| #1 {~Ascension~}[68951] |
| 113.rochelle-park-06-07rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| Here it is. comment and crap |
| #2 awe 6[68953] |
| proxy2-external.pinol1.sfba.home.com |
| HAHA!! The "oh the humanity" is hilarious...8. |
| #3 Gugie6161[68954] |
| ppp-12.ts-4-bay.hck.idt.net |
| This was good but more pictures, but since you're my friend 8. |
| #4 tontochico[68956] |
| a24b25n251client159.hawaii.rr.com |
| called terran |
| #5 blizzack[68958] |
| adsl-pool41-27.chicago.il.ameritech.net |
| not bad for first br. u had alt-text too. |
| #6 Scarab[68960] |
| AC809AB7.ipt.aol.com |
YES, THE SUBMUT BUTTON AND THE PREVEIW BUTTON HAVE DIFFERENT FUNCTIONS, MY GOD LOOK AT ALL THE SMARTEY MEN!#@!!!#2445@!#@$
sorry |
| #7 Blade_Kid_10[68963] |
| spider-tk074.proxy.aol.com |
| short but good , what can I say ? |
| #8 |MaNiAcMaRiNe|[68964] |
| Oshawa-ppp203836.sympatico.ca |
| Shit we may have another gamma here. Fuck man nice collages and LT map into world so COOOL |
| #9 Snork~Dimmy[68972] |
| async13-per2-isp-3.nas.one.net.au |
| sorry, but i have I_Suck_Ass |
| #10 SLiM[68976] |
| aden2-179-dhcp.resnet.Colorado.EDU |
| Terran is not spelled terren. |
| #11 GoaTZiLLa![68979] |
| adsl-pool-1-8B7DE184.cleveland.oh.ameritech.net |
| this is great for your first shot at a BR... 7 |
| #12 garett[68981] |
| cdm-158-89-tyl.cox-internet.com |
| nice first br, i think you will probably be the next breeze ;D |
| #13 CaptA2k[68982] |
| nt11.labs.umb.edu |
Good BR i really liked it. A few more details about upgrades and zerg teching. Seems to me you talked about the first fight at the zerg base and the next moment the zerg player had Ultras ready to go. Also.. what happened to the terran expansion in the lower left corner?
nick |
| #14 {~Ascension~}[68983] |
| 168.229.4.5 |
Next Breeze, u must be kidding me.
Snork, u have I_suck_ass? And I seem to remember playing a 2vs2 on Temple with a person with that name. Was it u?
Thx for the compliments, but really, I suck.
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| #15 {~Ascension~}[68984] |
| 168.229.4.5 |
| Oh, and one more thing. I kinda rushed to get it done after the first battle at the zerg base, so that's why it seemed to go really quick. However, zerg did tech pretty fast. |
| #16 WarLeaderJustin[68985] |
| ACA0A675.ipt.aol.com |
Pretty good first BR, you selected pictures that showed some pretty good action. Nice collags in there too. All you need to be like Breeze now is a flashy Flash 5 intro!
Hehe, GJ, 75%.
-WLJ |
| #17 CynicalMagician[68987] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Not bad. I followed it easily, and the game didn't seem like a total beatdown. Some more text, and proper spelling of the word terrAn would be nice thoguh >)
-CM |
#18  [68988] |
| we-24-165-190-157.we.mediaone.net |
Nice job. Seriously need to say more bad things about yourself because you haven't said enough. Due to being corrupt as well as a moron, I am unable to rate your report.
Sorry |
| #19 Smurfy_the_Peon[68989] |
| spider-tn031.proxy.aol.com |
Could have used a few more pictures,more gratuitous(think I spelled that right)violence and a cool signature at the end.
7.3 |
| #20 Microman[68990] |
| scar.iinet.net.au |
Man, you gotta stop putting yourself down. It really takes away from the BR. No one's going to give you stupid criticism for you being a bad player. At the risk of sounding mean, YRM was never a really good starcraft player..... He still wrote godlike BRs though. Most of the great BR'rs are the same. They don't get good because they spend their free time making BRs.
One of the at quotes was quite funny :) BTW, the zerg didn't really need dark swarm, when you have that much money, its not too necessary. And terran can own everything off 1 exp vs decent players. :) just some little tips. Pictures were great. Keep it up. I'd give you about a 7-7.5. Oh, 1 more thing, when taking screenshots, before the game, clean out your directory, then ask the players if you can pause the game and move the previous hundred screenies. Lots of little things could have been better, but you'll get them down from experience.
Martin |
| #21 Microman[68991] |
| scar.iinet.net.au |
Oh yeah, the thing with N'Sync was pretty funny :)
Martin |
| #22 Elendale[68995] |
| kundry.luther.edu |
I like, i like! Maybe not an instant <b>10 10 10</b><i>!!!</i> report, but the first step on the long road to excellent BRing. The terren/terran thing was kinda annoying though. The best part was that it had a clean presentation of the actual game involved with unobtrusive humor. I look forward to your next report.
