| #1 JFeTT[51929] |
| ro04-204-210-189-182.ce.mediaone.net |
| First. |
| #2 CynicalMagician[51934] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
This is a real mixed bag Ethel...
Writing: I like it, and I didn't like it. There was a lack of proper formatting around quotes, grammar errors, puncuation, spelling, the whole shibang there. However, I did like the writing itself, I found it fairly amusing and funny. Flowed pretty good too.
Images: N/A.
Appearance: Please format, and use proper paragraphs.
Overall: Neat concept, I like it. However, you need to flesh it out more, make it longer, perhaps treat it more like a fanfic. Have a more extended interview, or do several. In short, make it long (Pun intended).
-CynicalMagician |
| #3 Ethel The Frog[51936] |
| pc6cdn03.fcc.net |
| Thanks for the feedback, Cynical. I suck with HTML, and I'm too ashamed to ask how to do paragraphs using HTML. And since people don't seem to be responding so well to the bad spelling and whatnot, I guess this means more words will have to be spelt correctly! |
| #4 CynicalMagician[51942] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
It's easy, you dont need to use HTML. In the submit box instead of typing:
"Hey man, hows it going?" said Billy. Tommy replied, "Not bad, how about you?"
go:
"Hey man, hows it going?" said Billy.
Tommy replied, "Not bad, how about you?"
Just put a space in between paragraphs, by pressing enter twice after you finish off one. No HTML necessary, just a working keyboard. Make sure you dont check the little box by the submit thing, I think it says disable something or other. Don't check that and then just use the enter key. It works great.
-CynicalMagician |
| #5 BW-sux[51996] |
| spider-tm014.proxy.aol.com |
Basically, what Cynical said. There is an HTML guide in the reporting guides section of this site.
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BW-sux |
| #6 The Mad Clown[52020] |
| spider-ti031.proxy.aol.com |
Funny, very funny.
hahaahahahahahhahahhahahhahahahhahah
ahahahahhahhahahhahhahahhahahhah!
Im not insane im just the mad clown.
:D |
#7  [52048] |
| inehou-pxy05.compaq.com |
It wasn't that bad if you got past the bad format. But that can be improved on easy next time you do one. Keep it up! Also like everyone said there is an HTML guide at the site, very helpfull.
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Fox^1 |
| #8 Ethel_The_Frog[52073] |
| pc3cdn03.fcc.net |
| All I have to say is that I can't believe this got a 6. In fact, I can't believe it got rated at ALL, considering it's nothing more than some satirical tripe and in no way a battle report. Tee.. |
| #9 Neal64[52133] |
| spider-ta021.proxy.aol.com |
| haha funny...Just type the battlereport like a normal document if u are not using HTML. |
| #10 CaptainAhab[52151] |
| spider-wd072.proxy.aol.com |
| TOP TEN. This is tight. |
| #11 guy who loved "Story of a typical terran marine"[52178] |
| PPPa29-ResaleSchaumburg1-3R1029.saturn.bbn.com |
Heh. This was cool too, but your first little story replaced catch-22 as my favorite war story ever. and it was a damned page and a half long.
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