| #1 Wraithfighter[51930] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
first
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| #2 Wraithfighter[51931] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
How do you like it?
2 in 2 days. Trying to get my quota done before camp |
| #3 CynicalMagician[51932] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Way to pump them out. I remember doing the same thing, until I finally decided that sleep beat BR's... =P Anyway,
Writing: Pretty good, better than your last IMHO. Your writing is still fairly young sounding, (don't take the wrong way) but if you read some good literature and write more reports it'll get better and better (which has been the continuing trend for you). Easy to follow (especially due to the game) and it read fairly well.
Images: Glad to see another author uses collages. Yours are pretty good. Clear, borders, sharp images, easy to read text. I also really liked the ghost nexus. Very cool. It looked like a nexus turned DT. However, I would be careful about leaving blank space in collages. Even if you just extend an existing picture to have a little more SC terrain, it helps to fill the void. It looks like a couple of yours have pieces of the puzzle missing or something.
Appearance: I'm not a huge fan of the big fonts, but no biggie. Pretty plain, but functional.
Overall: Nice work. Please stop changing the scores to make yourself have lots though... Lots of people have been doing that lately, and it's getting a little overdone. Also, try and pick a longer game. This one wasn't too exciting. Also, I'm confused as to why the protoss didn't take the islands, or go for a drop on red's main... Oh well. Fun to talk about what the players should and shouldn't have done when you're reading about it, eh?
-CynicalMagician |
| #4 LordWoody[51935] |
| okc-94-236-170.mmcable.com |
The first logo is better, though it might be improved a little. The main problem with the second is that you can't really read it. Oh well, the br was pretty darn good, but you were wrong about the terran not having many options vs toss, I kick ass with my nuke rush build order all the time.
LordWoody |
| #5 Wraithfighter[51938] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
| Cynical: Of course my writing style is youngish, i'm an immature freshman. Makes sense, no? but thanks for the positive feedback |
| #6 Hiso[51943] |
| proxy2-external.santab1.ca.home.com |
| I liked the report alot nice pictures, fair writing and good insights |
| #7 MrBobDole[51969] |
| 1Cust15.tnt1.scl1.da.uu.net |
Nice Report. I don't think I like either of the logos :[ The first one just looks too much like a Christmas banner for some reason (too many red Wraiths) and the second is hard to make out. Sorry :( I don't know why but I really liked the fonts :). Overall, good quality BR'ing.
-MrBobDole
BTW, freshman suck. Go Seniors! Class of 2000 baby! |
| #8 Siege-[51976] |
| 145.44.66.107 |
One remark: Its just Protoss, not Protossian or whatever...
For the rest, it was kinda good. I'd go with 7. |
| #9 S_Warrior[51979] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
Drefsab being the annoying homo sapien he is will prolly flame you about that first part with those scv's
but kinda kewl =)
not sure why you changed your font side
but the pics where kewl =) |
| #10 Hostile~SCV[51992] |
| spider-wn064.proxy.aol.com |
Yeah, better than the first for sure, but like Cynic said, your writing style seems a little... young. Hey, I'm only a sophomore, I understand you're a little behind now. =)
Great game, however. Why did you use such a big font at the start? I thought that was a little un-necessary. Hey, the burrowed zergling logo... that's the one I nuked, right? =)
7
The Hoss Bot |
| #11 MoNsta[52012] |
| user-24-214-51-32.knology.net |
Ummm enough of the TVP games they are the most boring matchup i didnt even read this one cause i knew it would be gay :( no offence its just the matchup is boring...
ne ways u did good wit the 1st br i read but not another tvp plzzzzz |
| #12 Wraithfighter[52075] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
| You idiot Monsta. Try reading them. This time the TERRAN won. I don't have them choose the races. |
| #13 Neal64[52168] |
| spider-wj013.proxy.aol.com |
lol immature freshman. U think thats immature im a 8th grader hahahahah no1 can beat that. Good report. Monsta T v P games are like any other games, just becuz the races are the way they are doesnt mean one person is going to get owned.
-13 year old Neal64 |
| #14 Silver`Thunder[52169] |
| spider-tp034.proxy.aol.com |
We need more battlereporters like wraithfighter, that pump out BRs like there is no tomarrow, even if they aren't perfect =].
Nice work, Wraithfigher! |
| #15 Wraithfighter[52240] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
| Thanks silver. Sadly, I am going to camp at CTY in Santa Cruz. If anyone is going there give me a msg. |
| #16 Mr.Forgetful[52647] |
| lambda-pre.alphalink.com.au |
that was a really neat little report.
'protossian' sounds kinda gay however
7.5-8.0 |
| #17 miss.whiteTown[52850] |
| srvpublicis.publicis.ca |
man.... ur report kick asses...
i like ur way to ridiculise the game |
| #18 the same old slut[52851] |
| srvpublicis.publicis.ca |
| 10 by the way |
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