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#1 Silent~Death[58054]
24.65.124.22.sk.wave.home.com
1st
#2 Silent~Death[58057]
24.65.124.22.sk.wave.home.com
now i look upon u other numbers that aren't 1 haha
#3 The..Scarab[58060]
AC857102.ipt.aol.com
Make this better.
Then I will like it.
#4 WarLeaderJustin[58104]
spider-wq063.proxy.aol.com
OK, a whole list of suggestions I can make, and most of them don't have to do with HTML.

1) Write either hardcore serious, or softcore sarcasm/humorous. A combination of both never works.

2) Describe battles more in detail. I didn't know what was going on half the time

3) A text mini-map update is always wanted.

4) ALERT: HTML SUGGESTION: Hehe, anyways, you might want to get the font for the whole BR one same color. It just looks A LOT better that way.

5) BR a longer game. Or at least make the BR itself longer.

6) Keep at it. You show some great effor, and if you try to leech off some of the reports here, you'll get better.

<center><font size="14"><font color="blue">64%</center></font></font>

Great efffort.















#5 KetchupFactory[58114]
webcache.hat.netdoor.com
Oh my god,

No
DREFSAB RULES I LOVE HIM

or
BE MORE LIKE DREFSAB, I ADORE HIM

from Warleaderjustin in the past 2 comments (one of Drefsabs report no less).







#6 WarLeaderJustin[58115]
spider-wq063.proxy.aol.com
HEY, KETCHUP, YOU WANT BE STFU? JUST IGNORE ME, THEN! Geesh, just because you aren't famous enough to have a devout fan, doesn't mean you have to poke fun at me just because i recognize Drefsab's superior writing style.
#7 tEh....Scdrab[58117]
AC87648B.ipt.aol.com
alll yuo whiet rasist pepel kil aech oether ovher ssikn colur
#8 KetchupFactory[58133]
webcache.hat.netdoor.com
You dont recognize his superior writing talent, you drool over him like a 7th grade teeny bopper at an n'sync concert. And unfourtantly, I keep reading your comments hoping to see something more constructive then

OMG DREFSAB I WANT TO HAVE YOUR CHILD

#9 WarLeaderJustin[58141]
spider-wq063.proxy.aol.com
Whatever. Just whatever.
#10 Yatrix[58156]
1Cust246.tnt1.valparaiso.in.da.uu.net
well, dude. make the BR's longer with more detail. pictures always speak a thousand words. it seemed like you had battles but i was never really sure what was going on. your BR was to Blah to be a good read. but, try again. i made a BR and it got yanked after about 5 hours. so i know what sucky looks like. hehe.

anyway, GL on your next one. keep trying.


The Yatrix is watching...

#11 Skullbattalion[58157]
hoproxy1.proxy.lucent.com
this is just a filler comment: keep it going good potential.
i want drefs skull.



i offer 300$ for it. more if in good condition
#12 jeezumcrow[58158]
svweba02.statestreet.com
this reminds me of the battle reports from battle.net hehe, nice effort but the writing can be improved with a little more analysis in the game.
#13 BackStabingLiar[58159]
63.239.42.130
i agree with warleaderjustin about your good effort and improvements u can do to your writing, which mainly is just in need of more detail.

but for pics, just upload them to geocities or some shit and link to them with this tag
[a href="www.geocities.com/thecrow/image.jpg] any alt text u might want here[/a]

good luck and good job
#14 The_Crow[58163]
ip129.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net
Thanx
#15 The_Crow[58198]
ip91.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net
Im confused ?^^
#16 The_Crow[58215]
24.65.124.22.sk.wave.home.com
Who the fuck wrote these comments obove me?
I didnt.=D
So whats fun in using other ppls names whoever you are.=P
#17 The..Scarab[58241]
AC9B78D8.ipt.aol.com
Ok you have problems.
You are
Silent~Death, The_Crow, ++Dodger++, and some other fagot.
plz stop trying to hide your names, a name does not make a br better

ANJD *#@!(#*&S*jo #U)@ !#^DIaDJ E)*Y#@^ !#(#@_)P
$*@UIJ#M!#J &R(#)_@#OP

The..Scarab



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