-Elendale |
| #23 {~Ascension~}[68997] |
| 168.229.4.5 |
| Dudes, I'm sorry about the terren/terran thing.:) |
| #24 {~Ascension~}[68998] |
| 168.229.4.5 |
| The thing u guys don't realize is that I really do suck. I'm kinda frustrated that I'm not that good, I can only beat really bad people in a newbies game:(. I really need a bw tutor. |
| #25 {~Ascension~}[68999] |
| 168.229.4.5 |
| And one more thing...I won't deprecate myself as much in the next report.:) |
| #26 shockwave[69001] |
| exchange1.sensable.com |
Good report. One thing will really help:
I would suggestion you avoid making questionable strategic comments. This comment e.g. makes no sense:
<I>Agonizer does not wall-in and builds a supply depot then a barracks. This guy obviously likes to turtle.</I>
Almost every Terran player goes depot/rax. If they're up against Zerg, it's very often that you dont' build the depot/rax at your choke (because things like 6 or 9 pools are much harder to defend if your structures aren't near your minerals line, also you'll find that the build comes a bit later due to travel time).
Unless a player does something obvious wrong, don't criticize him. I didn't see any occurrence of Terran turtling after going depot/rax in his base (you didn't even provide a screenshot), so it's hard to see where that comment was coming from.
It's kinda en vogue these days to criticize players in BRs. The BR folks tend to just make deprecating comments and take screenshots of supposedly really stupid things that happen. It's not very professional, and it also makes people less likely to allow you to BR their games in the future. You definitely aren't guilty of this to any extent, I'm only pointing out a single comment. But be careful about this sort of stuff in the future. It's much better to just report a game objectively and to add your own strategic bias when it is clearly needed. Your viewers can decide e.g. whether Zerg should have used defilers instead (I would not have... if he has that many resources, ultras and lings is just fine). |
| #27 Jizmo[69013] |
| 1Cust114.tnt8.ind1.da.uu.net |
Hey, you did good for your 1st BR. Dude, don't put yourself down, you might just get a little better if you come into a game thinking "I can win this one." That would help a lot. But other then that I think this is a great BR!
BTW -- Almost every picture you had was putting yourself down, gosuness! ^^
-Jizmo |
| #28 [bad]derek[69014] |
| spider-tr014.proxy.aol.com |
| ditto to what shockwave said...and uh, what does en vogue mean? |
| #29 {~Ascension~}[69015] |
| 85.rochelle-park-08-09rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| Thx, Shockwave. I'll take that into consideration. |
| #30 _Insanitarium_[69030] |
| dialup-63.208.88.43.Miami1.Level3.net |
OMG GOSU REPORT!
Ascension will you have my baby?
_Insan_ |
| #31 {~Ascension~}[69031] |
| 244.albany-15rs.ny-rochelle-park-05rs.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| OMFG no:) |
| #32 -MindCry-[69043] |
| 20.dial-up.T-3000.pnt.oceana.net |
Great BR for the 1st time.. Sounds/looks like you been playing a long time and has had some BR experience before.
Except for your turtle comment hehe. 99% of the time terran walls-off vs Toss, Terran. Rarely do people wall-off vs a know zerg. And about 90% of the time ppl wall off vs random.
Well, actually im not sure what most people do on TvT.
i dont get many TvT games on LT. Its usally showdown or snowbound. If its LT, i dont wall-off because of some reasons like turret coverage ect.. |
| #33 Shadow~Skull[69047] |
| drproxy2.proxy.lucent.com |
| Damn! If i ever write a br i want my first one to be like yours! |
| #34 {~Ascension~}[69050] |
| 162.rochelle-park-03-04rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| Hehe, mindcry, I'm just a newbie...dunno wut I'm talking about. I went to the X'Ds clan website and they said that they wall-in vs zerg and then do a turbo newbie on the cliff. I guess they are not conscious of the early pool. But they're X'Ds damnit. :) |
#35  [69060] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-04-1066.look.ca |
Not bad at all for a first br, Im torn between 7 and 8.....
I'll give u 7 now, so u br again soon to get a higher rating :O |
#36  [69106] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Wow, what a beatdown, but the pics and text were good. I'm going to go ahead and plop a 7 down on this one. Keep up the good work... :-)
Cheers,
Dref |
| #37 {~Ascension~}[69110] |
| 24.rochelle-park-10rs.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| 7's across the board! |
| #38 {~Ascension~}[69112] |
| 24.rochelle-park-10rs.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| 7's across the board! |
#39  [69113] |
| a11c251.neo.rr.com |
| Wrong. Some fool had to go rate it a 8! Wasn't his fault that he thought the report was cool, though. Hey, it had ultralisks, that's a +1 bonus right there. ;) |
| #40 {~Ascension~}[69120] |
| 169.rochelle-park-03-04rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| hey, I knew snowsquall was that nher guy. hehe. :o) |
| #41 {~Ascension~}[69121] |
| 169.rochelle-park-03-04rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| My next report will probably be two or three weeks from now. I know that's a long time, but I have to spend some time playing the game. Remember, I suck? |
| #42 Spuzz[69125] |
| jfsn-01-212.dialup.netins.net |
Good report--very profesional looking. I think we have another potentially great reporter on our hands.
