| #1 phoenix[LoD][66980] |
| d185d17b5.rochester.rr.com |
Thanks for reading
Mature, constructive comments welcome.
Thanks all...
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #2 GoaTZiLLa![66981] |
| adsl-pool-1-8B7DE12B.cleveland.oh.ameritech.net |
| first non author, now to read |
| #3 LuckyNewbie:P[66984] |
| user-33qto90.dialup.mindspring.com |
wow. excellent report =)
some of the pictures and alignments were good, and the text was a little blurry in that one huge .jpg u had, but it didn't ruin anything. GJ man, i like how you put in the "tis but a flesh wound!" inside there right after your text. I wish i thought of that "perfect storm" joke before you =) Nice writing, good pictures, good map good game, good comeback. (and good title)
8.5 |
| #4 Nice[66987] |
| h24-66-197-125.cg.shawcable.net |
| Nice report... |
| #5 terrannavel[66993] |
| h000094b63add.ne.mediaone.net |
| 1st pervert! |
| #6 ~)V][nCeNt(~ a.k.a. Mr.Tourney[66999] |
| ch4blm.bellglobal.com |
| #6 weeeeeeeeeeeee |
| #7 :+:starduck:+:[67002] |
| dhcp-163-249.tulane.edu |
| This shit sucks. I'm sure you wasted MUCH more time writing this piece of trash than i spent reading it. Peace BITCH. |
| #8 WarLeaderJustin[67007] |
| spider-wd061.proxy.aol.com |
Last time saying this:
Request ban: :+:starduck:+:
Nice report, BTW, about 80% in my book.
-WLJ |
| #9 Spuzz[67008] |
| jfsn-02-35.dialup.netins.net |
Oh man...and this is only your second report? Oh man. Great job!! Your details and analysis of the game were impeccable. There are a lot of reporters who simply tell what happened, but you made a point to explain the pros and cons of everything, and that makes the report so much more engrossing. My hat's off.
Spuzz |
| #10 Arathorn[LoD][67010] |
| d181822f8.rochester.rr.com |
Wow...so much for constructive comments... Well "Bitch," let me thank you for not making me look as sucky as I am (I am VERY sucky...). Good Game Blade...one of these days we will 1v1 and I won't be toss and you won't be zerg...and then I'll lose again.
Well, good report. This one should be an 8-9 probably since you din't post after Breeze...(btw I think :+:starduck:+: is a little jealous, neh?)
...I just needed one more "..." You can stop reading now...
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| #11 PowerBlade[LoD][67011] |
| ubr-27.232.175.merrittisland.cfl.rr.com |
Great report, feel free to report any more games i win... report me losing and U DIE!!! hehe (i haven't had my medicine)
GG thorn, losing that exp was your downfall, about that toss comment above, for those of u who didn't get it, thorn and I have 1v1'ed many a time and thorn has yet to drawn anything but toss from the supposedly "random" setting.
report deserves <b>at least</b> an 8.) |
| #12 Digityl[67013] |
| 138.86.151.7 |
Nice report. Should get 8-9 easy. I liked the pic and text placements. That quote "tis just a flesh wound" had me laughing for a bit cuz my friend and I talk like that a lot...it was like you knew about our inside joke :)
Oh yeah.... to :+:starDICK:+: plz stfu, thx gw hf. peace bitch. |
| #13 Jin[67020] |
| dialup-209.244.119.192.Houston1.Level3.net |
0wnage. Pure unadulterated 0wnage.
In fact, I think the writing and battle itself owned far more than the pics (which also 0wned), something a lot of writer can't say. I especially liked the first battle - something most players would pass off as ordinary was cool and, since both players were experienced and damn good, you learned something if you're a newbie.
I say 9. |
| #14 Somebody...[67027] |
| proxy1-external.etntwn1.nj.home.com |
This report is awesome! Very concise and easy to read. The pictures and the great description made it feel like I was in the game. Also, the great strategy and analysis was very useful and true. Great job. If I were a rater, I would definetely give it a 10. But I'm not...*sniff*.^^
sby... |
| #15 .ClanKiller.[67066] |
| sdn-ar-004flfmyeP234.dialsprint.net |
| Well good job man, I do believe this BR is as details as is feasibly possible. Starduck...word of advice...do us all a favor...and go play in traffic. |
| #16 Hater[67109] |
| 147.97.26.39 |
Great br. I feel it should be over 90% because I really fealt like I was watching it. Good detail.
I think if things keep going as they are with fuckduck that he will just disapear. Already, people are talking less and less about his dumbass comments. Its a shame to flame a wounded duck, anyway. I mean horridly wounded. He has lost both legs and his bill due to massive flamage. I don't think I have ever seen so much roasted duck. Oh, thats another thing. Less and less people are talking to him. It is more talk about him like he isn't even there. Pretty much like I just did. |
| #17 [LoR]-Punisher[67117] |
| ktce1.156ce.singa.pore.net |
Nice br.
