| #1 Shepherd[66071] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
| 1st!~! |
| #2 _HiGheR_[66072] |
| d119024.dtk.chello.nl |
| 2!! |
| #3 Shepherd[66073] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
| Hmmmm. . .Just a little of editing, and this would be a good report, but problem is: there's a large period of time of inactivity, and also, the game is a bit awkward. . .I believe that you have the potential to become a good non-text battle reporter, Captian Spock. Just try to find some better game. |
| #4 SCV~007[66083] |
| t6o57p77.telia.com |
Compared to the average report quality the last month or so, this is great.
Heh I guess that sounds like I don't like it, huh? Damn. I liked this. It read a few paragraphs and it made me want to finnish it. (=very good text)
Are you .Praetor.'s clone? |
| #5 shameless[66100] |
| spider-tr033.proxy.aol.com |
| 5th with style, nice writing |
| #6 Scarab[66112] |
| ACA762A8.ipt.aol.com |
ehem:
Captain KIRK
and
MISTER Spock
get it right fucktard D:
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| #7 Dog101[66116] |
| 1Cust179.tnt39.chi5.da.uu.net |
you do pretty good with non-text brs spock.
Dog |
| #8 _Insanitarium_[66122] |
| dialup-63.212.187.212.Miami1.Level3.net |
Good report....Nukes own and carriers suck! KEEP IT THAT WAY WOO WOO!
_Insan_ |
| #9 Captain_Spock[66124] |
| wdcax1-079.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
Thanks guys! I'm pretty happy, considering it was my first attempt. When my computer has the capability, I'll add pictures. By the way Scarab, Spock, Scotty and Kirk were ALL Captains!
Captain_Spock
"Apology accepted, Captain Needa." |
| #10 CoolGuy~77[66129] |
| 64.228.43.144 |
| Nice Job! So keep it up! Eric's family wants more BRs! |
| #11 Scarab[66133] |
| ACA762A8.ipt.aol.com |
well it was always "captain kirk" and spock was always just called mister. I never heard Captain spock....
???
omg lets argue over star trek more |
| #12 AMD-SUX[66139] |
| spc-isp-van-uas-28-86.sprint.ca |
| <font color=blue><marquee>weeeee, man this is cool</marquee></font> |
| #13 CynicalMagician[66144] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Now this was fun stuff. I liked it. Although there was a large period near the beginning where it didn't seem like anything happened, even though you teched to everything, it was still cool. Write more, I like your style.
-CM |
| #14 [LoR]-Punisher[66150] |
| ktce1.156ce.singa.pore.net |
This is an ok report.Like what SCV said,your report was interesting enough for me to continue reading and finish it.If you could have improved on the report a little bit,it'll be great.You have the potential to become a non-text only battlereporter.
My advise is:Report a good game as an observer.
I think 5 is ok for this report. |
| #15 TelepathicSheep[66153] |
| 56K-336.MaxTNT2.pdq.net |
| I liked this report.Add a pic of carriers getting nuked and this will receive a 9;). |
| #16 Ain Soph[66160] |
| 1Cust86.tnt53.dfw5.da.uu.net |
He had alot to say.
He had alot of nothing to say.
We'll miss him.
So long.
We wish you well.
You told us how you weren't afraid to die.
Well then, so long.
Don't cry.
Or feel too down.
Not all martyrs see divinity.
But at least you tried.
Standing above the crowd,
He had a voice that was strong and loud.
We'll miss him.
Ranting and pointing his finger
At everything but his heart.
We'll miss him.
No way to recall
What it was that you had said to me,
Like I care at all.
So loud.
You sure could yell.
You took a stand on every little thing
And so loud.
Standing above the crowd,
He had a voice so strong and loud and I
Swallowed his facade cuz I'm so
Eager to identify with
Someone above the ground,
Someone who seemed to feel the same,
Someone prepared to lead the way, with
Someone who would die for me.
Will you? Will you now?
Would you die for me?
Don't you fuckin lie.
Don't you step out of line.
Don't you fuckin lie.
You've claimed all this time that you would die for me.
Why then are you so surprised to hear your own eulogy?
You had alot to say.
You had alot of nothing to say.
Come down.
Get off your fuckin cross.
We need the fuckin space to nail the next fool martyr.
To ascend you must die.
You must be crucified
For your sins and your lies.
Goodbye...
|
| #17 Snork~Dimmy[66163] |
| async85-per2-isp-2.nas.one.net.au |
"you do pretty good with non-text brs spock." -Dog101, yes gj being a moron.
Anways nice <b>text only</b> report, pics would have been nice, but gw none-the-less. |
| #18 -trainee-[66165] |
| 207-172-81-124.s124.tnt1.ptr.va.dialup.rcn.com |
| Why does everyone keep saying non-text only? doesnt non-text = no text, or = pictures only... Heh.. |
| #19 CornedBee[66166] |
| TK147047.univie.teleweb.at |
I think you were a bit lucky on that game - beating toss with nukes only! Whatever, the writing style is good and nukes are always funny. But I wonder why your comp hasn't got the capability to add at least one nukeshot. Would have raised the rating. 486-66? :)
CornedBee |
| #20 Snork~Dimmy[66169] |
| async12-per2-isp-7.nas.one.net.au |
| yes -trainee-, thats why i took the piss outta Dog101 |
| #21 TH-LittleBro[66176] |
| 164.106.184.95 |
| As much as the others seemed to want pictures, i was quite happy just to sit back and read for once. I love your commentary "fingering the photos of their families... and your account of hte attacks on the bunkers was awesome... a flat out 9 from here! |
| #22 JediTalion[66186] |
| m4bhSs2n170.midsouth.rr.com |
Star Wars quote = 10!!!!!
That my opinion. |
| #23 [{o}][66188] |
| AC8166CF.ipt.aol.com |
| Sorta unoriginal from my point of view... |
| #24 Snork~Dimmy[66241] |
| 61.12.118.81 |
| Sorry for spamming ur comments bud, but cornedbee u are also on the dim side, a 486 couldn't run BW, let alone windows. he didn't wanna add pics so leave him alone. |
| #25 Captain_Spock[66271] |
| wdcax7-232.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
I appreciate all your comments guys. It was a fun game, and fun to write. I wanted to write it as a commentary from the view of the Terran Commander instead of a standard BR, because that way it becomes a flowing story, and hopefully enjoyable. Thanks for your encouragement considering it was my first attempt, and another BR will follow in the future!
Captain_Spock
"Apology accepted, Captain Needa." |
| #26 LuckyNewbie:P[66431] |
| user-33qto8v.dialup.mindspring.com |
rotfl!! that was probably the best text only report i've ever read, even if it wasn't that great of a game =)
yeeesh, theres too many funny things in there to quote. You got a good sence of humor... add some graphics and a little html touch to it and you can get a ten...
hope to see/hear/read more reports from ya
~LuckyNewbie:P |
| #27 Dausuul[67219] |
| dinero.tcom.purdue.edu |
Pretty good report. I look forward to reading more. And throw in more Star Wars quotes!
--Dausuul
"Your hate has made you powerful. Now--fulfill your destiny... and take your father's place at my side!" |
| #28 jimmy[133937] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-206-183.prem.tmns.net.au |
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-NJ |
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