| #1 Bane[46514] |
| fcs01asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
| ^^ |
| #2 SlingsNArrows[46515] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
Bane! you stole my first comment! asdposijfposjzd
That's it! I take it back, Cynical Stands alone >:o) |
| #3 [46516] |
| spider-te063.proxy.aol.com |
| Yes!! top 5 |
| #4 PrincessCollsy[46517] |
| spider-wi072.proxy.aol.com |
Nice work. Way to keep it interesting with all the side jokes and stuff. It's more fun to read that way.
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| #5 Fox^1[46520] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
I enjoyed this all text report. It had a good amount of details, besides the game being Z vs Z it wasn't lacking at all. Good Job, learn some HTML and get a better game BRed and you're on your WAY!! It was still just an all text report that had a boring game.
7
Fox^1 |
| #6 SlingsNArrows[46523] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
Yeah, it was boring. But it's at a low level of the tourney too. I didn't think you'd get as much out of the later games I intend to post withoutthe background of what proselyte had already seen that night.
and as for learning html, I refuse! lol. I just want to find someone who already knows it so that we can team BR. |
| #7 N$aNe_E|ement[46524] |
| pri125.toledolink.com |
nice job, i'd like less humor tho lol
zerg on zerg games are boring tho :P but u made it interesting |
| #8 <marquee behavior="alternate"><font color="669999">person</font></marquee>[46526] |
| 1Cust26.tnt7.lax1.da.uu.net |
<font color="pink"> yes just learn html. when you learn html you can do things like
<marquee>this</marquee>
<marquee behavior="alternate">or like this</marquee>
so if you are willing to learn i will be glad to give you the link to my friends website to learn html.</font>
<font color="669999">p.s. he meant it nice and simple so there is not a whole lot of complicated stuff learn.</font> |
| #9 <font color="669999">person</font>[46528] |
| 1Cust4.tnt8.lax1.da.uu.net |
and by the way
nice job ^^ |
| #10 {t4r}KronosIII - Future Rater[46529] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
Who needs HTML with a writeing style like THAT?!?!?! Gosu!
-7.5 |
| #11 Limp_BIzkit666[46530] |
| 206.117.45.199 |
ARRRGGG, what is up with the sudden "rush" of people using "p.s"'s??
oh well...
anyways, just one major point.. "expand" is not a noun... the noun form is "expansion"... therefore, "expandless" is not even a word..... it just saddened me to see taht... if it was a joke, i'm laughing.. =]
hehe, i DID find some grammartical errors and spelling errors.. it is sad to hear you don't know any HTML.... go check on phiber~optik's html lessons from the "Reporting Guides" section on this site..
you could be better, but i gotta stick with a 7... although i feel more towards a 6, i think 7 is fair...
byeya
p.s-if you had put my name with Bane and Cynical, you would have gottan a 10! =] jk... |
| #12 SlingsNArrows[46537] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
Well, I was going with the culture on the expand thing. When you confront a new topic, you sometimes need to make new words. Hence, Slang is the whittling down of longer words.. such as expansion to shorter things like expand. Just a personal phrase. Sorry is it offended you, but I'll stick by it anyhow.
And yeah. my gammar sux :o( thanks to the rest of ya tho! I feel special. :o) |
| #13 Tariq[46538] |
| yul21.dialin.netaxis.ca |
Bane and Cynical?
How could you have missed Mark4 there? |
| #14 SlingsNArrows[46539] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| Heh, well mark4 no mere BR reporter. He is a Battle Report Necromancer! He doesn't merely write.. oh now, the flows of his words and graphics flow from his mind like.. the neato skittles in the skittle commercials where they all fall from thr sky! weeeee! besides, he is on my tao team. couldn't play favorites and I wanted controversy :o) |
| #15 Limp_BIzkit666[46540] |
| 206.117.45.199 |
oh, i wasn't aware of the slang...
no, it didn't "offend" me, but i was disturbed a little cause i thought you were doing it without knowledge..
since i know that you are doing it on PURPOSE, i can't stop ya..
byeya
p.s-yeah, work on it.. you have potentials... |
| #16 SlingsNArrows[46541] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| Heh, well mark4 no mere BR reporter. He is a Battle Report Necromancer! He doesn't merely write.. oh now, the flows of his words and graphics flow from his mind like.. the neato skittles in the skittle commercials where they all fall from thr sky! weeeee! besides, he is on my tao team. couldn't play favorites and I wanted controversy :o) |
| #17 MukoMole[46543] |
| 168.np9.np.dialup.nauticom.net |
| Hey Person.. Whats the site.. I wanna know! Hey Slings, All you need i think is some Pics.. Get yourself a quaint little program.. Capture the screen shots, edit them add text maybe, maybe add alittle bit of color.. And your there!! Maybe you could crop some of the pics so they aren't nation WIDE!! But your on your way! :-) |
| #18 <font color="669999">person</font>[46544] |
| 1Cust90.tnt8.lax1.da.uu.net |
<font color="669999">
well sling. you said to comment about bane and cynical being the best reporters. i would like to add .praetor to your list.
