| #1 Sharandar[42976] |
| 199.94.66.253 |
Well, if anyone thinks this is any good, or that I should bother finishing the story with some other Terran ownage, let me know. Just for the record, it was a 2v2 on Scorion Ravine. =P (in case that was glaringly obvious)
Sharandar |
| #2 Evil_The_Radish[42977] |
| pool0926.cvx6-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
| 2nd! woohoo!! |
| #3 HI[42979] |
| bc-kam-a53-01-49.look.ca |
| DO U THINK ELIAN GONZALEZ SHOULD GO BACK TO CUBA OR STAY AND PLAY BASEBALL FOR THE CUBS?????? |
| #4 illegal Ellian[42981] |
| pool0926.cvx6-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
| You know it, he should stay here and play for the Cubs. |
| #5 illegal Ellian[42982] |
| pool0926.cvx6-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
| You know it, he should stay here and play for the Cubs. |
| #6 ~Talon~[42983] |
| edtn009740.hs.telusplanet.net |
| Spines a fucking paki with bushy eyebrows |
| #7 Fox^1[42984] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
I have never been good at rating these kind of battle reports mainly because I don't know the storyline of SC very well. But it was decent, you have paragraphs, and your grammar was better then mine (Althought that's not much to write home about) But I wouldn't call it an actual battle report.
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Fox^1 |
| #8 Sharandar[42986] |
| 199.94.66.253 |
Well, it's not a REAL BR in teh standard sense, but that's what really happened in the game...a vulture drop, my ally said little-nothing early game (until he need help) and the terran enemy left the game once the protoss was wiped out. I jsut added a bit of...umm...color. Yeah =P.
Sharandar |
#9 [43094] |
| as530086.infocom.com |
Well I liked it. You should do a little proofreading, possibly a spell check as I'm not exactly sure what a "cust storm" is... ;-)
Really though, that was a nice report. I kinda got into it.
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Dref |
| #10 Khadgar[43560] |
| 1Cust25.tnt9.denver.co.da.uu.net |
| Nice... it WASN'T bad fictionl except for a few spelling errors at the beginning, it was quite nice... |