| #1 CynicalMagician[56021] |
| px3cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Pics didn't work very well, and I found the writing was lacking a few things. 1) Details. Maybe it was just the shortness of the game, but there didn't seem to be a lot of text there. Maybe I'm incredibly dense, but I need things to be beaten over my head before I get them. 2) Flair. Throw in some flashy words, or humour, or go for a total serious feel. Whatever. RIght now though, it's a little plain. 3) Get a better game. This one wasn't particularly exciting.
In short, report if you like, but I would suggest finding a different match for yuor first game.
-CM |
| #2 CynicalMagician[56022] |
| px3cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Oops. "...a different match for your first game." should read, "...a different match for your first BR."
-CM |
| #3 AzN[56023] |
| spider-to075.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice Report! =) |
| #4 WSSO[56024] |
| hsa036.pool004.at101.earthlink.net |
| Nice but the pics didnt show up. |
| #5 GaryTheHairySpoon[56030] |
| pool-209-138-37-79.irvn.grid.net |
| small dicks like a fuckin disability man! |
| #6 WarLeaderJustin[56041] |
| spider-we074.proxy.aol.com |
Why am I commenting? My "BR's" STILL SUCK. Well, here goes.
Excellent first report. +25%
Nice Picture Editing at the Very End for Battle Shots. +25%
A lot of details. +30%
Lack of Writing/Humor/style. -20%
Kind of hard to read. -5%
Final Score. 65%
This is much more gosu that my reports... If you learn to image HTML, you will be a very entertaining reporter. Keep up the great work! |
| #7 =(KW)=DaFeAReD[56050] |
| pool0331.cvx12-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
| rain u moron... gawd... learn to post BR's =O |
| #8 =(KW)=DaFeAReD[56051] |
| pool0331.cvx12-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
| and this game sucked... too short and barely any action... the second game was tiote... frickin hydras gettin blown up everywhere and guardians getting irradiated... me totally owning akira =) |
| #9 BW-sux[56111] |
| spider-we011.proxy.aol.com |
This wasn't that good of a report. Most of the pics didn't load. Not the best writing, or the best game, but not the worst of either.
5
BW-sux |
| #10 NeoNess[56120] |
| r3p46.directcon.net |
hey rain nice for your first try
i never get the images to work either so oh well hope to see more out of ya |
| #11 Rain[56139] |
| dhcp93106128.columbus.rr.com |
Sheesh
sorry, for crying out load
i didn't know how it was gonna end up for my first time, it was just a little thing i felt like doing cos i had nothing else to do
don't worry, my next ones will be better cos i will upload the files to my server and link to them there. Sorry about the inconvenience everyone, i wanted to delete the br but didn't know how to...hehe
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| #12 Napoleic[56178] |
| 24.66.179.206.bc.wave.home.com |
...Walked in like it was the holiday inn
lol
Good work man |
| #13 BW-sux[56195] |
| spider-we074.proxy.aol.com |
Use the preview button please.
Also, to delete a BR, go to the forum and ask the admins to delete it.
BW-sux |
| #14 =(KW)=FactorX[56573] |
| cust195.tnt1.dial.tor2.uunet.ca |
| Nice Rain, of course I can do better but still nice:) Someone should have written a BR for ME vs YOU, it was a good game and pretty long too. |
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