| #1 Silent~Death[62647] |
| ip240.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net |
| woohoo First and Johnny_Vegas can you get rid of that annoying little white bar again? thx |
| #2 ChinksWithGuns[62649] |
| 209-239-212-244.lax.jps.net |
| 2nd beeotch |
| #3 ChinksWithGuns[62650] |
| 209-239-212-244.lax.jps.net |
| haha oh shit, i thought it was Silent~Strike |
| #4 Silent~Death[62651] |
| ip240.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net |
STFU chink
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| #5 Silent~Death[62652] |
| ip240.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net |
STFU chink
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| #6 NoOne[62654] |
| spider-wb042.proxy.aol.com |
| Thats a nice Crazy Is Gay at the bottom.... hidden agaisnt thet balck blackground as blakc text |
| #7 WareLeaderJustin[62655] |
| spider-te064.proxy.aol.com |
Good BR, Silent. You are improving drastically. Although, there are a few things I could suggest.
1) Don't italiscize all text. Even though you created it and may not know it, your eyes get very one-sided after awhile.
2) Include pics with fighting! You did OK at telling us what's happening in between the fighting, but the people here want to see nukes dropping, storms going off, and scarabs exploding. Not a marine standing next to a tank defending an expansion.
3) Try to spend a little bit more time on your BR's. Your very serious, at least in terms of jokes, and your BR's seem a bit dry.
On a ending comment...
<i>"I was double rushed by 12 marines, 4 medics and 12 zealots which I fend off with a bunker and 3 tanks."</i>
Gosu-ness
Hm... I give it a 65%. Too many flaws to make it not gold, but it was good enough.
-WLJ |
| #8 WarLeaderJustin[62656] |
| spider-te064.proxy.aol.com |
| Yikes, I mean gold, not "not gold." |
| #9 WarLeaderJustin[62657] |
| spider-te064.proxy.aol.com |
| Geezuz, I can't type today, can I? Comment number 7 is made by "WarLeaderJustin" not "WareLeaderJustin" |
| #10 <marquee><b><i><u><font color="red">DRAG0ON</b></i></u></marquee></font>[62659] |
| edtn008136.hs.telusplanet.net |
A decent report, more detail would have been nice.
-Goon |
| #11 CraZy[62673] |
| px1he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| fuck you thx |
| #12 <font color=teal><font face="coronet">Zalbag</font></font>[62674] |
| chi-tgn-gjs-vty161.as.wcom.net |
i have to agree with most comments :P
(yes, this is just a stupid comment made to make you think "wtf?" :) |
| #13 shameless[62679] |
| spider-wq034.proxy.aol.com |
13th
ha
Wow, silent is getting sexy |
| #14 WarLeaderJustin[62681] |
| spider-tp063.proxy.aol.com |
Only in your mind, shameless. Only in your mind.
-WLJ |
| #15 Scarab[62688] |
| AC983493.ipt.aol.com |
since your fianlly seeming to make effort, ill give u advice..AGAIN :D
zoom im real far, when cutting out the minimap, so you dont have to see those yucky edges.
Dont italicize everything for the love of god.
put some kind of border on images to set them apart, and make them "an image"
fix that damn html problem fool!
gl
Scarab |
| #16 TeCh[62701] |
| 24.65.124.22.sk.wave.home.com |
IM back haha and no more spamming i just wanted to see what the ban page looked like heh its pretty cool any wayz i wanted to say nice br even though im retired off of ScBw I like reading brs some times this one was not bad exept it was fake and you used my old name ++raven++ and the names I made up for you I made em both so next time give me a little credit.thanx
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| #17 BW-sux[62780] |
| spider-wj042.proxy.aol.com |
Damn, this report has many many problems. Like blue-on-black, and italicized text. Use arial font.
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BW-sux |
| #18 Silent~Death[62791] |
| ip188.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net |
| how do u use different fonts??? |
| #19 _Insanitarium_[62849] |
| dialup-63.208.94.219.Miami1.Level3.net |
| Decent report, it followed the game well, and gave a good mental picture of what was going on at the time. 2v1s can be hard and require all of your attention. I can see how it would be hard to sidetrack here and there to take notes and pics for a battlereport... Keep up the good work! |
#20  [62944] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
<i>Blue on Black</i> is a good name for a song, but its a bad idea for a color scheme. Very hard to read the text and the italics didn't help matters.
The writing really wasn't half bad though and it was mildly interesting to see you trying to beat a 2v1 although the odds were definitely against you.
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Cheers,
Dref |
| #21 Silent~Death[62999] |
| ip208.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net |
| thanx Dref |
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