anyways <a href="anson.homepage.com> click here </a> to go to the site mukomole</font> |
| #19 MukoMole[46546] |
| 168.np9.np.dialup.nauticom.net |
<marquee behavior="alternate">Groooovvvyyy</marquee>
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| #20 Hey Person, Could you tell me that site of your friends?![46547] |
| 168.np9.np.dialup.nauticom.net |
| Please |
| #21 MukoMole[46549] |
| 168.np9.np.dialup.nauticom.net |
Im just loveing </td></tr><tr valign=top><td colspan=2 bgcolor=#452622><i>#9</i> <b><marquee behavior="alternate"><font color="669999">person</font></marquee></b>[46526]</td></tr><tr valign=top><td colspan=2><font color="pink">
<marquee>this</marquee> |
| #22 CynicalMagician[46550] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Thanks for the vote of confidence. Good BR though man, I like your writing. It was a bit of a wuss of a game, but as you said, it's 1st round. I can teach you how to do some basic HTML like colours and fonts etc, and also how to do images whenever you want. Look me up on ICQ at 24631249 or wordbird@home.com. I would prefer ICQ though because it allows you to put in the < and > without fear of it changing things to code. You've got hella potential with your writing.
As for slang, you need to use adjectives as nouns more, and vice versa. You know, like "That's so totally chair!" and "Man, that's mint." |
| #23 BW-sux = wannabe rater...[46551] |
| spider-we031.proxy.aol.com |
IMO, the game itself was sorta one-sided, but the BR itself had many a funny part. This BR should at least get a random quote. Learn HTML, and this...
6
could be an easy 9 or 10.
6
BW-sux |
| #24 BW-sux[46552] |
| spider-we031.proxy.aol.com |
| Also, clean up your grammar. I forgot to put that in. |
| #25 <b><font color=yellow>Protophobic</font><b>[46562] |
| cm-24-161-0-73.nycap.rr.com |
The report was thorough, yet bland and unmemorable. Lack of html never helps.
4 |
#26  [46563] |
| as530015.infocom.com |
You people that are bitching about the grammar...
Care to give examples? I didn't have any problems getting through this report.
Nice job Slings... I would tell you what rating I would give you, but I'm not allowed... Let's just say its between a 1 and a 10... :-)
Keep up the good work...
Dref |
| #27 ::nobody::[46577] |
| dt0f4n84.san.rr.com |
Ok, for not mentioning me as one of the best BRers, i declare this an automatic 1!! hehe j/k
A nice text only report, you managed to make Z v Z somewhat interesting, which is a chore :P But the game wasn;t all that great.
I liked the humor and it wasnt too hard to follow either.
Overall, a nice job. Learn some HTML and make your pic work worthwhile! It takes like 2 mins to learn how to put a pic in :D
<b> 7</b> (to be honest,more like a 6.7, but that rounds up to a 7 :D)
Ciao!
Nobo |
| #28 Limp_Bizkit666[46582] |
| 206.117.45.118 |
dref, i wasn't bitching about grammar, if you were referring to me...
i just mentioned that i spotted a few.. i didn't mean to offend any raters by saying something like that, but if you want example, here are the ones i found..
1. "Proselyte.. a big name in star craft.", and few other fragments..
2. "Pro, stunning multitasker counter attacks with lings and takes his natural simultaneously. " and i think one other spot with a comma missing..
3. Usage of a verb, "expand" as a noun...
i think there were few more, but these were what i spotted..
i later found out that my grudge#3 was a slang, and i told him that i wasn't aware of that...
just those..
byeya
p.s-i didn't mean to sound like you were making mistakes EVERYWHERE... i just wanted to make you perfect... sorry. |
| #29 <font color="669999">person</font>[46595] |
| 1Cust28.tnt3.lax1.da.uu.net |
<font color="pink">
i think there might be something wrong with the comments section since everytime i try to put a link in my comment my comment gets messed up like comment #19 i didn't even type groovy. it was supposed to be a link to my friends site that mukomole and hey person could you please tell me the site of your freinds to go to. and afterwards i wasn't able to comment for somereason because the post comment section dissappeared. but anyways the site is anson.homepage.com and this time i am not attemping a link.
</font> |
| #30 Phoenix[46619] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Hehe.
It works, but I really wonder where it actually links to
Someone care to clarify why it ens up at
www.37.com???
Phoenix |
| #31 SlingsNArrows[46628] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
I admit, my grammar isn't perfect. If it was, I wouldn't still be going to english classes. I'll be sure to work on it.. or.. maybe I'll keep using my dot dot dots and just stick in pics so you don't see them enough to complain about. That's the ticket, I'll dazzle your eyes! Bwahahaha.
