| #1 Neo-TrunkZ[59061] |
| spider-tr063.proxy.aol.com |
This is how my first BR should have looked thank you very much angelfire!!! Special thanks to the ppl that helped me with the background...Please delete the other one if you can.
Neo-TrunkZ |
| #2 m1ndcontrol[59065] |
| wpad.cyberglobe.net |
Definitely an upgrade from the previous post. :) You are on the right track but there are a few things you need to pay attention to.
1. More game detail, your description of the game is too brief and does little to convey the flow of the game.
2. More images
3. Details!! |
| #3 m1ndcontrol[59066] |
| wpad.cyberglobe.net |
| 1 more thing, use more standard colours...the ones you chose were real harsh to the eye and hard to make out from one another. |
| #4 pitt[59068] |
| c697830-a.nwbtn1.ct.home.com |
| ummm i come back from not having read br's in like a month to read this? wtf, 0.0000001. PEACE! |
| #5 Casper...[59071] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-02-140.look.ca |
| fugly |
| #6 The..Scarab[59078] |
| ACA4E9BF.ipt.aol.com |
Pay attention class:
1.)too short
2.)your writing was like a rainbow, don't color things like "purple zealot" and pronouns (like I and ME smarty man)
3.)too short
Don't BR a game we don't want to read. The thing u have going is pics, those pics are decent enough for a good rating, however pics arent the rating. okey sorrey. |
| #7 Neo-TrunkZ[59080] |
| spider-tr064.proxy.aol.com |
| I just played a game with Undead{HeRo} but it was too hard to keep up with what was happening. I had a decent number of pictures too. I want to make a BR on it but its just too hard any comments? |
| #8 Neo-TrunkZ[59081] |
| spider-tr064.proxy.aol.com |
| I just played a game with Undead{HeRo} but it was too hard to keep up with what was happening. I had a decent number of pictures too. I want to make a BR on it but its just too hard any comments? |
| #9 WarLeaderJustin[59085] |
| spider-tr023.proxy.aol.com |
Nice report. I agree with The...Scarab. One thing I'd like to pound into you, though...
<b><center>DON'T COLOR HTML PRONOUNS! ANNOYING! VERY!</b></center>
Erm, that's all I got to say.
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| #10 Undead{HeRo}[59088] |
| tsmia2-53.gate.net |
| Too hard?! i feel offended. haha j/k =P. um...next time..find better games to BR. like..more action and then u'll be getting like 7/8's. You have nice graphics tho =) |
| #11 BW-sux[59092] |
| spider-wb034.proxy.aol.com |
Umm this sux basically.
4
BW-sux |
| #12 exactly[59094] |
| PNBFB104-19.splitrock.net |
| WLJ, stfu. |
| #13 WarLeaderJustin[59098] |
| spider-ti062.proxy.aol.com |
| Exactly, exactly wtf is your problem? |
| #14 CrazyTheFirebat[59099] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
Hmmmm...the imags wouldn't load for me, and I saw how short/non detailed it was, and didn't bother to read it.
3
Huk^^ |
| #15 livingexception[59113] |
| spider-te013.proxy.aol.com |
You got started on the right foot, just watch your spelling and caps on image sourcecodes (that kills me alot). Also <BIG>more attention to detail! Much more! </BIG>Writing always comes first, pictures second. The pictures help the reader visualize what's going on. Also, don't BR yourself. Much better to BR from an obs map, like one of Bob's of a tourney map. That's my dollar and a half.
LE |
| #16 ClockworkGrape[59153] |
| 1Cust193.tnt5.redmond.wa.da.uu.net |
| ITs ok....... The game was too short...... not enough detail..... THe game was too short... a few annoying color problems..... the game was a simple protoss zealot rush beating on another protoss, so try to find more interesting games. There weren't even any battles, he just ran you over like a semi rolls over an egg thats already crushed! But otherwise its a fine report. |
| #17 ClockworkGrape[59155] |
| 1Cust193.tnt5.redmond.wa.da.uu.net |
| Scratch that..... i just re-read it..... it wsn't a zealot rush, it was a Dragoon/zealot beat down, so instead of a semi running over the crushed egg... its..... *Thinks of something heavier*... a 65 Chevy Nova |
| #18 Dr.Zchivago[59200] |
| box2.trfb.navy.mil |
This was not very good. Horrible game, horrible commentary, horrible color scheme.
But I have seen worse.
Try again, please.
-Dr.Z |
| #19 Afro~[potato][59248] |
| adsl-63-200-50-207.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
haha exactly is silent death or soemthing the guy who had the well known series of crap reports
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| #20 The..Scarab[59275] |
| AC86E85A.ipt.aol.com |
JEFFK: I've got some new Duke Nukam lines yuo can put in yuor neat littal game, let me give them too yuo and yuo can tell me if theyr good:
"Mommy didnt raise no quittar - Im gonna shots yuo till yuo bleeds!"
will yuo use that?
Wieder: That isn't an Evil Dead line. We can't use it.
JEFFK: OH OKEY THEN:::: NUMBAR 2:
"Wathc out alians, Im on a murdaring kill frenzy!!!"
i liek that one
Wieder: Ummm...
JEFFK: stop cursing pleas
PRITTY GOOD HUH
Wieder: It has me speechless.
JEFFK: OKEY NEXT:
"Here comes mistar shotsgun, lets play teh dying game now!"
my brothar wrote that one
Wieder: How do you come up with something like that?
JEFFK: MOMMA DIDANT RAISE NO FOOL CHARLIE!!!@
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| #21 archon6[59498] |
| AC937663.ipt.aol.com |
| and u said i sucked.. |
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