| #1 SpermOfPurity[58923] |
| proxy.netsetter.org |
| 9th!! haha suckas |
| #2 [58926] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
Hope you guys like it. It's my 1st BR.
Oh, and btw. Where it sais the Probe scouted Top Right and Bottom Right, i meant it went to Top Left and Bottom Left. If you see any other errors in the report, plz be kind enough to point them out. Thanks. |
| #3 garett[58927] |
| cdm64-157.tyler.net |
I really liked the layout, the stats screen at the bottom hurt my eyes a little.
All in all a very very good first br. |
| #4 4world[58928] |
| whv-ca4b-197.rasserver.net |
i just want to say that ur br kick ass!
i love the humor section.. this is a gold nominee d8) |
| #5 Cyan[58930] |
| spider-te024.proxy.aol.com |
| dangit, you guys are fast. Ill never get a 1st! Good BR? hehe idont know yet i gotta read it now. |
| #6 4world[58931] |
| whv-ca4b-197.rasserver.net |
i just want to say that ur br kick ass!
i love the humor section.. this is a gold nominee d8) |
| #7 4world[58932] |
| whv-ca4b-197.rasserver.net |
i just want to say that ur br kick ass!
i love the humor section.. this is a gold nominee d8) |
| #8 [nE]Ethnik^^[58933] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
Geez, lol. It's almost 3:00 AM here, and i just posted this about 1/2 an hour ago and already 4 response.
Thnx guys. heh |
| #9 [58934] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
Hope you guys like it. It's my 1st BR.
Oh, and btw. Where it sais the Probe scouted Top Right and Bottom Right, i meant it went to Top Left and Bottom Left. If you see any other errors in the report, plz be kind enough to point them out. Thanks. |
| #10 [nE]Ethnik^^[58935] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
When u hit refresh it posts another message? Ooops...
Anyways, Another bug. I can't tell from left or right =( Just look @ the mini map, heh, and things shouldbe cleared. If it sais started left, but shows right on mini map. Then it's right. |
| #11 Cyan[58936] |
| spider-te024.proxy.aol.com |
| um, gj. id say a ..7. Id go with 9, but lotsa the text liek went on pictures n stuff, or did that only happen to me? |
| #12 [nE]Ethnik^^[58937] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
| Cyan, you need MIE to view this. 4.0+ gives best results. Netscape doesn't work, it happened to [nE]hadouken too when he was reading it. |
| #13 Mogalin[58938] |
| d226-98-102.home.cgocable.net |
Uhm nice stuff
Neat table stuff with surrounding the pleasantly read text
but the images were wretched! that font just sucked |
| #14 Cyan[58944] |
| spider-te024.proxy.aol.com |
| DAmn this AOHell, i think i haev MIE:( o well ill check. |
| #15 CynicalMagician[58947] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Cool looking stuff, but I would pick different fonts for the images. For most of the first half the text in images was almost unreadable. Flesh it out with a bit more writing too. Other than that, GJ, I like your fx etc.
-CM |
| #16 garett[58948] |
| proxy.netsetter.org |
| the images rocked and the font was very eye pleasing |
| #17 <in>ferno[58963] |
| cf3k-4.paradise.net.nz |
I don't know what you mean by bad fonts, i thought they were great...your lay out is just unincredible, the best i've seen so far.(not only the images but the lines and the names)
Maybe try to write the battlereport a bit more exciting and it would have been even better
great job! |
| #18 smackemupagus[58970] |
| alproxy1.proxy.lucent.com |
nice work, i agree with #17 the layout of your text and pics was cool. I don't mind the odd font because it added to the effect. The only thing is that the game was a little slow. Maybe you could have done more with your writing to add interest, but it would probably help if you BRed a game with a little more action.
gj! 8 |
| #19 AnotherPerson[58971] |
| spider-wg013.proxy.aol.com |
| Grate BR for newbiez =). I also realy liked the 'college' of pictures, but the one thing I liked that not to many people do is at the end, you showed us what there upgrades where. Keep up the good work. |
#20  [58974] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-04-411.look.ca |
Maybe its just me, but i didnt like this as much as u guys did. The humour wasnt funny to me, and i really hated that font :(
Also, there was a huge blank white space at the end for me.
