| #1 probe[36682] |
| 242849hfc71.tampabay.rr.com |
i guess adding comments is broke, cuz this has been up for like 5 minutes and still no comment
bleh |
| #2 probe[36683] |
| 242849hfc71.tampabay.rr.com |
or the report completely and utterly sucked, as i just found out
man, every pic with text had you talking in it...
too many pics, pictures too big, included unnessecary things in picture (such as bottom menu bars, etc) the pics were way blurry too...... and ouch i just stubbed my toe....... *screams*
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| #3 probe[36684] |
| 242849hfc71.tampabay.rr.com |
| oh yah, i'd give it a 6 : |
| #4 Bane-The-Feared[36685] |
| acs00asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
| Hehe, I've never heard anyone complain about too many pictures. |
| #5 probe[36690] |
| 242849hfc71.tampabay.rr.com |
u must be new here :)
that's good though, as long as the site is lively. and not dying down... tho i do long for the old days when having a new report to read was like a jewish holiday... =)
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| #6 Microman[36691] |
| zoom.starwon.com.au |
Um, its easy to bunk a double hatch.... sheesh.
You just gotta go 8 rax 9 depot and then bunk and rax. Silent-strike does it lots and I've had a bit of success with it aswell.
I found the report a bit, well...., it was just:
He built this
He built that
He did this
He did that.
Try forming your sentences a bit differently.
Microman |
| #7 Microman[36692] |
| zoom.starwon.com.au |
Um, its easy to bunk a double hatch.... sheesh.
You just gotta go 8 rax 9 depot and then bunk and rax. Silent-strike does it lots and I've had a bit of success with it aswell.
I found the report a bit, well...., it was just:
He built this
He built that
He did this
He did that.
Try forming your sentences a bit differently. 7.
Microman |
| #8 Microman[36693] |
| zoom.starwon.com.au |
| grr. double clicking sucks :( |
| #9 WilliamWC3[36696] |
| huru27.wuh.wustl.edu |
| This report was pretty good. A couple of pieces of advice though. Like Microman said you should definitely mix up your sentence structure and work on your writing. Also try to form paragraphs more. By the way, you can take more than 99 screen shots if you move them into a different directory. good luck. |
| #10 :+:HaVoK:+:[36699] |
| sdn-ar-001nypougP105.dialsprint.net |
| I give it a 6.5 |
| #11 <font color=red> Kosher_man </font color=red>[36710] |
| clt92-181.carolina.rr.com |
| Probe what Jewish holiday would you be refering to hmmmmm ohh yes and i agrre the pics where bad because the blur i think jack should get a new moniter |
| #12 Jack9[36725] |
| pool0033.cvx14-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
Couple clarifications,
I take the pics and convert them from pcx to jpg thru photoshop, and made them minimum quality to increase load time.
I was only interested in the build orders of these two.
This report gives a detailed look an what each person did with the units and resources they had, I dont go for the "he pushed in with marines but was forced to retreat". That doesnt tell me exactly what Jad thought he could attack with, or what happened at all IMHO.
I prefer he built this, he built that, for educational purposes ^^ |
#13  [36785] |
| fjwilson.reshall.ucsd.edu |
| I rather enjoyed it. |
| #14 Bane-The-Feared[36792] |
| 205.152.18.11 |
I'm FAIRLY new here, but I'm not new to SC...
I was just kinda defending him cuz you can tell he put a lot of time into it. But you're right, the pics are blury. |
| #15 anal-banana[36807] |
| ns2.bridge.com |
| I for one liked this report! It was easy to read, and the flow of the game followed very nicely. |
| #16 Talon[36926] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| Praetor gives this a 9 and william's BR a 7 =[ |
| #17 Dausuul[37078] |
| moola.tcom.purdue.edu |
Aggressive play with Terran vs. Zerg is just fine. Terrans kick Zerg ass if played right. There were two reasons Jad died:
1. Failure to multitask/micro. To play Terrans right, you have to get used to doing lots of stuff at once, and you MUST micromanage your troops properly.
2. He let Medics outresource him two to one. Terrans have comsat, vultures, spider mines, and cloaked wraiths. They have no excuse for not knowing when the enemy expands. And when the enemy expands, you either expand to match him, or you march in and kill the expansion. Anything else is asking to die. |
| #18 Dausuul[37115] |
| moola.tcom.purdue.edu |
| BTW, the previous post was not to imply that I am capable of doing either of the things I mentioned. (Well, I do usually know when the enemy expands, but stopping him is something else again.) |
| #19 I Hate Medics[37143] |
| ss6-10.inre.asu.edu |
This report was fun to read! I liked it.. And not only because I was in it.. Hehe..
I didn't know you were going BR it..
Personally I like your style.. It was much fun, and it told me exactly what was happening..
Oh yeah, I usually do go hacth on 9.. Only when I'm in the gay 12 spot, I don't do that. :(
I like early expansions. :D
Medics' |
| #20 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[37202] |
| 139.57.128.225 |
Well, this report was OK but . . .
a NINE?!?!?!?!!!
Check out the other reports that got a 9, or even an 8, and see the difference.
I agree with the comments above, esp Microman, Probe goes over the top as usual, I'd give it a 7.
Not bad for a first post! Try and add some emotion tho, and make the ending uncertain until the end. Also crop pics and MAKE COLLAGES. |
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