Anyways, my thanks to Cynical MAgician and Dialton who both offered their help. Limp, thanks for helping me out with the grammar. Kronos, thanks for helping me out with the ego. lol and the rest of you, thanks for bein cool. I'm kinda hurt that no one posted a porn comment under my BR. ::sigh:: |
| #32 Sp|nE[46630] |
| 207.239.12.200 |
writing style above average, no pics, not anything out of the ordinary in the game
6.5, 7 if im having a good day |
| #33 TZ[46641] |
| backproxy.inter.net.il |
Yes I knew posting metallica lyrics will make em delete all the spam posts .
I didnt but thank god anyway
Have a nice day
TZ |
#34  [46644] |
| strangers.bragg.army.mil |
| Person, you've fucked up two comment sections to the point where we have had to delete your comments so far. It takes as much work to delete a comment as a report for me and Johnny. If someone posted two spam reports.....well you get the picture. Either quit screwing around or test your stuff in a html testing forum before you post it here. |
| #35 Baxter-O'Bixby[46646] |
| adsl-63-195-119-107.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Mark must be pretty pissed... that first sentence of his is the most awkwardly constructed one I have ever seen. :) |
| #36 -=-Vicious-=-[46654] |
| 207-172-81-243.s243.tnt1.ptr.va.dialup.rcn.com |
lol, ::nobody:: does my fav online face ":D" :)! :DDDDDDD
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD :))))! |
| #37 Ashdate[46667] |
| nat208.65.mpoweredpc.net |
HTML isn't hard to learn, or at least the basics :) Plenty of references to places you can learn ti, so I'll leave that alone..
Generally, a very good BR writing style. Had the game been more exciting and back and forth this might have been one helluva BR to read.
7. |
| #38 SlingsNArrows[46711] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
<marquee>Well, thanks to Cynical, I think I have the beginnings of HTML down. At least, I hope so.</marquee>
Anyways, check out my first BR at <a>http://embark.to/Nexus</a>
And stay tuned, the next two games of the series are coming up! not that you really care... but I can pretend. Rate me damnit! |
| #39 S Warrior[46820] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
<html>
<body bgcolor=black>
<font color=purple>
<h3>
<marquee behavior=alternate>Hiya</marquee></font>
<p>
<p><marquee><font color=brown>hehehe</marquee></font>
<p>
<font color=white><marquee behavior=alternate>*wobbles*</marquee>
<p>
<font color=red><marquee> Annoying isn't it?</font></marquee>
<p>
<font color=yellow><marquee behavior=alternate>These things are kinda funny though </marquee></font>
<p>
<font color=green><marquee> Oh well I'm off finding a good game</marquee>
<p>
<font color=234892589234><marquee behavior=alternate> *Bounce Bounce* ( hehe solly couldn't help it )</marquee></font>
<p>
<font color=45387835985><marquee>You know this stuff gives me an idea for a br
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| #40 Joo[46837] |
| sdn-ar-013mokcitP147.dialsprint.net |
| please save us from all that is sane. a BR with that much marquee text?!? i dread the day. |
| #41 SlingsNArrows[46860] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
Heh, marquee text is neat.. yet astoundingly annoying. I got a 6 :o( Oh well, I'm sure it's what I deserved. I really had my hopes set on a seven though. Oh well, just in case MArk4 sees this, I am hoping that he will play proselyte some time this weekend so that I can BR. Heh... I figure it should be a good game if anything would be. So if anybody sees this, kindly let him know :o)
my icq is 72013111 and e-mail is Vinmail@aol.com is he wants to get in touch with me. thanks.
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| #42 <marquee behavior=scroll>MukoMole</marquee>[46864] |
| 73.np2.np.dialup.nauticom.net |
<marquee behavior=scroll>Hmmm Look at me go...</marquee>
Sorry if i messed your link up Person. Hey slings, If you want goto www.jasc.com They have a program called "Paint Shop Pro". Basically all it does, is alows you to capture screen shots, edit them, and convert them to .gifs or .jpg's , This might not sound familer now, but once you get ahold of pic's you will fly through it! You can download a demo of Paint Shop Pro for free.. And try it out! Im also hoping to make some BR's soon.. Be sure to check for them :-) Good Job.. Laterz |
| #43 Cockeater[46882] |
| spider-ta054.proxy.aol.com |
| This report made me so horny I jerked off 3 times |
| #44 ...[47628] |
| 209.127.79.93 |
| <marquee behavior=slide scrollamount=300><a href=porno.html><b><font color=yellow>xero</font></b></a></marquee> |
| #45 ...[47629] |
| 209.127.79.93 |
| <marquee scrollamount=300><a href=porno.html><b><font color=yellow>xero</font></b></a></marquee> |
| #46 SlingsNArrows[50926] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| <marquee scrollamount=300>that could cause seizures!</marquee.> |
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