| #1 Kosher man[50008] |
| clt25-88-166.carolina.rr.com |
| i got first! haha! wellt his br was alot better then the last one you did but you should try and change your writeing style around alittle to something more exciting just reciting what happen like ben stine is not that fun to read try to liven it up. Pic where not half that bad so over all a good report keep them comeing homo. |
#2  [50009] |
| PPPa80-ResaleColoradoSprings1-2R7343.saturn.bbn.com |
Your writing style could improve. I don't feel like the game was exciting. Try to spice it up a little. Your pics layout was good, and you didn't add yellow font to a white backround this time.
It seems that you left out some details or the Toss player was really bad. I mean you had a screenshot with 5+ scouts. Scouts cost almost as much as a carrier. So this was late game. As also seen by the amount of minerals.
You should also position your pics differently. If they are all in the same place, it doesn't look that appealing to the eye. But overall a much better improvement then the last BR. Keep them coming your getting better.
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Fox^1 |
| #3 CynicalMagician[50010] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
I rarely comment on the players, but what the hell was yellow up to? I saw the resource scores, and even with a 1:1 ratio of terran money to toss money, the toss shuold win. Oh well, I would still get raped by either of them =P. Not a bad report, but not great either. I find blue hard to read on black, but I guess I am at the ripe ol' age of 17... as the previous comments said, your writing style could use some pizzaz. Also, make the battles exciting. Remember, the readers weren't watching the game, so all we have to go by for the excitement factor is your writing.
-CynicalMagician |
| #4 ImGoingPeoNs[50015] |
| spider-tq063.proxy.aol.com |
| nice BR....and btw WOOHOO #4 |
| #5 <font color="blue">Blue~Devil</font>[50018] |
| dialups-612.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| Nice br! and i went to gosu.org and d/l their server. its awsome cuz there good players and no lamers and no lag! i got 1 green out of my normal 6 red. |
| #6 SiegeTank[50019] |
| 145.44.70.232 |
Hmm.. it was nice. But I prefer 'siegetanks' instead of just 'siege'... it gets kinda confusing.
Also, try another font. I didnt really like this one, and blue on black isnt that great. And try to tell more about minerals/expansions. Now the end was like 'and suddenly he had no more minerals so he conceded the game'... |
| #7 PeonSanders[50022] |
| cm-24-25-142-118.nycap.rr.com |
| Scouts, what are these scout things that you speak of. Heh heh heh. Mass Scouts...??!! Simply stunning. |
| #8 Blank[50024] |
| 213.hartford-13-14rs.ct.dial-access.att.net |
He massed Goons and Scouts vrs terran heavy metal? :(
Blank |
| #9 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[50026] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>First. |
| #10 Agent_of_Sol[50028] |
| 207.245.119.245 |
Not a bad report, but the problem was that the Terran won without attacking more that a naked expansion and one other.
Sort of a weak game with a weak toss.
Oh, and work on the detail in your writing a little.
(just trying to be constructive, this report wasn't that bad at all)
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| #11 probe[50029] |
| 242849hfc212.tampabay.rr.com |
| ahhhhhhieeeeeee toss sucked mad ghoat:) |
| #12 Heartcutter[50034] |
| activer-2.ussntc.savvis.net |
Good report. Your reports will get better as you make more. Keep up the good work.
-HC |
| #13 Gob_DaBong[50042] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
Toss wasn't bad but he just couldn't keep up with the brisk pace of the terran player who was very sharp.
Also he got very careless in the later stages of the game. |
| #14 Viper$[50043] |
| spider-tf052.proxy.aol.com |
<P ALIGN=center>I thought the writing was good
It was easy to follow
The colors were hard to read
The game seemed pretty intense w/few stopping points
You did leave out some tech info
Pictures were nice
Put some humor into the report
It's all good when terrans win 'cause
<P ALIGN=left><font size=20><font color="red">T</font><font color="blue">e</font><font color="white">r</font><font color="yellow">r</font><font color="green">a</font><font color="purple">n</font><font color="aqua">s</font> <font color="orange">o</font><font color="lime">w</font><font color="silver">n</font> |
| #15 <font color="669999">person</font>[50098] |
| 1Cust220.tnt2.lax1.da.uu.net |
| <font color="669999">i thought it was kinda weird that the protoss player didn't walk all his dragoons up to the siege tanks when they had no support. He could have more goons left than he had died if he did with or without the reaver. anyways this was a good improvement from your last br.</font> |
#16  [50118] |
| as530046.infocom.com |
Good report with good screenshots.
The only advice I have to offer is don't put blue text on a black background.
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Dref |
| #17 Heartcutter[50186] |
| activer-1.ussntc.savvis.net |
Oh, and the terran player played one hell of a game. He got out-resourced by about 6k. Damn! That is one hell of a resource disadvantage to fight your way back from.
All I'm eluding to is that there is a serious problem with the terran economic model, and that 1.08 sure as shit better address it.
-HC |
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