| #1 FAGBOY[47509] |
| wmprt-cach1.blazenet.net |
1st COMMENT!
You need to check over spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Sentences like, "After my despite loss..." are not acceptable. What does that mean anyway?
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| #2 max[47512] |
| mkc-31-246-115.kc.rr.com |
| Hrrrrrrrrrmmmmmm, well, good try atleast |
| #3 JoeBlow[47513] |
| PPPa60-ResaleNorfolk4-4R7123.saturn.bbn.com |
| So that's what happens when two newbies go at it.... |
| #4 Master-chef[47514] |
| 98AA9C8A.ipt.aol.com |
So-so report. It was very detailed but the grammer and spelling needs some work (like FAGBOY has pointed out alrdy)
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Chef |
| #5 probe[47524] |
| 242849hfc161.tampabay.rr.com |
umm, do you pay partial attention to other reports here?
SERIOUS reports on BGH are fucking-gay.
humours reports (such as prozerrans and nobodies) are cool.
you are just stupid:(
play on a real map like rivarly/dire (not temple because that's just as bad as bgh) |
| #6 BW-sux[47539] |
| spider-wm082.proxy.aol.com |
I really don't think BGH reports should get more than 5's, although the enter and period keys were used.
Play on real maps plz.
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BW-sux |
| #7 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[47542] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Hmmmm
Before you do another BR:
<ul>
<li>Learn English
<li>Learn how to play Starcraft
<li>Forget what BGH means
<li>Discover the beauty of Dire Straits
<li>Forget Carriers & Arbiters except for really long games
<li>Learn how to play Starcraft
<li>Learn English
</ul>
Well, when you've done that I might give you more than a
<font color=blue size=5>2.5</font>
Phoenix |
#8  [47543] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
Well 1st off if you ever want to have success reporting to this site you need to get better at Starcraft. Upgrading attack and then warping Gateways just won't do it.
Also when you opponent is tank pushing you with less then 10 tanks and a handfull of MM during late game on BGH. That just won't work with the ppl who read these.
Get better. Also you grammar could use a little work. Try reading some of the HOF reports if your a 1st timer. You would be surprised the tips you can pick up from them. I read them all the time myself and find things everyday that can help me with writing reports.
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Fox^1 |
| #9 TheCabbit[47573] |
| bgm-24-94-57-110.stny.rr.com |
what went wrong:
1.) Wasn't very humorous (if you intend to do a BGH-report, make it funny)
2.) It WAS just that, BGH
3.) I never knew a squadron of UED troops was to be called a 'fleet'.
4.) It ended with carriers and arbiters
5.) Bad grammar?
If it was a first time, just chalk it up and do better on the next one.
Overall: 5 |
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