| #1 Dialtone_[48712] |
| athe530-p171.otenet.gr |
| um yeah i guess i'm 1st |
| #2 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[48713] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Damn
I was so close. AND I READ IT FIRST
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| #3 Dialtone_[48714] |
| athe530-p171.otenet.gr |
| Bah,i read it myslef,i'm the fastest reader around these places! |
| #4 Zasz147[48715] |
| 94.new-york-63-64rs.ny.dial-access.att.net |
100 pages>30 minutes.
:P |
| #5 Zasz147[48716] |
| 94.new-york-63-64rs.ny.dial-access.att.net |
100 pages>30 minutes.
:P |
| #6 Dialtone_[48717] |
| athe530-p171.otenet.gr |
| Bah,3 out of 5 comments > everyone |
| #7 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[48718] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Oh, oops forgot to comment.
Eeeem, I have a question for you.
What the f*ck are you doing in nohunters when you
a) look for newbies
b) play like that
It sounded good at the start with sane build like 8-ovie 10 pool (though 9 pool is better, start it before ovie is done) and second hatch at ramp, <i>until</i> I read the sunken thing. HOW MANY did you make? <b><i>12?</i></b>
Phew, sorry for being harsh, now onto the BR.
<ul>
<li>Don't center your text
<li>WTF is it with the share vision stuff? I can't think of a reason to share vision with your opponent.
<li>The burrowed zerg trap was funny (if I understood it correctly...)
<li>This BR confused me. What was happening???
<li>Try to be more descriptive of what happens. The game lasted more than an hour, while your BR was like 75(?) lines. Seems short to me...
<li>Get better at Starcraft before you make more BR's
</ul>
I give this a
<font color=blue size=5>3.5</font>
Phoenix |
| #8 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[48719] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Oh, oops forgot to comment.
Eeeem, I have a question for you.
What the f*ck are you doing in nohunters when you
a) look for newbies
b) play like that
It sounded good at the start with sane build like 8-ovie 10 pool (though 9 pool is better, start it before ovie is done) and second hatch at ramp, <i>until</i> I read the sunken thing. HOW MANY did you make? <b><i>12?</i></b>
Phew, sorry for being harsh, now onto the BR.
<ul>
<li>Don't center your text
<li>WTF is it with the share vision stuff? I can't think of a reason to share vision with your opponent.
<li>The burrowed zerg trap was funny (if I understood it correctly...)
<li>This BR confused me. What was happening???
<li>Try to be more descriptive of what happens. The game lasted more than an hour, while your BR was like 75(?) lines. Seems short to me...
<li>Get better at Starcraft before you make more BR's
</ul>
I give this a
<font color=blue size=5>3.5</font>
Phoenix |
| #9 Dialtone_[48722] |
| athe530-p171.otenet.gr |
| Stop double posting!you make my spam look less like ...ehm..like spam |
| #10 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[48724] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Hehe
Sorry, never happened to me before...
I was just too late hitting the stop button :( |
| #11 Zasz147[48725] |
| 94.new-york-63-64rs.ny.dial-access.att.net |
To phoenix:
1.Only about 7 or so Sunkens, so there.
2.Take the Html and uncenter it. It SUX.
3.They were Newbies, they do stupid things lke sharing vision.
4.Thanks, the trap was amusing, and I think he'd do it again if i needed him to.
5.I thought it was short to, but i have a habit of getting to the point.
6. I never really won before. Oh and it was a 2v1 later on... this is a major improvement for me.
7. FINALLY Newbies hang out in NoHunters, because its so highly publicized.
-Zasz147
P.S. I said how many Sunx i made in the BR. Look harder. |
| #12 Dialtone_[48732] |
| athe530-o181.otenet.gr |
| hehe,you though i was gone didnt you? |
#13  [48733] |
| a1-1c041.neo.rr.com |
I don't like the centering, it just looks weird. *shrug*
It was almost as tough to read as someone who doens't use paragraphs at all as a result.
I don't want to rain on your parade either, but a little difficult to follow. (good thing we have a variety of raters, because well written gets a better rating from me than graphics sometimes)
But it wasn't terrible either. Find another game, don't center the text (you can center the titles and stuff), and it'll look a lot nicer.
5. |
| #14 Zasz147[48736] |
| 63.new-york-76-77rs.ny.dial-access.att.net |
| Wow. I've seen people get 2's. THIS IS GREAT! Thanks 4 the tips. |
| #15 <font color="#FF0000">Twip</font><font color="#452622">[48737] |
| port-4-40-56k.gallipolis.zoomnet.net |
<font color="#FF0000" size="2" face="Arial">Dialtone has too much freetime. So do I. :)
I'm sorry, but I won't comment on this. I just can't think of much good to say. Well, it wasn't on Temple... |
| #16 Dialtone_[48742] |
| athe530-o181.otenet.gr |
| Twip i got more freen time than you can imagine comment #6 btw |
| #17 BW-sux[48750] |
| spider-wa063.proxy.aol.com |
This wasn't all that good. Maybe you should align the text to the left next time.
5
BW-sux |
| #18 Dialtone_[48751] |
| athe530-o181.otenet.gr |
| umm,ok ok,i got a comment too.Umm,i really liked the title. |
| #19 `~DarKnight~'[48756] |
| ppp-190.tnt-1.nwk.smartworld.net |
no pics, no humor, turtler, same ol' burrowed lings trick, too short, sharing vision, then saying that newbies just like to share vision, even though u said that u and mattias were sharing vision, idiots that left sharing vision on...
3
only cuz it had 1/100 of html in it. |
| #20 Dialtone_[48758] |
| athe530-o181.otenet.gr |
| I'm still here,dont think i'm gone cuz i'm not gone i'm around and i am still here so dont tyhink i'm gone ok? |
| #21 DaRk_BerZerKer[48772] |
| d17-kt01-ktnr-pdi.attcanada.net |
what you dont know dialtone_ is that i have been here longer than even your self
mwhahahahaa |
| #22 ~PL~CloudStrife[48794] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
I ditto all who commented. I will not comment. NEWBIE LOSERS GET OUT OF NOHUNTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!! GGGGGGRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!! X'Ds'grrrr... SHOULD COME AND TEACH YOU A LESSON! There I'm done.
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| #23 Dialtone_[48838] |
| athe530-q186.otenet.gr |
| I'm pretty sure you thought i was gone this time ^_^ |
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