| #1 <font color="red"> Ko[B]ull <font color="white">[42727] |
| ppp-583.tnt-1.ind.smartworld.net |
| This fuxing sucked. Dont BR again =( |
| #2 Bane-The-Feared[42731] |
| acs00asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
Heh, don't be so harsh kobull. Go read my first BR =/
actually don't it's embarassing |
| #3 Random_Doom[42734] |
| 189-161.sg.cgocable.ca |
*hahem*
Well... humm... smaller screenshots, more HTML, WAYYYY more text, better layout, etc... etc... etc... blahblahblahblah...
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| #4 Limp_Bizkit666[42735] |
| 206.117.45.81 |
this wasn't a battle report..this was bunch of pictures..
=[
anyways, there was NO detail at all... you didn't even mentioned the map!
oh well... even for your first report, this sucked..i'm sorry..
if it was a joke attempt to make people laugh, it still sucked..i'm again, sorry..
PLEASE go read other 8, 9+ reports, and read the reporting guide.... otherwise, listen to Kobull...
byeya
p.s-HUK! HUK !HK!UH!H!UK!HUK!H!HHU!HU!HUHUK! |
| #5 lect[42736] |
| 64.13.55.77 |
| more text, smaller pics, more action, more details, more everything. |
| #6 Fox^1[42737] |
| inehou-pxy05.compaq.com |
Don't let these guys get you down. It is your 1st BR and I would say to try 1st to add more text about the game. LIke what map? What start posistions? stuff like that. Actually just wait till Drefsab rates it. He is always the best of giving good advice to bettering your BR's :)
Fox^1 |
| #7 Random_Doom[42738] |
| 189-161.sg.cgocable.ca |
| I was just giving her tips! |
| #8 Limp_Bizkit666[42739] |
| 206.117.45.176 |
fox = tooo optimistic... heheehehehehheh
byeya
p.s-you don't post as much, why? hehhehe |
| #9 Fox^1[42743] |
| inehou-pxy05.compaq.com |
Limp: Well I have been playing spades over the net lately. Sorry!!! I am sure you can post enough for the both of us!
Fox^1 |
| #10 ?????[42744] |
| cache1.gw.utexas.edu |
| it seemed like the game only lasted 3 min. And the build time for units/bldgs were incredibly fast. Work on some more detail. |
| #11 BW-sux[42746] |
| spider-tj051.proxy.aol.com |
This BR reminds me of Evil Eye Laser Man reports, just not a single bit funny.
4 |
#12  [42749] |
| as530044.infocom.com |
I'm going to have to echo the sentiments of my fellow commenters. Pics should be a supplement that helps the reader to visualize what you are writing about. Don't let your pics take over your report.
The Reporting Guide link on the side of the page can help you know what to look for when reporting.
Don't give up though, we've all gotta start somewhere... :-)
4
Dref |
| #13 [S]Ghost[42750] |
| dialin218.eagle.ca |
| Just a little better then my first BR. Just make pics smaller.(Only Concentrate on the action area or the area u are tryin to show, not the whole ground.) |
| #14 Fox^1[42763] |
| inehou-pxy06.compaq.com |
I forgot rate this BR. Like I said there is potential.
4.0
Fox^1 |
#15  [42786] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
hrm
a battle report is a piece of art that you explain exactly what's going on in a game to people who do not know anything about it. Your goal should be leading your readers so visualize the game, from the beginning till the end. Keep this goal in mind when you're writing a report. |
| #16 Tariq[42796] |
| 198.168.49.221 |
| Poor Poor WOW!! |
| #17 Gob_DaBong[42808] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
Yeah um waht the fux happened,well he had a base. Then suddenly he has being contained, but then he had 6 exps already then guardians and lurkers blew up the bunkers and the game ended.
Kool ;)
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| #18 Aquamarine[42850] |
| cthulhu.static.shore.net |
| I like the first pic where the medic goes wandering off; what happened to her?? probably a grisly death.... |
| #19 {EkT}~Unibrow[42965] |
| KRLDA010-0231.splitrock.net |
Well, at least you tried. I thought it was cool because the pictures were SOOO BIG!! And the text was SOOO SMALL!!
*Sigh* I'm just trying to be encouraging because I'm such a nice person. |
| #20 -=-Dr.J-=-[43119] |
| adsl-207-105-255-146.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
Bah... this was my game. And i would know...
He didnt use any detail, nor mention the method of attack or how many. it was a good game... he dint even mention how i attacked all his expansions etc. totally a bad report, and a game that lasted 30 mins + not good at all. |
| #21 Friendly~Fire[43905] |
| cc326114-b.hwrd1.md.home.com |
| <font color=yellow>YOU SUCK</font> |
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