| #1 -MaNiAcMaRiNe-[46047] |
| dialin254.eagle.ca |
sorry no pics. Doom- played awesome. U JOIN MY TEAM PLZ DOOM-?
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| #2 FAGBOY[46048] |
| wmprt-cach1.blazenet.net |
| Don't center all your text |
| #3 Mogalin[46049] |
| co853273-a.foti1.on.wave.home.com |
| Doom- must have played like shit if he's dumb enought to go 8 hatch :O |
| #4 PeonSanders[46050] |
| cm-24-25-141-199.nycap.rr.com |
Didnt like the centered text, and the game was really short on details... Doom- is getting to be gosu...
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| #5 Doom-[46052] |
| PPPa90-ResaleMilwaukee2-5R7227.saturn.bbn.com |
| I dont think i made hatch on 8? I usally make lord on 8 and hatch on 11. To bad no pics. I also snuk some lings by his bunker in kinda early and killed a few SCVs at his main. |
| #6 CynicalMagician[46057] |
| 24.69.48.13 |
Details man details! I want to know which marines are facing which way, thats how detailed I want it! Even if the battles are small, using only a few units, pump them up and make it seem like its a battle royale! I want those 6 zerglings (or whatever) to seem like they are the sole hope for the player, and that if they fail then the game is over! Even if none of this is true, BR's have to be exciting! Watch any hollywood conversion of fact to movie, they jam those babies full of plot. They have action, they are grandoise, they are exciting. It may not be quite the way the game went, but BR's are often 'based on a true story'. If you dont think you're writing the game in an exciting manner, then I guarantee that readers won't find it exciting either. You need to elaborate and basically bulk up your reports for the future, and you'll do fine. Sounds like a good game though.
-CynicalMagician |
| #7 Starookie[46058] |
| edtn009740.hs.telusplanet.net |
| sigh.....marine.....screens, my man screens! |
| #8 BW-sux[46091] |
| spider-ta057.proxy.aol.com |
Nice read. Better than the "BGH RULZ!!!!" spam we've been getting. And you didn't end it by saying "i got bored with this".
Pics woulda been nice tho.
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P.S.- Am I on your team yet?
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#9 [46098] |
| we-24-24-166-145.we.mediaone.net |
Not a bad report of a crappy game. How is it that terran didnt realize guards were coming?
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| #10 <b><font color=yellow>Protophobic</font><b>[46101] |
| cm-24-161-0-73.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>Did I do that aweful? Sheesh... |