| #1 Phoenix-S-[42373] |
| r-174.187.alltel.net |
| Okay securing my 1st. |
| #2 Phoenix-S-[42374] |
| r-174.187.alltel.net |
| Okay, I know a lot of people will complain about the length, but let me explain. The temple is not a novel, but a novella, or a rather long short story. It will be released in chapters, that compaired to works such as .Praetor's, will be comparatively short. In the end, there will most likely be about 20-25 chapters at most. |
| #3 shockwave[42491] |
| exchange1.sensable.com |
You should really put this through a spell checker. It is a simple step that will drastically cut down on your errors and encourage people to take your efforts more seriously. Otherwise, people may just write off your work as being done in haste, whereas I'm sure it was not.
Another suggestion - put hotlinks at the end of your stories so people going directly to your other chapters. This will become particulary critical if you really are going to provide 20+ chapters. It's a nice convenience for your readers so they don't have to figure out how to spell "p|-|3arm3" in the search engine. In the time it took you to write the instructions at the end, you could have just typed in the hyperlink instead.
Cool, keep it up. |
| #4 Baxter-O'Bixby[42493] |
| mangalore.CS.Berkeley.EDU |
| 25 chapters? I'd recommend a bit of consolidation... save up about 5 chapters and release them as one. It'll be easier on the reader, especially those of us with slow connections who don't want to hit 25 hyperlinks to read the story. :) |
| #5 FuRyEDge[42509] |
| ground-iguana.ics.uci.edu |
| i second shockwave's motion of a spell checker. other than that, cool. =o) |
| #6 Khadgar[42641] |
| 1Cust61.tnt13.denver.co.da.uu.net |
I third the motion for a spell checker.
Where is Chapter 1? I did an Author Search, and I came up with 3 SC reports by you, but no "THe Temple chapter 1..."
--Khadgar |
| #7 <font color=yellow><b>Protophobic</b></font>[93255] |
| cm-24-169-216-188.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow><b>christpower |
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