Will give 8.7 . |
| #18 Death Hawk[67134] |
| HSE-MTL-ppp4423.qc.sympatico.ca |
| WLJ, stop saying who should be banned. |
| #19 Illusion(DoS)[67141] |
| net0116058.direcpc.com |
| nice br |
| #20 Shepherd[67156] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
Great BR, details. Nice pictures. Change of text is a bit awkward. . .much easier if you keep one single font.
But. . .overall, this easily gets 9 or 10. |
| #21 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[67166] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
After reading that report, my eyes are still in shock.
Nice br - in essence - and ok pics . . . but the text was just far, far too big and gave me headache. It irritated me, in short, where it could have amazed me. Should have reposted, made text to about h5. Good try though . . . pity about the one little flaw ruining the whole br :(
7+ |
| #22 phoenix[LoD][67178] |
| d185d17b5.rochester.rr.com |
Thanks for the great feedback, everyone. Glad you enjoyed reading the report. Seems like I draw the attention of a random asshole every time I post. First tech, now starduck. My latest fan has such ridiculous posturing that nobody even needs to make fun of him. Heh heh, he's funny.
Dagomar, I'm sorry you didn't like the text size. I don't know about it "ruining the whole br," though. Nobody else even mentioned it or saw it as a problem. However, I will nevertheless look into shrinking the font next time around.
Hmmm... Im kind of anxious about being ignored by raters. I've had all the reports around me read and rated and so far I'm left out. Oh well... just impatience I guess.
As for as more feedback goes, EVERYONE reading this please give me comments. Tell me you love it because it ___ or you didn't like it because of ___. Input welcome (except for those similar to starduck, of course)!
Thanks all...
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #23 .Shadow.Master.[67191] |
| 216.126.196.169 |
Excellent report... well written and probably a 8-9 on the pics. If I could make one request... if you could put a little more detail into the explanations of micro managing. You mentioned he ran his lings around the zealots, but that was about it. If you noticed any more, please write it!
Although I had that one wish, I loved the rest of your writing. Thanks... write some more!
Shadow Master |
| #24 ~ZC~Burg632[67298] |
| AC9FE53D.ipt.aol.com |
hey pheonix nice job. =) keep up thte good work, about the raters keep posting quality reports and they will eventually get rated by all the raters. But keep up the great reports and by all means you have to have fun. =)
10 is my imput on score. =) the text is fine in my mind. |
#25  [67311] |
| dsl-gte-jr13661-2.linkline.com |
Can't believe no one rated this until me.
9 |
| #26 ~chuck[67336] |
| cx988238-b.omhaw1.ne.home.com |
| Quality dog. Nice job on the br. Like someone said up there, I felt like I was actually watching the game. I noticed some improvement from your last one. You're sure only to get better =] |
| #27 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[67601] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
It could be because I'm viewing it through crappy Netscape computers at the Library . . . I'll check it out with Explorer back home.
BTW Starduck commented on my reports as well, lol . . . he could become the next site mascot =! |
| #28 BUU[67606] |
| 207.80.13.5 |
I HATE IT! I HATE YOU ! DAMN YOU FOR CRUSHING MYDREAMS!!
i was gonna right a br but now i see just how futile my efforrts would be +( |
| #29 phoenix[LoD][67615] |
| d185d17b5.rochester.rr.com |
Thanks again, everyone. Comments are good. Several things for me to think about on my next little project. Thanks.
BUU, I'd suggest that you brush up on some simple grammar, spelling, etc. before you try to "right" a br. Other than that, I'll tell you to go for it. The only reason I'm doing these is that it's pretty fun. If you're going to enjoy the time you spend writing, get started.
Thanks again, everyone...
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #30 Dausuul[67673] |
| dinero.tcom.purdue.edu |
Excellent BR! Very clear, concise, understandable. The minimaps do an excellent job of showing us the big picture; the screenshots are well chosen and look cool; the game was fast and interesting all the way through. I wish more people wrote BRs like this--no gimmicks, just solid writing, pretty pictures, and a good game.
--Dausuul |
| #31 clutch^III[67676] |
| 128.148.60.239 |
Great report. The thing that stood out for me was the level of detail you went into in describing the strategy behind the skirmishing (i.e. the neccesity of rushing the early zerg expander). It gives a glimpse into the minds of the players, which is the whole idea behind reading reports imho. I found myself almost not needing the pictures, which is the benchmark by which I judge the clarity of the writing. Anyhow, good work.
clutch
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| #32 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[67754] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
After reading this on Explorer, it was better than I thought ;)
I would give this an 8.5 now, it was well done and looked good ;).
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| #33 Fractal_Wave[68055] |
| 24.65.12.23.bc.wave.home.com |
Me likey. Working the text into your pictures was especially nice.
All the best,
Fractal_Wav |
| #34 Julian[LoD][72254] |
| nas-46-78.cleveland.navipath.net |
forgot to post before, awesome job!!
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| #35 Spartacus[LoD][73785] |
| umi36.rad.rochester.edu |
| Nix...I never ever suspected you spent this much time obsessing over SC/BW!!!!! I gotta hand it to ya though, job well done...great report. And for god's sake stop playing the @#$%*^! comp all the time hehehe. |
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