7 |
| #21 Loonymaniac[58981] |
| 202.156.2.243 |
| I didn't like that font and this report isn't really as good as some of the other golds but still,i must say that a lot of effort has been placed into graphic editing. |
| #22 exactly[58989] |
| spider-wo084.proxy.aol.com |
| wassuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuup. gj on your first br. |
| #23 Warfare[58991] |
| 209-63-113-57.sea.jps.net |
Effort: 10
Battle: 5
Layout: 9
Graphics: 7 (more action)
Total: 7.75
Good work,
War
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| #24 BW-sux[59001] |
| spider-we034.proxy.aol.com |
Hmm... Bad font in the images, periwinkle-on-white is a little hard to read.
7
BW-sux |
| #25 {88}hawk[59002] |
| 209.128.34.3 |
ok here you go :
Couldn't read the font on the images, wth was that?
" [NE]ONE. ONE OF THE MANY GREAT PLAYERS OF CLAN [NE]."
let me rephrase that :
[ne]one. another one of the newblings of clan [ne]. because clan [ne] sucks ass. we're just newbies.
did you hit about 100 times at the end??. my god.
6.5 |
| #26 Sonneillon[59005] |
| tsdlsk01d01010114.sk.sympatico.ca |
<i>
"Great potential I feel in this one, Ben."
"Unfortunately, the report was a complete beat down. If a zerg can make his spawning pool at 27 supply, it is like an auto win."
"Mmm-hm. Indeed."
</i>
Sorry, sometimes voices speak to me. Like my mentor said, you have some awesome potential. The layout was great, and for once, I actually liked the font size. It looked very professional to me having a small font.
But, what the hell was the font on your pics? It was unreadable. I was like ... uh... *looks at StarCraft manual for translation* Nope, no protoss words.
Next time around, get two evenly matched players on a less overplayed map (like Dark Continent, or some big ass island map ie River War, Primeval Isles) and you would be looking at 9+.
Sadly though, this report is very 7ish. I hope you are like Breeze and keep improving.
-Sonny Bouy |
| #27 [nE]Ethnik^^[59008] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
| {88}hawk, what do you mean by 100 times @ end? |
| #28 Sonneillon[59010] |
| tsdlsk01d01010114.sk.sympatico.ca |
| Oh yeah - one more thing. Don't use a solarize filter on the stats. |
| #29 [nE]Ethnik^^[59012] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
If i left the stats the way they were, it woulda looked out of place cuz of the black background, so i had to do negative image. Maybe next time... if there is a next time, i'll make the stats into a pic or a seperate table.
Thnx 4 all the comments. |
| #30 Ashdate[59015] |
| nat194.116.mpoweredpc.net |
| On an almost totally unrelated note, this report looks horrible on the Netscape 6 Preview Release 1. |
| #31 [nE]hadouken[59018] |
| tc2-55.utah-inter.net |
| I give this rating an 8. . .but man this was his first report. Let's try not to spam. . .some ppl (hawk) and give constructive criticism. Pleaz use Internet Explorer when you view this, I tried with Netscape and it looked all messed up (ashdate that could be your problem). I saw no blank space at the end, and the font was sky blue, maybe not the best but it wasn't that bad. And no I'm not giving it an 8 b/c I was in it and won either. . .He worked really hard on this report and I give him props. Nice job Ethnik :P. |
| #32 Afro~[potato][59031] |
| adsl-63-200-48-221.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| the thing kinda looked jumbled even on ie. but good effort and nice graphics |
| #33 {88}hawk[59035] |
| 209.128.34.3 |
awww I love little clans showing their love for each other. so cute.
