| #1 ovinder[50576] |
| iridium-asy-88.rutgers.edu |
| Not Bad. :) |
| #2 ovinder[50577] |
| iridium-asy-88.rutgers.edu |
| My God. I've never been first before, I even read it first. Where are all the "1st" whores? |
| #3 Viper$[50616] |
| spider-wi061.proxy.aol.com |
<P ALIGN=center>I was wondering the same thing
It's been 2-4 hours since it was posted(time zones SUCK ASS) and I still got 3<sup>rd</sup>
Great story
Kinda wierd though
I can't wait to read the next section and find our why the Protoss would be training Terrans
<P ALIGN=left><font size=20><font color="red">T</font><font color="blue">e</font><font color="white">r</font><font color="yellow">r</font><font color="green">a</font><font color="purple">n</font><font color="aqua">s</font> <font color="orange">o</font><font color="lime">w</font><font color="silver">n</font> |
| #4 Cracky_The_Peon[50627] |
| 216.230.139.26 |
Protoss own. Protoss are supreme beings. Bow down before them. Bow mortal, bow. And yes. I am weird. And yes, it is a weird story. Thanks for the support Viper$.
Cracky
P.S - Drefsab is a bastard ;^) (except when he's rating obviously quality fanfics such as this) |
#5 [50637] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
God this sucks... 1<i>!!</i>
haha, j/k
I like your writing style. This was definitely an improvement over part 1. That last paragraph was a little long, but other then the fact that the story was a little short for fan fic, I can't find too much to gripe about.
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Dref |
| #6 :+:NoonE:+:[50672] |
| c408591-a.plstn1.sfba.home.com |
| <marquee>6th</marquee> |
| #7 :+:NoonE:+:[50674] |
| c408591-a.plstn1.sfba.home.com |
i want to test something
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| #8 The Mad Clown[50711] |
| spider-ti023.proxy.aol.com |
Nice fan-fic. Can't wait to read the next installment.
Protoss > All :)
the mad clown
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| #9 crusador[51411] |
| ip38.memphis14.tn.pub-ip.psi.net |
Your fanfic sucks, (hey what the....) Need More Fanfics..... Need More Fanfics..... Need More Fanfics.... Need More Cracky.... Need More Cracky...... Need More..... :p
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