This gets a 2? |
#9 [72138] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
yah I'm gonna give it a 3 now
PS: I just ran 2 miles |
| #10 youngbeard[72216] |
| 83.pitt2.pitt.dialup.nauticom.net |
| I can't believe this got a better rating than my "kill the evil backstabbers report..." :) |
| #11 Dodger[task][72301] |
| dialin18.pc-link.net |
hey guys,i wanna tell u something
This is my first report and i know that its maybe dull or not full enough.
Well,i dont have time enoug to do it good but next time it will be....
And about the screenshot i dont now why but i couldnt send them:(({if someone can help me i willl be very glad to him)
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| #12 Dogder[72413] |
| 24.66.249.203 |
| yo |
| #13 BOB[72852] |
| spider-mtc-tf052.proxy.aol.com |
this is probably the worst report ive ever seen im my life.
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| #14 Oh shit[73966] |
| 195.94.222.1 |
This seems like a VERY poorly prepared
BR. Perhaps u could try better next time?
No-graphics are OK, but it is impossible to
get any kind of lesson from your BR.
Work on it, or I'll have to agree with #13. |