About how you suck: don't be so hard on yourself, I bet if we played you would walk all over me. Just have fun dude.
Spuzz |
| #43 Rommelkiller[69145] |
| spider-wg012.proxy.aol.com |
more terran winning pic is all
from terran playing bw player and loyal "friend to collsy",
-Rom |
| #44 {~Ascension~}[69156] |
| 61.rochelle-park-10rs.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| Really, I have a lot of fun playing the game. And I improved alot during the past few weeks. But I still suck. |
| #45 Lunatikk[69161] |
| ci898345-a.ruthfd1.tn.home.com |
| The way I improved was I found a private room and I got to know everyone there. When you know everybody it's alot friendlier, and you get to know their playing styles. Seeing a specific style over and over and the results it brings eventually sinks into your head. Then it's just practice. Good report by the way. |
| #46 BUU[69166] |
| spider-te063.proxy.aol.com |
dont worry ascen, ive been playing sc for 2 years (OR HOW EVER LONG THE FUCKING GAME HAS BEEN OUT, MAYBE IT JUST SEEMS LIKE 2 YEARS) anyways.. and ppl still call me a newb! so go me! ahha!
comment #26: shockwave damnit, your supposed to go mass <b>QUEENS</b> dont you know anything? sheesh.... |
| #47 BUU[69167] |
| spider-te063.proxy.aol.com |
| i need to say that again <marquee><h1> QUEENS RULE ALL</h1></marquee> |
| #48 {~Ascension~}[69193] |
| 63.rochelle-park-06-07rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
hehe, I'm posting again...so bored.
lunatikk: sounds good but what if u play someone besides the people in ur room? |
| #49 Stacrafty[69196] |
| l75-05.world-net.co.nz |
not a bad report...
it is really important that you spell Terran properly, when you spelt it "Terren" I got all confused and did not know what you meant at all...
lol... it does'nt matter! I don't know wtf those ppl are on about.
As for you sucking well now that you play "real" games.. ie non bgh, hunters etc you are bound to get better..
gl for the future dude! |
| #50 Koss aka TeCh[69219] |
| 24.65.124.22.sk.wave.home.com |
| good report clap clap (SARCASM!) gayest br ever well the fact that I never read these things this was no exeption just by the look of it I say gay |
| #51 BloAted_Monkeiii[69263] |
| sc-24-165-81-133.socal.rr.com |
nice br for a first. uh.....damn
MUAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAHAHA
what else to say!?!?
too bad |
| #52 [LoR]-Punisher[69329] |
| ktce1.156ce.singa.pore.net |
Haha...Nice Br.
I liked that globe effect for the map. |
| #53 TerranTurtle[69360] |
| pc85dn03.fcc.net |
| How the hell could you have possibly not known when he said "terren" he meant "terran?" Damn dude, you must get confused easily... |
| #54 -])K-Corgy[69361] |
| user212.keokuk.k12.ia.us |
You know what? Fuck the difference in spelling Terren and Terran. As far as I'm concerned you can call them "I have to turtle up behind depots and bunkers if I want to win"
But the report was good
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| #55 -])K-Corgy[69362] |
| user212.keokuk.k12.ia.us |
Oh yeah play Snowcraft
at www.snowcraft.com
or www.flipside.com then go to games and arcade then Snowcraft
I'm writing this during my studyhall in high school |
| #56 {~Ascension~}[69448] |
| 171.rochelle-park-06-07rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| I said I'm sorry about Terran/Terren dudes...I'm just a newbie...never really paid attention to this. |
| #57 -])K-Corgy[69488] |
| user212.keokuk.k12.ia.us |
| Don't worry about the spelling. Terran suck anyway, so they don't diserve to be called shit. |
| #58 Machine[69490] |
| adsl-78-149-150.cae.bellsouth.net |
Ok some constructive critisism.
The Starting builds would have been nice to have pictures of, along with building placements.
When the zerg was being attacked by the terrans at his 6o'clock and 6 o'clock natural, I was kinda confused about where he was attacking. Be a little more descriptive on when and where attacks are commencing. Let us know that someone is setting up, especially the way a terran has to.
Did they upgrade anything? range, armor or weapons for any?
What smart tactical manuvers did either side do?(intentional or not, point them out so others can learn tactics, isn't that about the only reason people read brs?)
Other than those minor flaws, it was a pretty good first BR.
Oh, and if you want some training, feel free to come to channel ~LiQuID~ I can train you and we have and play with a lot of tourney pros, so we know a little about the game. My name is LiQuID~MaCHiNE
Lay-tah
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| #59 {~Ascension~}[69527] |
| 47.rochelle-park-10rs.nj.dial-access.att.net |
| Yes...someone to train me. Cool, dude. I'm be there on the weekends and maybe I'll br some of u. |
| #60 <marquee>whitey_!</marquee>[70145] |
| spider-wi083.proxy.aol.com |
| =o |
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