| #1 Bill[56829] |
| dialup-63.208.65.10.Chicago1.Level3.net |
| Hi. |
| #2 JawaAvenger[56830] |
| d6-22.hntnny.optonline.net |
Not bad... For some reason it was hard to read though...
For some other reason, I found that the Vulture "equiped with headlights and a horn to beep at people he found annoying." was funny... I really don't know why. |
| #3 Deranged~SCV[56839] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| Nice Fan-Fic. I suppose mine can put up a fight with yours and rhinos. GO-SU! |
| #4 BW-sux[56847] |
| spider-ti011.proxy.aol.com |
Good finfic. A few parts had some huge paragraphs, but it didn't really detract from its quality.
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BW-sux |
| #5 ~)V][nCeNt(~[56848] |
| ch2blm.bellglobal.com |
5th. yay.
7.5 |
| #6 SqueakyMonkey[56850] |
| osh1-76e.twcny.rr.com |
More high-quality fan fic, which seems to be all that this site gets, nowadays.
Just as well-written as the first part, although I did find one problem:
<i>"Himself had be a wraith pilot"</i>
Probably should have been
<i>"He himself had been a wraith pilot"</i>
Just little nit-picky stuff, fine work.
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| #7 SeXyZeRgLiNg[56856] |
| ideabox1.BestBuy.com |
| After reading this, I want to sleep for a very very very long time, plus my eyes hurt as well. |
| #8 probe[56863] |
| 24161239hfc65.tampabay.rr.com |
| change the name of this site to fanfic.com |
| #9 Phoenix-S-[56872] |
| r-174.163.alltel.net |
| I've already read this at infoceptor so I'll just say you deserve a 9 8) |
| #10 SqueakyMonkey[56927] |
| osh1-72d.twcny.rr.com |
| It's rare to see a report that gets less than ten comments. This is not one of those reports, now. |