"We all know the bengalaas is the most noble beast in existance!"
-Johnny_Vegas
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| #1 SqueakyMonkey[32550] | | osh1-618.twcny.rr.com | | First comment! I own. | | #2 [z]RubberDucky[32551] | | dfiatx106-090.dsl.gtei.net | *sighs*
He tried to link all his pix from his harddrive. | | #3 Pika[32552] | | ppp9059.on.bellglobal.com | | ya, its sad =] | | #4 SqueakyMonkey[32553] | | osh1-618.twcny.rr.com | | LOL! | | #5 Sp|nE[32566] | | dialup0555-pri.voicenet.com | | amusing | #6  [32570] | | | Got a question for all you people that used to be morons =]. For anyone who ever tried that, does it show you the pictures when you use preview since it's your hard drive they are on? | | #7 SqueakyMonkey[32573] | | osh1-618.twcny.rr.com | | I just tried it for the hell of it, and yes, it does work. | #8  [32815] | | 136.2.1.101 | | I applaud your attempt to write in your non-native language. Feel free to ask for a native English speaker to edit your writing before you post. I would be happy to volunteer. | | #9 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[33396] | | gateway.ncdsb.com | OK bboy, as promised I've commented =)
To get pics on the report what I do is upload them all to my geocities file manager. Works everytime.
The writing was really quite good, although be careful to avoid repetitions. Also, you might want to add some humour, since this was sort of dry.
What's more, this game was too predictable; if you're going to breport something make sure it's long, involves reasonably high tech units and isn't all one way. In my first pic report which bombed ( =] ), the game was one directional, but I managed to edit things so I sort of gave the appearance of me winning at first and then being crushed.
Well, all in all, I'd say you show good promise. GJ.
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