100 spaces at the end is what I mean. an entire page of white. it was constructive critism.
your a newbie improve. |
| #34 Afro~[potato][59037] |
| adsl-63-200-48-221.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| there was also some lame spelling mistakes like in the end, you put "UNLEASH THE MAYHAM" that stood out very obviously. (A new ad campaign for spam?) |
| #35 m1ndcontrol[59048] |
| wpad.cyberglobe.net |
Beautiful job, shows a big effort with the imagery and layout. I think that it could have used a bit better play by play, I was relying on the images to understand the flow of the game. Overall it was a good job ethnik.
haven't seen any of your reports here mister "your a newbie improve {88}Hawk. Put out something as good as this and i'll listen, till then you sound like a broken record with your hardass attitude. |
| #36 Casper...[59051] |
| on-tor-unv-ap3-23-2.look.ca |
| T_Mac obviously didn't let it load. This is an 8.5 at least. |
| #37 S_Warrior[59054] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
with IE5 this br worked just fine
no big white gaps whatsoever
that last thing were the scores
as for the BR
very nice graphics =)
I liked it =)
not the usual boring white stuff =)
but the colour of your text should have been a dif colour
kinda hard to read
they're killing my eyes
and this One player is definitely nowhere near the skills of his opponent ( either that or he's bad with t vs z )
still it's definitely an 8 IMHO
if not higher.......... |
| #38 [nE]BuSh[59055] |
| fctnts13c05.nbnet.nb.ca |
gw ethnik. the report was very well done but that font in ur images is kinda hard to read =].the problem wasnt w/ the quality of the image but the font itself is hard to read. everything else was good, and the effort shows.
as for {88}hawks remark: why u gotta trash talk on a public battle report forum? not cool man, not cool at all.
|
| #39 [nE]Ethnik^^[59056] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
Hawk, use MIE 4.0+, 5.0 if possible. Set your screen to 1024x768. If there is still a problem, you need a new computer ^.^
The bottom are the final stats of the game. It could be possible that your computer did not load those images.
And what ever mistakes you see on the image/grammer/spelling, please point it out... thou i'm not gonna make any changes, cuz it is VERY time consuming. I spent close to 6 hours organizing all the pic together and trying to plz all you people =)
Well, thnx. Keep the comments comming, anyway that i can plz you let me learn.
FINAL NOTE!! USE MICROSOFT INTERNET EXPLORER TO VIEW THE REPORT!! |
| #40 [nE]Ethnik^^[59058] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
Well, I don't think OnE is a Protoss player. He's much better with Zerg. And it was hadouken's choice of map...
But all is fair. They both randomed. But still, OnE shouldof gotten Reavers instead of Templars in my opinion, cuz he hardly god off any good hits.
We could of done the BR on a random map, but then again, there would be more work involved. =( and i'm a lazy ho. |
| #41 }{i[59082] |
| sdn-ar-017casfrMP203.dialsprint.net |
Hrm, I thought that the text color was a little bit too light (light blue on white) and the pictures took a gazillion years to load (so I didn't wait for them). There were some grammer problems towards the end and YES, lots of confusion between left and right...
But it was a detailed report with some humor and it actually has some images (unlike mine, bleh I'm learning) so I would give it a 6 - 6.5
You should probably triple check your report next time after you're done
It's good though... |
| #42 [nE]Ethnik^^[59084] |
| cr733852-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
}{i, yup, i realized that too when i woke up this morning. I finished it @ around 3-4 AM and was to lazy to even read it over once, so i just uploaded to geocities, friends said it looked good. So i uploaded it here.
But i'll try harder... ummm.... when ever the next time i'm bored. hehe.
Oh yeah, and the pics. Yes, there there is appromaitly 2 megs worth of pics so, ummmm, loaded when u have to use the facilities or something, heh.
Thnx |
| #43 testo[59116] |
| mkc-94-167-4.kc.rr.com |
| it was a nice report, i liked the style, only complaint is the large text was hard to read and somewhat looked out of place..other than that i liked it a lot |
| #44 Xd's~grrrr...[59386] |
| cd280726-a.scrfld1.mb.wave.home.com |
| WTF u trying to make me blind? |
| #45 SmElLyKaBoOsE[59764] |
| spider-tr081.proxy.aol.com |
| I stopped reading after the first 30 seconds of my download... mostly because my eyes popped out of my head from the font. Try a different one next time, yeah? |
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