| #1 Roaddog{WP}[71021] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
| I gave my best shot, please comment, I think my writing was ok but I'm sure thats gonna need work, ill get it though, |
| #2 (...Blaze...)[71023] |
| mp-217-218-251.daxnet.no |
| keke 2nd |
| #3 Sid6.9[71030] |
| 1Cust253.tnt4.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Great job Dog, I loved all the pics and you seemed to keep up well with the action and presented it very well. Keep up the good work.
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| #4 Roaddog{WP}[71032] |
| proxy2-external.pr1.on.home.com |
OGMOKEJROPILAJRKNDF
I mixed up the animations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! arg the 1st animation should be the 2nd animation and the 2nd animation should be the 1st animation, unless I'm greatly mistaken thats how it should go. |
| #5 Roaddog{WP}[71035] |
| proxy2-external.pr1.on.home.com |
Admin can u plz switch the first animation (www.geocities.com/r0addog/Animation3.gif) to www.geocities.com/r0addog/Animation2.gif and change the 2nd animation (www.geocities.com/r0addog/animation2.gif) to www.geocities.com/r0addog/animation3.gif
Thanks greatly aprreciated |
| #6 xld.aldogrez[71038] |
| spider-ti034.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice report, but the animations were big, and my computer they didn't flow smoothly. The writing was pretty good, and it's good when people give upgrade reports. |
| #7 willwinforfood[71046] |
| ool-18bd7836.dyn.optonline.net |
| gj on the report but the animations went a tad to fast imo. 7-8. |
| #8 teck.lika.hore[71050] |
| JHU0024.RES.jhu.edu |
Sup, Dog. nice report... Hmm writing was pretty good, pics looked nice... for some reason the animations were choppy like hell... i think i'll go and see if it smooths out after running it once... anyway, gj
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| #9 teck.lika.hore[71051] |
| JHU0024.RES.jhu.edu |
oops forgot my signature... damn must have it there...
{insert witty signature here},
teck.lika.hore
now i can be smooth
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| #10 WarLeaderJustin[71053] |
| 63.113.115.5 |
Good report. Repeat the comments that have already been said. I give it a 7.
-WLJ |
| #11 Carni-Swarm[71054] |
| cf3k-3.paradise.net.nz |
Who says rines don't work in TvT.
Think outside the square =). Now you're under control and you do what they told ya. I just like to rage against the machine. |
| #12 -TopGun-'[71064] |
| 206.82.130.102 |
Very good report.
Only a few complaints, and nothing really serious.
1. Grammer
2. Smaller pics....your collages were a little small, but that could be my comp
3. The animations left me in a whirlpool....i.e., I was lost. Again, could be my comp & my 56K modem
4. Have mercy on us, 56K'ers..
That's all. Now, that didn't hurt did I? I'd say a 7-7.9.
Keep it real & peace. |
| #13 Zalbag[71071] |
| chi-tgn-gjk-vty133.as.wcom.net |
| yo dog, nice BR. Not too much criticism, maybe NOT put some really big pics on it otherwise great pics. Keep up the Good Work =] |
| #14 Derek'-'[71075] |
| spider-mtc-tc043.proxy.aol.com |
| wait for our next report! his sweat, tears, photoshop etc.. and my notes will>all |
| #15 testosterone[71083] |
| mkc-31-246-100.kc.rr.com |
| the gifs moved way to fast.....like 1 second and 60 frames went by, couldnt tell a thing that was going on |
| #16 Roaddog{WP}[71085] |
| proxy2-external.pr1.on.home.com |
| Thanks all for commenting, all who commented on fast animations, on my computer they seemed at a average pace, maybe 1 frame about 7.5/10th of a second, maybe its just how my comp is working, it is pretty old, next br i make ill take into account of making the animations of more time between frames, hrm, i was planning on doing a minimap, but im too lazee. Oh and top gun animations probably confused u cause i mixed them up :( , Argh the wait for a rating is killing my nerves :D |
| #17 Roaddog{WP}[71086] |
| proxy2-external.pr1.on.home.com |
| Thanks all for commenting, all who commented on fast animations, on my computer they seemed at a average pace, maybe 1 frame about 7.5/10th of a second, maybe its just how my comp is working, it is pretty old, next br i make ill take into account of making the animations of more time between frames, hrm, i was planning on doing a minimap, but im too lazee. Oh and top gun animations probably confused u cause i mixed them up :( , Argh the wait for a rating is killing my nerves :D |
| #18 Roaddog{WP}[71087] |
| proxy2-external.pr1.on.home.com |
| err i meant 7.5 out of 10 of a second, didnt mean a tenth of a second meaning 1 / 10, i meant 7.5 / 10 if anyone mis understood my idiocy. oh and btw double post is gay :D |
| #19 Santeria[71099] |
| spider-mtc-ta074.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice fisrt report. I wish i could do the .gif and stuff.But anyways I am 56ker so it took 7 minutes and 34 seconds to download the thing. (Yup i timed it) |
| #20 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[71117] |
| static-45.itcanada.com |
Fun read, I liked it! alot.
You have a great, unique style, both in writing and images, which is a pleasure to read. This is one of the best first brs I've read in many a month. Looking forward to the next one!
8.5 |
| #21 Blank[71123] |
| 209.hartford-13-14rs.ct.dial-access.att.net |
vultures take 10 years to kill a depot :[ "yay"
Hi
Blank |
| #22 Roaddog{WP}[71128] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
| :D try and kill a cc with 1 |
| #23 Mr. Fascist[71136] |
| ihproxy2.proxy.lucent.com |
| Nice BR. Finaly a BR. NOT writen by a brain dead monkey. |
#24 [71185] |
| as530055.infocom.com |
A few things:
1) Crop those animated GIFs and slow 'em down. There was too much information to process in too little time. Also, the GIFs will load a helluva lot faster.
2) Don't shrink your pictures down so small, they're hard to see on higher resolutions.
3) Don't use such big, bold text. This was especially noticable due to the way you shrank your pics.
Anyway, those are my suggestions. Still a pretty solid report all things considered. 7.
Cheers,
Dref |
| #25 Shepherd[71190] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
| Nice job, Roaddog. You rock on even though GIF was too fast. |
| #26 WarLeaderJustin[71199] |
| spider-tq052.proxy.aol.com |
Haha, Dref, I thought that big text was infamously called "Drefsab-like font."
-WLJ |
| #27 Roaddog{WP}[71211] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
| Thx for all tips and tricks, omg I cant believe i copied geocities html, if you noticed in top right it has the geocities box, woopsie for me :D |
#28 [71214] |
| as530055.infocom.com |
hehe Justin, I'm trying to get away from the big font, however, if a person uses big font, their pictures should at least be normal sized instead of shrunk... ;-)
Cheers,
Dref |
| #29 m|ndcontrol[71269] |
| wpad.cyberglobe.net |
I'm on a dual T1 connection with p2-400 128megs ram and this report was unreadable...the animated gifs chugged like you couldn't believe, it was so bad I couldn't even scroll down the page.
I wish I could comment on the quality of the game report but i wasn't able to actually read it dude to technical difficulties. |
| #30 [LoR]-Punisher[71401] |
| ktce1.156ce.singa.pore.net |
| Not too bad br.Only complains are that the pics are a bit small and the animations are jerky and too fast. |
| #31 Dog101[71699] |
| 1Cust137.tnt10.chi1.da.uu.net |
| Roaddog is #1.gj |