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-.Praetor, before beginning to write Phoenix Legion Chronicles




#1 Archon6[60952]
AC89F5C2.ipt.aol.com
Gee can someone PLEEASE tell me how to indent. Damn. FIRST! AW. Gimme some suggestions I tried to follow them from my previous ones.
#2 cyan[60955]
spider-wm028.proxy.aol.com
First non author! wow thats my first first on any kind1
#3 WarLeaderJustin[60959]
spider-tr071.proxy.aol.com
This is OK. A few suggestions...

1) Make the game a better one. A game where one player builds 8 sunkens in one base is generally not a very good game.

2) Make the pics smaller. There was a lot of wasted room.

3) Very one-sided. Again, #1.

4) Try to have a little bit more fun while writing. It felt dry.

Oh, and BTW...

<i>"The many many lings get very easily destroyed like a long line of dogs being eaten as they run."</i>

You are a sick guy. :D

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#4 BuckFutter[60983]
spider-wq034.proxy.aol.com
That is pretty sick...


look at another br, right click on the page, go to view source, and look where they indented to see what tag was used


#5 tonto[60984]
a24b25n229client18.hawaii.rr.com
a[z]n is a bunch of hacking abusers in the first place, this was a sick report.
#6 tonto[60985]
a24b25n229client18.hawaii.rr.com
by sick report i meant that the one line was sick, ah as;ljfd;salkfjsadl ;whatever
#7 King_[LSRS-13][60991]
c1081558-a.clmba1.mo.home.com
A[z]n blows hardcore. Like I said, ChanmanX kicked their teeth in and put them on his website. Go to bw.jzr.net if you haven't seen it. Funny stuff. BTW, azn is a bunch of misfits.

10

-7 for having gay ass clan players
-1 for turtling

Final score 2

King








#8 jeezumcrow[60993]
svweba03.statestreet.com
nice br but the game wasnt that great.
#9 Activus[61007]
sdn-ar-004nyrochP184.dialsprint.net
We don't need to know all your other nicks.

#10 dean=dead[61013]
smtorfw2.sdbi.ca
I think I missed how that mass of 25 or so M%M's and those 2 tanks in front of the zerg base died.
I think you missed a key battle somewhere in there. Also what happened to the hydras????????I saw like 10 of them....

Good images (I guess)
#11 [61015]
bvn.net
Things you can improve on:
-Not telling us the ending at the start. (But I think Geremy out resourced him in the end).
-Size the graphics a bit smaller, though I'm not a fan of 'one pile of hydra remains' graphics.
-Make up a few funnies and stick them in there.

Overall a good report. Good enough for gold.
#12 m1ndcontrol[61018]
ras-14.cyberglobe.net
Decent report, needs some flair so spice up your next one.
#13 BW-sux[61020]
spider-ta046.proxy.aol.com
Hmm... just don't report a[z]n's. They hack and they suck.

King: ChanManX hacks and is the same guy as Talon.

4
BW-sux
#14 Kami_Bum[61026]
sdn-ar-002ohclevP178.dialsprint.net
Indenting is a fine art.
All you have to do is hit the space 5 times for one tab indent.


<<<<This is a 5 space(tab) indent


P.S. if this doesn't indent, then i am an idiot
#15 Kami_Bum[61027]
sdn-ar-002ohclevP178.dialsprint.net
Bah, i am an idiot, please flame me now...

But that works in normal HTML
#16 archon6[61028]
AC940979.ipt.aol.com
LoL. indenting still a mystery.
#17 <p>++FalCon++[61032]
ip93.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net
hmmm im not sure really could be < P >
#18 ++FalCon++[61033]
ip93.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net
<p> guess it is < P > only put them together
#19 Alita99 (on Indenting)[61035]
128.32.216.191
The web isn't based on written "book" paragraphs, so separate your paragraphs with a < p &RT tag.

However, if you REALLY want to indent, try creating a small image to put infront of the paragraph that is the same color at the background color of whatever the webpage is.

#20 Alita99[61036]
128.32.216.191
Johnny or Mark4 can you fix this comment above? ampRT above to amp GT? Then delete this one? thanks
#21 garett[61057]
spider-tl073.proxy.aol.com
my experience with a[z]n is that they hack hardcore. Shared vision proved this, i have witnesses too =p
#22 AzNSuNBoY[61069]
AC83C9AE.ipt.aol.com
Um... to indent, type:
<PRE> </PRE>
Basically, this displays a preformatted (shown exactly as typed) version of 5 spaces =). Very creative, eh?
#23 AzNSuNBoY[61072]
AC83C9AE.ipt.aol.com
Ack!!!
ok, type &ltpre> </pre>, not whatever was up there...
ack this is queer, put
(pre) (/pre) with parentheses = to the html tag thingies (WHAT ARE THEY CALLED??? Greater/less than thingies??)
#24 AzNSuNBoY[61073]
AC83C9AE.ipt.aol.com
OK, third time...between the &ltpre%gt and the </pre>, put 5 Spaces, not 1 =Þ
#25 AzNSuNBoY[61074]
AC83C9AE.ipt.aol.com
ok i give up...i can't get my stupid tag thingies right
#26 [61081]
as530070.infocom.com
Hmm, I just couldn't get into this report. I would suggest, above all else, pick a better game to report on... :-)

6

Dref
#27 [61085]
on-tor-blr-a58-02-645.look.ca
Would have been good enough for gold, but 6 to punish you for useless large pics that suck for modem users :p
#28 Aznmichinome02[61090]
spider-tp061.proxy.aol.com
hey Jung nice Br for your FIRST TIME hahahaha, i like this one and make some funny and good ones
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#29 SCV~007[61137]
t1o957p48.telia.com
I liked this report. Yes really =).

With some nice graphics and minor text fixes it would be very good. You shouldn't tell us the ending right in the first paragraph though.

Again..with some graphics (edited images, collages..) this would be gold.

#30 [61236]
px1ma.cg.wave.shaw.ca
Yea it was a good br, but when i read what u had written down, it almost sounded like a 5 year old had done this up, words missing and shit, i dont know if this is some sort of lazy comp language or u have down syndrome, but if ur jes being lazy, try not to be next time, and im sure ul get a higher mark! =)
#31 archon6[83660]
sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com
<p> </p>indented bitch



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